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Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2020 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

While this reads like a translated work, it is still fully engaging and definitely interesting. Your memoir style prose certainly brings you more fully into the story.

I'm interested in seeing more.



Author's Response:

If you want to find an excuse within the story itself, you may think that it is read as a translation since it's a translation from Spanish to English by a Spanish woman who has been speaking in Aekun for almost 20 years, being the only moments where she spoke again in Earth languages with her Spanish-Italian family.

 

Honestly I am very sorry if any part is difficult to read, I will try to correct the text more write more part of it in english directly nex time.

 

I'm glad you are interested enough to comment and thanks for the score!

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