Precious Little Demons by Sterben Klein, Franchise Writer

[Reviews - 84]

1. Fated meetings by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 22] (4713 words)

Hello all, i am new to writing and wanted to try my hand at it after reading many stories on this site. I've seen many stories here but not many use the philia's i enjoy personally. So, i hope you all like what i have so far.

Fare warning, this story is going to get very direct and very dirty fast. Contains Underage content and i wrote the characters in mind with anime characters i like, but if you want to imagine them regular, be my guest.

Special thanks to Franchise Writer for reading my story and chapter's ahead of time to help with my grammer, english is not my first language, and he did a lot to make it more readable.

Enjoy.

2. Welcome to the Club by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 0] (2976 words)

I'm happy to see such good reviews. I was worried there would be someone who didn't like it. For the person who asked me what Claire looks like, i apologize for not giving a better discription.

Claire is 18 years old. She has light brown hair, and B-Cup breasts. She has dark brown eyes and a light skin tone. Her clothes she wore into the Daycare were a pair of light blue jeans and a white t-shirt. While she was working she had on roughly the same thing, but instead of a white T-shirt it had on the Daycare's logo, which is a heart with their name on it.

I hope thats a better discription of her for you Simpson3k

Enjoy the chapter.

3. Let The Games Begin by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 2] (5106 words)

Alright, for this chapter, i wanted to give you a slight look into each girl. i know you guys probably have been waiting awile to see what they do, so i do hope you all enjoy.

4. What we are by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 1] (7667 words)

Hello, i'm back, kind of

I wanted to get this chapter out as soon as i could to give more information about Sophia and Alexis, maybe some more back story on what they can do and how they can do it.

This chapter will be a bit slow to start so i hope you can get into it and be patiant for the next chapter to come, it will be the one where the real fin begins.

 

5. Prove your worth by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 3] (7795 words)

Hello all, i'm back.

Sorry this took so long, i had trouble wording it how i wanted so i had my friend help me type it up. I think it looks good now.

I hope you all enjoy it as much as i did writing it.

 

6. Kat toy by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 2] (10413 words)

Hello all, i'm proud to give you the next chapter so soon!

Yea... did it all by myself... yea... ok i lied...

I want to thank Franchise Writer fro his help with this chapter. After i told him i wanted the next one to be up sooner then... well a month, he offered to help me with the plot, grammer, and writing... wait what did I do?

Never mind that... but if you don't like this chapter, remember it's his fault not mine :D

 

Franchise Writer: Dick... -.-

Me: <3

 

Enjoy!

 

7. Rewarding good behaviour by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 2] (8177 words)

I'm back again guys, thank you all for being patiant, i know this took a lot longer to make then last chapter. I can't promise the next one will come any quicker, F.R sadly has a few things he's doing himself so i can't crank them out begrudingly like i'd like to.

But i still have this chapter! so enjoy!

8. May-be this won't be so bad? by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 3] (8051 words)

Hello everyone, and i'm happy to be back.

I hope you guys didn't mind the long wait, i'm sorry about that but i had a lot of trouble with both school and writing this when i had time to.

I finally had to wait till i could get some help with it because the events for this chapter took me a long time to get set in the way i wanted. But after showing it off and reading it over a few... dozen times, i think it looks about right.

I hope you guys enjoy it to!

9. A wager between friend's by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 3] (8617 words)

Welcome back people, i hope the wait wasn't to bad this time. I tried to rush it a bit to hurry it along but after reading the original draft I... I was not impressed. So I started from scratch and I think this one's a winner.

But what do I know, it's your reviews that tell me if it's good or not :)

My storys only as great as you guys and galls make it.

So enjoy!

10. Broken chains... by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 4] (13632 words)

Welcome back everyone :D

First off i'm so sorry for such a long delay D:

I had this chapter done for a long time now... but i've changed it more times then i can count in all honesty. Kai is a hard character for me to write about because... i might be a bit biased towards her ;-;

But, after the original draft i made edits here, changes there, and finnaly got in touch with my proof reader for the green light :D

So, this might be a bit long, but enjoy none the less and tell me what you think!

I love the reviews i got last time, they were very informative so thank you guys.

 

ON WITH THE SHOW!

 

(Franchise Writer) " Never do that again... -.- "

11. Cut the cord... by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 5] (14061 words)

"twitches"

 

Looks at the paper, looks back smiling.

So... i might have pulled an all nighter... twice.

Welcome back so soon everyone :)

After i read all the amazing reviews i received last chapter... i knew i just had to post another one. I felt so much joy from reading what everyone wrote, i almost cried.

TwT

 

Anyways this chapter... yea it was hard. But thankfully i didn't have to go into it alone. I want to give a shoutout to Franchise Writer who stayed up with me all night... one of the nights, and helped me polish it at every corner.

This chapter to me looks like a gem :3

I hope you all think so to.

Enjoy!

 

Franchise Writer: P.S. I slipped in some spoilers for you all to find that Sterben doesn't know about, good luck~

 

Sterben: NO NOT MY SECRETS!

12. What I am... by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 5] (9340 words)

Welcome back everyone :D

I finished the chapter sooner then i had imagined. It took up most of my labor day weekend... but it was worth it :D

This chapter, was by far one of the hardest to write in this story, and i hope you all understand why come the end of it.

Enjoy.

13. Burdens of a lost girl, by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 3] (11071 words)

Welcome back everyone, *lifts up shield*

I-I-I know that... last chapters ending was a hell of a place to leave off on, b-b-but thats why, i'm posting this so soon. I've been working non-stop trying to get this one out and i even had help with the final peice so there should be no grammer mistakes like last time... don't quote me...

Anyways please enjoy and like always leave me a review about what your feeling after :)

14. Kat fight, by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 4] (10908 words)

Welcome back one and all, i'm so happy to be coming to you from... actually i'd rather not say my address... xD

Anyways i was a little sad with the lack of reviews last chapter, but i know that was my fault for posting two chapters back to back. It probably made it look like my story was just there for awile... or i lost some fans somehow...

Anywhoo... I hope you all like this chapter and review, i can't get enough of your thoughts!

enjoy!

15. The truth about trust... by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 3] (8688 words)

"Sigh"

Another chapter done, but still i feel not enough has been said. I suppose i will never be happy until the final words reach you all.

Thanks for being here :)

I don't say it enough but i really appreciate all the love and support you've all given me for my story. I had worries at first when i brought my idea up to F.W. but, I think I made the right call.

Lots of people messaging me what they think. Lots of views of people who enjoy my story~

It just fills me with so much joy and helps me get through each day so once again, thank you all!

 

So please enjoy the chapter, and tell me what you think if you like. I'll be happy to read your thoughts~

16. The calm before the storm by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 1] (17410 words)

Whistles loudly...

 

This sure did take awhile xD

 

Welcome back all, it's been awile. I hope I wasn't gone to long. This chapter took the longest by far out of all the others to write and for good reason. I think you all know what to expect from this one and i hope it answers some of the questions you might have.

I had to constantly go back and forth with it as I fought to tell it but... i think it's time.

 

Please enjoy :)

17. What They are... by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 1] (9103 words)

I'm back :D

 

Hello everyone, and i'm sorry for the sudden leave. I said in my last chapter i might not write for awile but i didn't think it was this long. :(

I just got back from vacationing to see my relitives back in my old country and i was there for a of couple months. It was a great trip, but i really did miss writing. :(

So, i made this as soon as i could when i got back! i hope you like it and have been waiting long time for it to!

Enjoy!

18. Why We're Here... by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 4] (5662 words)

Welcome back people, i'm glad to have this chapter out so soon. I, I think i'll try to push them out a bit quicker since i think a lot of my old fans left the story...

But, i'm hoping i can make new ones to. :)

If your expecting a lot of action in the next chapter there probably won't be because i'm revealing the twins past, and theres a bit to go over. So please bear with it. I think you'll like it.

Please review if you can, even a couple words makes me happy because i know i'm not just writing for writings sake and i'm making a story for others to enjoy.

But, if you don't want to I understand...

 

Enjoy

 

 

 

 

19. What We'll Do... by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 3] (8855 words)

"Sniffles"

Sobs loudly...

 

You guys... rock.

 

Thank you so much for all the reviews i received... I was really feeling bad people had lost intrest, but that thought is gone entirely. thank you so much to everyone who reviewed me, old and new. It really does do a world of wonders for me.

I'm not writing to make money, or anything like that. I'm just doing it because i want people to be happy and enjoy my stories. So when you take the time to tell me you like it, it makes my day.

So once again, thank you, just, thank you for the reviews ;-; 

It really made me happy to be here.

 

Enjoy!

20. Who... are you? by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 4] (10135 words)

"Sighs"

 

This chapter was very satisfying to write. It's an accumulation of many plot lines I have woven together that all inevitably meet here, in this chapter. And its fantastic! :)

 

Welcome back and i hope you weren't waiting very long. I started this on Monday and finished it Sunday. All and all, this has been a great week for me. And the best way for me to end it is to give you all a chapter i'm sure you've been waiting very patiently for.

 

I couldn't stand the thought of leaving the twins arc alone for weeks so I had to conclude it before I take a break, and im happy I did. So without further adoo

 

Please enjoy it!

 

 

21. The truest form of love... by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 4] (6768 words)

Well... what a long and strange trip it's been. Here we are people. the final chapter... kind of. XD

I had written something else after this, but I cut it out and plan on posting it a couple days from now. This story has a lot of directions and turns, and in my mind they all lead out perfectly but on paper... not so much.

But, i'm hoping this will do for now, and if there's something you still want to know, i assure you the last part i post afterwards will cover it.

But, all good things have to end. so i wont drag this on any longer.

 

Enjoy...

22. Epilog by Sterben Klein [Reviews - 5] (7151 words)

 

"Sighs"

 

What a long and strange trip this story has been. I remember when i started and, thinking it would be a fun way to pass the time. I never imagined i would turn into this...

I don't know if i still have all the same fans i had when i first started posting for this story, but i think any of you who have been here since the begining could tell things changed quickly.

And i have Franchise Writer to thank for that. After chapter 3, i didn't know where this story was headed. I originally just made it as a ongoing story that didn't have an end. But, he stopped me from posting chapter 4, and talked it over with me.

I can't believe it all changed from there like it did, but i can't thank him enough for his words. I had direction now. And you all have this story as the final byproduct.

So please, enjoy my final words. And enjoy the ending of PLD.

 

:)