Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2020 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

WARNING: THE FOLLOWING COMMENT CONTAINS SPOILERS OF SOME STORY EVENTS SO FAR.

Another brilliant chapter. It gave marvellous interactions betwen Anabelle, Harper and Naomi.

More and more we get glimpses of individual traits of each giantess through Anabelle eyes. And if they all seem in control, Naomi dialogues let it clear they are not as powerfull and as free as they want their "Poppy" to believe they are.

The "goddesses" have social and family expectations and if you ask me, it's preety clear this entire shrinkee torture is the result of each individual need to feel in control.

Harper is sexually and emotionally frustrated - she wanted to date Anabelle but never worked up the courage to even know her, so she planned to make her crush helpless and vulnerable. All in all, she is a coward, too afraid to get close on an emmotional level.

Than there is Naomi, who keeps a facade of punk-rock girl because others think that is cool, but really likes girly stuff and just want to let herself out. Being a coward as well, she is only able to do that with a shrinkee and as part of the sadistic group of Leah.

The problem is most shrinkees don't get to survive long enough. Even Harper was planning, at the begginig, to just get one off and kill Anabelle. But that is not the case anymore, Anabelle can survive and become their own permanently, wich means one of them will get to live her fantasy even away from the group. Someone gets to be Anabelle goddess for life, even at home and day to day life.

This chance is bound to bring competition, distrust and trouble as each individual desire and plans start to arise. It's what we have been seeing on these chapters but with no escalation.

So far their wasn't too much presure to crack the group because everyone would lose, but I am very curious to see how each giantess will react to a new Poppy, submissive and devoid of personality. Will everyone like? Will their atttude change and why?

As the story is, I think there are plenty of ways and plots that can be explored.

The giantess will meet Anabelle parents once more, and I am guessing she will still be in that sorry slave state of mind (Poppy in control). I wonder if learning more about how Anabelle life was before all this will raise some simpathy from some as well as annoy others.

Maybe not everyone will want to meet with Anabelle parents, but for apearances sake Leah, Harper and Naomi go, while Molly stays to keep Poppy company (they  are not taking any risks after this phone test or maybe Poppy strange behavior will worry them... I don't know! Too many possibilities here LOL). 

I believe this is a turning point, but there is still plenty of story to tell. As it stands, the protagonist has no chance of escaping without the help of at least one captor. The question is how to humanize the giantesses as well as humanize Anabelle to them.

All this is just me guessing and making assumptions. You, my good sir, have made a very compelling group of villainess. But I believe no one is 100% evil and now I am curious to see how you will develop each one on individual level. Now seems to be the perfect time - Anabelle is out of the picture with a mental breackdown, the group will obtain what it wanted all along - Poppy - so... what about what each captor had in mind?

Again, sorry for the long review and any misspelling. Your story and characters are just too compelling and I wrote this in a hurry.

Marvelous work! Thanks for sharing and, please, more!!

Author's Response:

Well Mr in A Suit, you definitely are an observant one. You've made some great observations and very entertaining predictions. Of course, I can't speak to their accuracy, but nonetheless they are very interesting to read. I love your in-depth analysis. It makes me feel great that there's someone out there paying attention to the little clues and details I insert into the text. Thanks for the review!