So...  I'm just a little late getting this story out, and I first and foremost want to apologize for that.  Not only did this story grow much larger than I initially anticipated (now being over 10k words rather than the 5k I estimated), but since I've decided I wanted to use language-appropriate honorifics and titles with the characters in their nation, I had to learn a bit more about how the Chinese speak to one another... specifically that they have a unique honorific to use with your aunts, uncles, and grandparents depending on your relation to them.  Thankfully, the Chinese dub of Shenhe's character demo has Chongyun use the honorific I needed, but yeah, I was constantly going back and changing dialogue as I learned new things until I was satisfied with how they all talked to each other.  Hopefully, I'll have an easier time going forward ^^;