Very nice!  You have a wonderful attention to detail, and you clearly craft your scenes carefully.  I love your setting as well.  I look forward to this wherever you take it.

Well done, you do a good job of crafting vivid scenes and you've got an unusual premise here which is interesting.  Interested to see where this is going.

Ooh, things are getting interesting.  Wonder where things will go from here.  I've learned that I can't really predict how things will turn out with your stories.

Also nice DS cameo in chapter 2, transient curse ran out again? ;)

Totally got me hooked now.  Both the band of tinies and Jennifer are mostly sympathetic so far.  Very curious as to how this will end, will she get out early, will she end up "adopting" Linda?  Or will one of them cross the line? Who knows...

Thumbs up again!

Very nice, I love seeing new chapters of this even though the role reversal (innovative though it is) isn't really my thing.  You do a good job building tension with the combination of her helplessness and how completely outclassed they are whenever she's able to move a little bit.

The "post-apocalyptic" hardened band of survivors is great, it's like you mixed The Walking Dead and The Borrowers.  I love this universe.

After chapter 4 I really wanted her to adopt Linda, or just put out leftovers for them every once in a while and occasionally have a movie night.  I don't think that's gonna happen any more, LOL.

Nice!  You do really well at drawing out the little details, above and beyond the call of duty.  As a result the story really drew me in.  Unique too.  The giant submissive doesn't show up that often in this genre - for obvious reasons, haha. 

I did like the ending, although I was a bit disappointed that she never got free while the whole group was there :)  The giant/tiny interaction was somewhat restricted to "murderous" and "helpless" with not a lot in between.

I'll keep an eye out for anything from you in the future...

HOLY SHIT IT'S BACK

This is one of the very few stories that I will occasionally go back and re-read.  I thought it had joined the graveyard already, never to be completed.

And now it's back, YES!

Honestly I really have to commend you for how well thought-out everything is in this story.  The characters, how they react, every little tiny carefully thought out detail that goes into every scene.  How the power dynamics shift everything in subtle and not so subtle ways.

At this point I'm assuming that you have some sort of portal into an alternate universe where you can just watch this stuff happen.  Otherwise, I have no idea how you manage to come up with ALL THIS DETAIL from imagination.  Admittedly I'm not a writer in the slightest but even I can tell that this shit is really hard.  How??

Anyway, keep it up!  And whatever you do, don't stop writing, you're too damn good at it.

This is really awesome.  I love stories which go strong on the detail, and you've done a great job with that.  Your prose is very evocative. 

ps. I know she was a bit of a jerk but I still feel sorry for Brittany now ^-^

This is getting really good.  Awesome character work so far, I can already tell this is going to be great!  Can't wait!

Okay, things are becoming clearer now.  I can see a little more of the why for all parties involved.  And I can understand why what they're doing might be for the best in the end. But I still don't see why they think it's a good idea for Melody to be part of this little arrangement.  With that kind of size difference, a lot of trust is necessary for there to be a comfortable sibling relationship there.  I even think think that watching Ashley's humiliation could do a lot of damage, much less participating in it.

But hey that's just my opinion.  And good job by the way. :)