Reviewer: riczar Signed
Date: September 01 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Depart
It will be very interesting when the women discover that there is an entire fleet of men.
I think Shouta and Maki are both making mistakes. Maki for not trying to understand the culture that Shouta comes from and why he's so behaving so poorly to his treatment. And Shouta for just being an ass.
Assuming there's no way for the fleet to return home. I'm hoping when the dust settles from the upcoming battle with the demon, the 2 cultures can calmly discuss how to best integrate the men into the women's society. To avoid an experience like Maki and Shouta's.
Good story. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Yes the encounter between the men and the Ryujin will be very interesting indeed. I wonder who will have the upper hand in any kind of power play though?
Everyone thinks Shouta is an ass... Well he is defiantly upset, but I think with fairly good reason. He could defiantly be a little more humble for his savior though.
Well the story already mentioned that Jimmu of the Ryujin did travel To Japan and become Emperor in the past, but as for it being planned, it was as much a accident as the fleets coming to Ryo no Yo. So if they did return it would be a freak chance. I have no plans for such statically bad odds happening twice.
As for integration, I'm not quite sure yet how that might go down. In a society where females are the bread winners of society, a group of five thousand arrogant prideful heavily armed young men might not see integration as acceptable. At least not how the Ryujin want it.
I already have stuff planned, so more will be coming soon hopefully, but I can't promise when. And thanks again for the review!