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Reviewer: Shrinkwolf Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2020 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

A few grammar errors, but other than that looking good. I'm interested to see where you take it from here.



Author's Response:

Thx!
Yeah I know, english is not my first language. I try my best with the grammar, but knowing the rules is hard sometimes.

More will come!

Reviewer: GentleFan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 14 2020 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

It's off to a good start. Playful teasing from a sister that can shrink him to nano sizes sounds like fun!



Author's Response:

Thx!
And yes, Ensley loves to have fun with her brother!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2020 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good stuff



Author's Response:

Thx!
Glad you like it!

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