Membership status: Member
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Categories: Unaware, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Instant Size Change, Adventure, Body Exploration, Butt, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Cheerleader of Dupuy
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19091 Read Count: 16087
Date: March 19 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Could have expected more for a hundred years later in tech... They could have found a better way to quarantine it in the future or just plainly nuked it so it'd not be an issue on the taxpayer any further. Overall, I liked the story's idea, but a few things could have made it a bit more realistic.
I assumed Steph could live that long due to the effects of the toxin or something, so it wasn't much of an issue to me. Overall, good plotline and story, but could be better.
Categories: Vore, Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1798 Read Count: 18494
Date: July 11 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ever since i wrote some satirical stories and didn't get a single review for them (or I did and it was only the one review) and I see all these stories out there that get like 10-12 or 3 or 4.
It really annoyed me that I spent some of my time writing up a story here only to have no one appreciate it or make points about it to improve, even if problems and logical falacies and flaws and stuff were spitting them in the face. My latest story even asked for reviews at the end. At the end... no reviews. I've seen stories getting like 1 or 2 after the first day, but not mine. All I got was this tumbleweed...
I got angry and deleted all my stories. So now I write sort of negative reviews and browse around a lot. I've been a victim of the lack of reviews. and I take out my anger by finding realistic physics (or close to realism) on this website (none so far, but I try!)
I can't do a response to a response, but there you go, a response to a response and a response to all you guys, if you've read my stories. Thanks for nothing, you're a great help!
Sorry to be a bother...
Author's Response: do not consider yourself a bother. it is always welcome to havecorraspondance from a reader because it makes me a better author of these little tales (no pun intended). please feel free to continue your feed back. i am sorry that you did not get any reviews on your stories yourself. unfortunately i never came across one of your stories and had a chance to write a review. best wishes.
Date: July 06 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I dunno, but some product like that seems suspicious. I'm not a fan of cannibalism either. Why is it assumed that a small person would taste good raw? I mean, would you eat chicken that's been recently plucked and left bare? It wouldn't taste nice, unless it was cooked and dead.
It seems to be a habit however with the stuff here. Somehow people taste nice raw and the body is quite strong and airstrikes don't work because they have to be in close range (NOT TRUE!) and nuclear weapons are out of the question (because you don't want your city and a couple million lives destroyed to stop something that will destroy more cities and kill more lives than what a nuclear war might make)
You describe how the guy shrinks a bit too quickly. I mean, why are such products made that way? Why did the woman just ask for help and then get a single guy into a room to shrink him? Wouldn't it be more economical for a large group of people? Why just one?
Regards, Stylesrj, the guy who's standard of a review is 3 or 4 stars
Author's Response: Remember, this is just a story. i'm assuming readers are willingly suspending their disbelief of some elements of most narratives in this site. I will, however, try to keep some of your points in mind when I write my next tale.
the end of the world, at the hands of beautiful giantesses. Need I say more?
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Insertion, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58558 Read Count: 185332
Date: July 06 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Can't wait for more. What the heck happened to the world?
Author's Response:
i'll try to anwser that question asap, stylesrj! ;-)
Date: July 20 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Ok, now I can see why it's not a simple "Take out the giantess and teh winz0rs" scenario. Very interesting it now seems.
I can sort of gather the idea of what happened to the world, but the question remains- Did the giantesses do it and somehow the best military hardware did nothing or was it caused by nuclear weapons? I really hope it's the latter
Author's Response:
Frankly, i 'm not too sure yet! ;-) thanks for reading stylesrj!
Date: August 12 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Go for the nukes! Go for the nukes! press that button George Bush!
Not bad... I've gone back into writing stories of Great Region... perhaps you could read it? Not trying to advertise here... much...
Anyway, so that must suck, being attacked by a giant woman. I just hope they find some good way to kick some ass (and also kill the woman) that does not involve an airstrike being destroyed because someohow an F-35 has to get to close range to fire a heat-seeking missile (I'd understand if it was an A-10 Warthog though, or a Spectre Gunship. Gatling cannons! w00t!)
I love the smell of an explosion in the morning
Author's Response: i 'll sure have a look at your story, stylesrj! hehe, myself I could not tell apart a F-35 from a flying toaster, so i doubt the story'll go in these types of details ;-) Explosions in the morning is OK, but not too early please! :-) thanks for reading!
Date: October 02 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ok, so I can see why the nuclear option isn't that good (but still, nuclear blasts can range up to 3 kilometres in length and height. That's not even talking about the multiple re-entry vehicles with the set of nukes in the tip and the nuke itself)
The kind of the way the thing is worded, it sounds a lot like a zombie apocalyse, except the zombies are really tall and cannot die as easily as one should. Keep it up...
Author's Response: Hi Stylesrj, well, I'm affraid our conventional weapons are a bit short on this one ;-). can't beat the quantum physics! I did warn it was about the end of the world in the header,so yes, they are tough little giantesses ;-) But hey, i don't know why, i still have hope for the future. ;-) thanks for reading!!
Date: October 02 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Perhaps at the end, there should be some secret government project using antimatter (always some project that saves everyone at the end) and destroys the giantesses and then everyone has to rebuild a shattered world.
Or it could just turn out to be any other giantess story where they win, we lose...
Author's Response: hehe, quite frankly, Stylesrj, i'm not a big fan of happy endings myself;-) But still... only the future will tell :-)
You go to your friends house after a truck carrying toxic waste crashed near her house.
Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Feet, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2155 Read Count: 39705
Date: August 03 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3:Angry giant
Hmm... interesting? 50ft tall giantess... now, how many missiles would it take from some gunships or aircraft? Also consider the nuclear option.
I think by the time a city is devastated, the military would be on full alert and kicking ass quickly. (also aircraft do not go into close range to fire a missile. They can shoot miles away and they'll hit their targets)
Categories: Giantess, Object, Instant Size Change, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Crush, Insertion, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1278 Read Count: 46519
Date: August 12 2007 Title: Chapter 3: M
I can probably guess what happens next, if it is up to me...
An airstrike of F-35 fighters goes underway and several missiles impact on her ,killing her and tearing her body to shreds. Either that or some Tomahawks....
Or we go for the simple option of a 10 megaton warhead that is made by a lot of uranium...
Points of criticism:
Paragraph your stories, so it isn't a huge block of text. It's annoying how pressing enter creates 2 lines of space, I know
There'd be more than just soldiers sent at such a target. Perhaps a few Apache gunships and a few M1A2 Abrams tanks...
Points of praise:
.... good plot I think...
Categories: Giantess, Instant Size Change, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Breast Enlargement, Butt, Crush, Incest, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1638 Read Count: 82785
Date: September 12 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Sex and Toys
Only one option?
I can see two possible options actually:
Bigger firepower (and planes that can fire missiles a kilometre away (i.e F-22 Raptor or the F-35... maybe even the Harrier if you don't know your planes), jets today are NOT like the ones in WWII with the dogfights and close attacks. Also includes heavy carpet bombers, like the B-52 Stratofortress, or the B-2 Stealth Bomber)
Option 2:
Launch an ICBM. A 100ft tall giantess cannot survive a nuclear blast that can decimate kilometres of land
Total worship is not what the American people would be forced to do (annd if a nuke was launched to destroy the "goddesses" it would make George Bush seem like a hero)
Other than that, the sex parts were too short... I mean, I wasn't interested in them myself, but if I were, they were too short. Expand the story out a bit and perhaps put a few or just one nuclear missile in it
Emily was 5 ft 8 and she had a power , to shrink me and turn me in to objects .....
Categories: Object
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1079 Read Count: 21140
Date: September 30 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The first day
A bit too short and not very arousing. You could elaborate on it more, do more object changes, that sort of thing. Don't stop at one idea and just end it like that.
I expected more from it, but you could do a bit of touch up with the spelling errors. Use Microsoft Word or some good word processor to fix it up and then re-submit it with the changes.
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4490 Read Count: 16299
Date: October 01 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Just a friendly note: There's a thing called paragraphing.
I know it's annoying, but you have to leave a white line whenever you want to make a new sentence or idea.
Rated R. Adults ONLY. This is a crush story of a couple mini men and a couple of regular sized women.
Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7388 Read Count: 9235
Date: October 01 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 2
Also as another friendly reminder- There is no need to submit 2 stories for 2 chapters. That's why this website has a chapter system. Use it instead of wasting time by making 2 different stories on the same story.
Categories: Slave, Instant Size Change, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1614 Read Count: 11647
Date: October 09 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
You've got the paragraphing right, well almost.
There's still an issue of it being a big block of text near the end.
My recommendation is to write something down using the site's writing system, copy it onto Word (so then it is set to Normal Web)
Then make sure everything in your document is on Normal Web and copy your writing down, and Keep Text Only.
It should then be your story on Normal Web. Fix up the paragraphs when needed and there you have it. Adds 25% more awesome :)
Categories: Giantess, Feet, Incest
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2683 Read Count: 110387
Date: March 03 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wait, wait wait... so the device can enlarge people if you aim at them, but somehow it can also expand a single body part as well if you aim at it?
Also, why aren't clothes able to expand with the device's field? Sorry, I just need a bit of explanation to it.
I could suspend disbelief, but there isn't enough sex scenes in it to do such a thing
Categories: Watersports, Giantess, Feet, Insertion, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6779 Read Count: 24386
Date: October 19 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Good work so far. If it's going to be an Insertion story, make sure to keep feet scenes to a minimum. Last thing I want to see is a good Insertion story ruined by a Feet basis
Feet and Insertion do not mix. Feet are focused on too much and Insertion is not appeased... so keep it Insertion based.
Good work, nicely done
A young man named Metal has a pleasant experience with his very good friend Lily.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Breast Enlargement, Couples , Gentle, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Adventures of Metallus and Followers
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2330 Read Count: 39074
Date: November 06 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Entire Story
Let's give me my rating system-
We'll start from 0
+10 for saying Feet is disgusting (I hate it in general. A nice majority of Insertion stories usually involve feet somewhere along the lines)
+5 for the room for a sequel with (hopefully) more insertion
+10 for the prospect of that thing and thus makes me excited for more as such devices allow the potential for more arousing things yet being within my "turning a blind eye" matrix (in other words, I skip past the unrealistic things and just read the sex)
-5 for the whole parts inconsistency (you enlarge one part by aiming at it and it grows. However aiming it at a part below it enlarges the whole body. That does not make sense. If I were to aim at the stomah, shouldn't only the stomach grow according to the logic or is there a setting on the gun which provides a bigger enlargement thing)
That's a total of +20. Now if I can rate that, I would, so for now it's going to be a +10. Not very often you see Insertion stories like this, so good job! Give yourself a pat on the back. Oh, and you should try to add more insertion and try new ideas (Body Adventure through the internal body anyone?)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your great positive reinforcement and detailed explanation on your review. About the growing part, a way to visualize it is best to show you a real-life situation. Think of frostbite. If you have only parts of you (such as extremidies) exposed, it will usually affect only those parts of your body rather than your entire body as a whole. It takes much more energy and time. But, I love how you are finding flaws in my writing, because this is what will mainly help me with more stories that have better relations to the readers. I also like your open mind.
Your help is apreciated!
Sir Lime
I'm not sure if you would call this violent or gentle. It depends a lot on how you interpret the ending, which I have left open ended for the time being. However, I may one day go with a violent and/or sexual continuation if I ever pick this up again, so to be on the safe side I will give this an R rating.
Categories: Giantess, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Tera (101 mi and up)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1937 Read Count: 12764
Date: December 24 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I'd have to say, you did a good job on the details, but the ending made it go to waste. Lengthen the story, drag it out or remove a lot of the details to a more-than-basic outline
This is a Giant Couples story which involves SW and a lot of violence and sexual content. Reader discretion is advised.
Categories: Butt, Couples , Entrapment, Giant, Insertion, Lesbians, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5241 Read Count: 52581
Date: May 20 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
My opinion is neutral. It isn't too twisted or sick, as I can probably think of much worse than that and I have already seen much worse than that.
I think why not many enjoy it or think its twisted is because it involves male anatomy in a primarily GTS website and it's too much in the male anatomy department for those narrow-minded "enemies of freedom"
It has twisted ideals I like and twisted ideals I hate. However, I recommend you keep going and let the people sort it out. If someone questions morality or your sexual preferences when writing, who cares? Let them think what they like about you. As long as you get people reading, its fine.
You might break new ground.
Author's Response: Yeah, I definitely think I've broken new ground with this. Lol. But the question is, was this ground that should have been broken? Or are some things best left unexplored?