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[Report This] Published: January 01 1970 Updated: January 01 1970
Reviewer: QMajor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2014 Title: None

Olivia really did warm up to Jennifer pretty quickly, but on reflection it doesn't seem that unnatural.  I think Olivia is really starting to understand how terrible her position is in the world and how much Nick shielded her from it.  I think she'll take what she can get, and she can't afford to hold grudges at this point.

Just my guess.  Of course we'll see how it goes.  This has been well done so far.



Author's Response:

Good observation! Olivia is starting to feel empathy for Jennifer—but only so much. The end of ch10 does seem a bit rush, but that’s only part of the story. After all, enemies don’t become friends that fast—or do they?

Summary:

Two students are stranded on a different planet where everything seems quite earthly, except it is totally small. This is a classic crush and vore story in a dark-fantasy setting with an overarching storyline.

With some 900 pages by now, I think we might as well call this one a book.

All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Insertion, Mouth Play, Adventure, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 988803 Read Count: 566044
[Report This] Published: May 12 2014 Updated: July 09 2023
Reviewer: QMajor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ooooh boy you're writing again!  Happy day!

Also I totally understand where you're coming from with the writer's block, I kinda wondered if you'd written yourself into a corner with the last chapter of EOM.  :)

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: QMajor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Great stuff.  Interesting that Janna despite being the "good" one might actually be more dangerous to the little ones, considering how easily she can be manipulated. 

Always cool to explore the consequences of the power difference with more than direct confrontation.   The leaders now have to accept that everything they can accomplish is nothing compared to what the weakest can do with a giant's ear.  With Janna's "benevolence" messing up the tiny society and Laura having her dark fun... it's all gonna be great.

Reviewer: QMajor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Man, so many good things to say about this story.

First, despite their "psycho" tendencies the girls actually seem human and feel like they have their own motivations and points of view.  They don't feel like just puppets of the author like in a lot of violent stories.

Second, just the right amount of world-building and character development: enough to make the world feel alive, but not so much that it gets boring.  

I love how you handle the interactions between Laura & Janna and the tiny people.  You really nail the contrast between their amusement & whimsy and their toys' desperation.  Whenever they start to pick up or otherwise interact with a character you like, it's sooo wonderfully tense (Poor Rayades!).  The writing really helps the reader identify with both sides I think.

I have no idea how you do this so well but I am super happy that you're still writing.

Summary:

She took gentle care of him, and they were in love.

But she was starting to wonder just what the limits were. 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Body Exploration, Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19494 Read Count: 93956
[Report This] Published: May 16 2014 Updated: October 19 2014
Reviewer: QMajor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Panty Prison

This is great!  You have a real talent for describing this stuff.  The interactions are intense but you still keep things gentle enough that the characters can seem real.  I look forward to wherever you take this.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I work hard on the descriptions, it isn't easy! But I'm glad you like it.

Summary:

Mindy was never the best big sister.  Thanks to the shrink virus, she'll finally get a chance to make up for it.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2291 Read Count: 14971
[Report This] Published: August 20 2016 Updated: August 20 2016
Reviewer: QMajor Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter Only (Just a One Off)

Aww, neat idea.  Too bad it won't continue, but I enjoyed the concept anyway.

(it seems most of the reviewers didn't read the end notes or the chapter name :))