Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2021 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

That he speaks and she hears different words is one of my favorite ideas EVER.

That being said, the story looked awesome even before you revealed that detail :D

Author's Response:

It gives this one a little bit of a spin. There's definitely intended to be a heavy theme of frustration for the protagonist and reader there

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2021 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm curious if he's been shrunk in his world or is trapped in another one. It is pretty strange that even at three inches, Sarah can'tunderstand him when he's shouting. I wonder if someone else that discovers him or Sarah reveals him to will have the same difficulty understanding him. Heck if he gets a chance with a loose pen or pencil could he maybe write a message? Sarah said she wants him to be happy, but all she's done is playfully torment him. Would him having a full breakdown; either sobbing uncontrollably or becoming still and unresponsive, convince Sarah or a friend that something's wrong and maybe he isn't happy or alright in his situation? 

Author's Response:

This story or the sequels don't really answer what's real or not, but it's probably more likely another version of his world. It's actually not that Sarah can't understand what he's saying, but that she's literally hearing different words come out of him, again for reasons that don't really get answers. In future parts, there are other characters who might potentially "understand" differently, but mostly, the logic of this world is mean and designed to prevent escape.