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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 10 2009 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Law of Nature

Hmmm! Sounds like she's becoming a lot like Melissa from "Bugman Games."

Reviewer: 8cm50 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2009 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Law of Nature

i love this becoming. i hope for a sequel ! thanks.

Author's Response: I'm happy to have finally done justice to you by adding another segment to the story. Cheers

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