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Summary:

A young girl comes into posession of a jewelry case, entirely unremarkable sparing it's fascinating contents.

 

Been writing this one up for a while, so it will be the first story I will post in chapter format, seeing as it is yet to be finished. Also the first micro (as opposed to macro) story I've written, so do point out any incongruities or improvements I could make.

Would love to have comments, reviews, and critique. Thanks.


Rated: R
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Lesbians, Odor, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 20967 Read: 175595
Published: June 16 2014 Updated: June 28 2016

1. Chapter 1: Awakening Pleasures by BillMann [Reviews - 24] starstarstarstarstar (2079 words)

2. Chapter 2: Dainty Malevolence by BillMann [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (864 words)

A bit of a bridge chapter, this is where I had written up to as of posting it, so the rest will be entirely new content that I am liable to take suggestions on.

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3. Chapter 3: Into Turbulent Sea by BillMann [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (1246 words)

I think updating in smaller, more topical and managable chapters is the way to go. Lets me update more regularly and respond to user feedback better. Sound good?

4. Chapter 4: A Game of Shark by BillMann [Reviews - 0] (1173 words)

This is the first time I've really ventured into the realm of teasing or humiliation in any of my stories. Usually it's not my speed, but I felt it was just unavoidable and too good to resist for such a scene. Do tell if I managed to capture the essense of such an absurd concept. 

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5. Chapter 5: Two Kinds of Shark by BillMann [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarhalf-star (960 words)

Sorry for the bit of a delay with this one, been feeling sick for a while. There will probably be another bit of a delay after this one, but after that I intend to get back to writing more regularly. Thanks for the patience. 

6. Chapter 6: Hot Bath. by BillMann [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarstar (1037 words)

Sorry for the immense delays, working on another story and various other things. Got some inspiration to continue this into it's next segment, so expect me to put out more updates for this story as well!

 


 

 

7. Chapter 7: Her Friends by BillMann [Reviews - 0] (657 words)

8. Chapter 8: Sharing by BillMann [Reviews - 0] (837 words)

9. Chapter 9: Friendly Suggestion by BillMann [Reviews - 2] (1070 words)

10. Chapter 10: A Passion In Common. by BillMann [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (1690 words)

11. Chapter 11: More Than Just A Hug by BillMann [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (1490 words)

Been a while since I wrote. Felt the story needed to be finished, so I will see to writing it through to the end. As always, comments appreciated.

 


 

12. Chapter 12: Not Quite Home by BillMann [Reviews - 0] (1711 words)

Been too long- but I want to give this story the end it deserved. Gonna try and put out a few more chapters with some real raunchy stuff.


13. Chapter 13: A Challenge by BillMann [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarhalf-star (1299 words)

I just want to thank everyone for the compliments and feedback I got on this and my other works lately- it validates me to know how much strangers enjoyed my writings about giant butts. 

There should be atleast a few more good chapters to write in this story!

 


 

14. Chapter 14: A Snack by BillMann [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (1154 words)

Was an interesting chapter to write. The real lewd stuff picks up after this!

 

15. Chapter 15: Intimacy by BillMann [Reviews - 0] (1774 words)

Finally got to write another chapter! I know it's been ages but I wanted to write this when I felt motivated. Gonna try to get a lot of good stuff into it in the last few chapters! As always comment and leave ideas or criticism in the reviews!

 


 

16. Chapter 16: Together Now by BillMann [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (1926 words)