Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed
Date: December 12 2014
Title: None
five truly wonderful chapters. I love how Jacob and Hannah keep getting bigger and bigger, and the different kind of fun they can have at each size - really enjoyed the descriptions of them destroying rome beneath them as they fucked. you do a great job describing all the passive destruction colossal beings cause. I especially love the view of them we get from the ground, through Lissette, as well as the doomed littles, like the soldier and Flavio. I'm very interested to see where these characters end up! Jacob seems as selfish as ever, Hannah is in love with him but I wonder if she's noticed his lack of love back, and Lissette is quite the wild card. a great build so far, and a very enjoyable read!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words, Binary Prophet. You always manage to notice the more subtle details in my stories…the broken relationship between Jacob and Hannah, for example. I’m very appreciative that you take the time to read the stories so well. :) This is the first story that I’ve posted that isn’t complete; usually, I wait until I have a definite ending before I post stories. I’m not one-hundred percent sure where I’m going with it since there are all kinds of possibilities, especially with a story that involves time travel and growth.
I may just go with the whole idea about Isaac Newton and Gottfried Wilhelm von Leibniz constructing a giant wooden robot and fighting them in it. ;) Kidding. Maybe…