[Report This]Date: September 22 2020 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Loren's exit, and Mrs. Samson and friends
Still loving the story, great update!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: September 22 2020 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Loren's exit, and Mrs. Samson and friends
Good to see that the app seems to work, now I'm waiting for Brett's bug reports :D
Not sure what to write because, as promising as Mrs Samson looks, the fact that is mom is there AND Cindy & Melissa are coming makes guesses etc difficult; tnx for taking care of the growth tag btw.
PS
If you end up following the advice to write on the wattpad, please please please write ALSO here!
Author's Response:
Haha, Loren wouldn't give him an app that didn't work at all - but there may be some bugs to work out :P
If I'm keeping you guessing then at least I'm not making it too predictable. XD
Date: September 20 2020 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Loren's exit, and Mrs. Samson and friends
Lots of juicy backstory here I love like the ShrinkProtect app, the shrinkee legislation or the stigma associated with willing shrinkees. Nice details with how the app only detects when someone is initially shrunk so far, but isn't going to do much once they are already shrunken. Plenty of room for fraud in that someone might develop a seperate app to block the safety check or something of that nature or hack it somehow.
With lots of drinks involved, looks like Brett is really in for quite a long day indeed. Seems to me that Cindy and maybe Melissa will be quite eager to make use of his tiny services while they can, based on how pricey it is. Hopefully he still gets to enjoy some brisket too, albeit at his tiny size :D
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: September 20 2020 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Loren's exit, and Mrs. Samson and friends
Loved the (mostly aftermath) scenes of Loren and Brett and his thoughts on having brought her to orgasm.
It's a good idea showing Loren's anxiety and worries over her feelings for Brett and vice versa, it's a realistic scenario I'd say that she is now taking a step back out of concern, be it for Brett himself (in her mind thinking it's probably best) or herself.
Be that as it may, I am hoping Brett and Loren wind up together in the end still, there is so much connections between them already, they just need to trust in one another, which is admittiedly hard for Loren given her backstory, but I'm hoping they do wind up together.
Now, speaking of Mrs Samson, some great dialogue and interaction there, I love her having some wide size 11's, and subgecting Brett to them.
It was kind of surreal reading his mother being in the room while he's lapping away at Katie's toe-jam buffet XD But the atmosphere is definitelty one fit for some mischief and teasing, mature women drinking and having a tiny guy in the midst, definitely potential for fun at their feet.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
It is easy to write Nancy as I also had a very tumultuous relationship with my mother and if you accept the premise of the world so far, her logic, I can promise you, is very much realistic. I hope I'm making the motivation clear that she is not personally amused by the things that other people are doing with Brett and definitely has no attraction to her own son. But she acts under the belief that it's his fault and he should be refusing to continue with the program. She sees his performance as basically akin to prostitution with her own friends and colleagues. Now, if he chose to break his contract at this point, they'd have to get Brett out of Westwood, and Nancy would have to quit her job. So he's made it hard for her either way, and it makes her very upset with and unsympathetic to him.