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Summary:

Unfortunately for her, Jackie has to take the "bus" after work to get home.'

 

*EDIT 07/16/20* Updated Chapters 10 and 14 AKA the ones that needed fixing. As well, some more chapters coming in the next few days. Keep on the look out for those, trust me when I say you don't want to miss them.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Nose, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: This Micro World
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91464 Read Count: 181000
[Report This] Published: July 30 2018 Updated: October 23 2020
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: August 06 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Another Girl

Another great chapter :)

Nice work introducing another Micro-transport service woman, that was unexpected. And it's cool seeing other forms of 'transport' aside from boots, platform sandals are a nice touch. 

 

Jackie seems to be a magnet for big friendly ladies XD

Hope to see more Jackie (and Marleigh ) soon 

(jackie and Marleigh are my OTP at this point, even though it's not even at that stage yet XD) 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: July 19 2020 Title: Chapter 17: The Birthday Surprise

Love that you've returned to this story :D 

Marleigh and Jackie are perfect together. 

But Auurrghhhh, Marleigh's mother and sister are bad news. Alyssa seems like a bitch, and so does Krystal. 

"I'll allow this relationship to go on. For now" That line pissed me off, it's not up to her who Marleigh dates or is in love with, she should just butt out and let her daughter be happy!

*(takes a calming breath)* 

Anyway, as I said loving that you've returned to this story :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I definitely have more planned with this story, more planned out than original 16 chapters ever were. I'm glad after 17 chapters, the magic of their relationship hasn't worn off. 

As for Krystal and Alyssa, Alyssa will come back later down the line and I adjusted her introduction in an earlier chapter as well as added a small cameo by her in another chapter. But if you think Marleigh's family is bad, just wait till the two meet Jackie's. 

Any way, hope to see next time!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: August 27 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Lush or what?

Please please please let Marleigh and Jackie get back together!!! (after adressing what happened and apologies are given, etc)


They need to be together!!!!

XD Another great chapter (regardless of the golden pair being split up still) 

Oh no!!! Jackie's in trouble!!! 



Author's Response:

Sometimes, couples need breaks and sometimes they just drift. But in all seriousness, the golden couple will (eventually) get back together, don't you worry. Just might Jackie going through some monumental hoops to get the love of her life back. See you then!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: September 26 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Division

Well....this broke my heart

Marleigh and Jackie were perfect, and I feel Jackie's pain here. 

Like...ow, really I am devastated. 

I do hope Jackie and Marleigh are still endgame, please don't keep them apart forever!

(Though with you saying Kali is the opposite later, maybe she becomes a total bitch) 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: October 04 2020 Title: Chapter 26: Rising Tensions

I am anxious for what Jackie is going to go through, and am still pining for the golden pair that is Jackie and Marleigh. 

Kali!!! Arghhh, she's going to make me despise her, I just know it. 

Another great chapter of this story however, and it does make me excited (and anxious XD) for more to come. 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: October 10 2020 Title: Chapter 27: Preemptive Strike

Kali!!!!!

ooof, I am both excited (for the feet content) while also pained that Jackie is being forced into this position by this bitch. 

I am on the edge of my seat with excitement, and desire for Kali to get punched in the face. 

You've done a fantastic job at keeping me hooked as always. 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: October 16 2020 Title: Chapter 28: Usurper

YES !!!! Yes! I am so glad Kali was caught in the act (thankfully not before she was able to finish Jackie off) 

Loved the foot/shoe interaction in this chapter though (despite not liking Jackie's situation and Kali being a bitch) you continue to write this series well. 

I am looking forward to more, and Marleigh and Jackie's reuinion :) 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: October 20 2020 Title: Chapter 29: Confrontation

Ok

Wow, I have to say this chapter fulfilled a lot of my Anti-Kali dreams XD

Jackie using the VR to have some happyness with Marleigh was a sad but touching scene, but it was followed up briliantly by bringing in real Marleigh. 

I love how Jackie vented her emotions at Marleigh instead of just running into her arms straight away. That was real, it showed a real emotional responce to everything she'd been through. 

And Yes YES!!! I am so happy that the Golden Pair are back together, I couldn't stand them being apart. 

And I loved how you had Jackie subject VR Kali to her feet and really put the fear she felt into Kali. And having Marleigh join in too for some mouth and vore play, VR-Kali got to experience all her alcohol tinged breath to it's maximum. 

XD Vindictive Jackie and Marleigh teaming up to reap some well deserved justice was delicious!!


Seriously though, this has been such a fantastic and engrossing story, I have followed since the beginning and I am going to be honest, this is emotional for me. Having followed these characters through their highs (and most recently, some lows), their growing relationship, sexual desires, family drama, relationship angst, the whole package. 

I am sad that this is coming to an end, though I am someone who doesn't like endings necessarily. 

I may seem to be rambling on a bit, but hopefully this comes off as showing my appreciation for you having given us this story, this is not just a short fetish/giantess fueled romp, but a proper story showcasing a number of genres, and an in depth look at the relationship these two people who come from vastly different social scales share and cultivated with one another. 

So again, thank you, thank you for sharing this with us, and thank you for bringing us into this world, and as you said it all started with a girl taking a ride home in a shoe, and yet here we are showing these same people having found love unexpectantly, but pleasingly so. 

Thank you. 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: October 24 2020 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

This was perfect!

A perfect epiloque for this story, full of sweetness, tenderness, more strenghtening of their bond and their future together. 

Some nice steamy (and I mean both figuratively and literally) scenes with the shower and stripping, as well as their conversation and interaction in the shower. 

And I love Jackie using her sock as a sleeping bag. 

Again, I have to thank you for sharing this story with us, I won't go on too long as I expressed most of my thoughts in my review of the last chapter.

But again, I just want to thank you for bringing us on this journey, and I am excited for more of your writing in future. 

Summary:

When fifty percent of the population is shrunk, everyday for tiny peple is a challenge. This is a collection of short stories.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Adult 30-39, Butt, Crush, Feet, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Footwear, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Lesbians, Watersports, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2009 Read Count: 6240
[Report This] Published: September 10 2018 Updated: September 10 2018
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: September 11 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Detention

please don't let this be the end!!!



Author's Response:

Of this little segment? Maybe. Of the story? no.

Kelly haunts me by Luidgi Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 61]
Summary:

A woman in her mid 40's suffers from arthritis and back pain. She is used to see her therapist and masseuse Mrs. Olsen for Shrunk Massage Therapy, a controversial method that proves to be good for her condition. But one day she meets the newly hired masseuse... and her name is Kelly.

Enough said. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Legwear, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37411 Read Count: 44285
[Report This] Published: October 05 2018 Updated: January 31 2019
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: January 31 2019 Title: Kelly haunts me

Part 2 would be interesting to explore

Summary:

Jealous Amber uses a shrink potion to steal Hope's boyfriend, but her plan goes badly awry.


Categories: Violent, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Insertion, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3618 Read Count: 13959
[Report This] Published: December 04 2018 Updated: December 04 2018
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: February 03 2020 Title: Chapter 1: A Teachable Moment

Why doesn't this have reviews!?!

This is a great read, I love Hope. There is not enough Trans-Giantess on this site. 

I love the fact it was all planned, and she got to put Amber in her place XD 


The description and writing was very well done. I wil definitely be re-reading this again in future. 

Shrinkism by Kickyou Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 80]
Summary:

Ryan thinks he's safe from Shrinkism but finds out that he is in for a big surprise.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Mature (40-49), Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports, Scat
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201428 Read Count: 223463
[Report This] Published: December 30 2018 Updated: October 13 2023
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: April 21 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The mom should definitely be told that was a person ( or did she know and was trying to keep Ryan 'safe' from other tinies?)

Either way there should be consequences

I'd vote to get rid of her, definitely

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: July 21 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think Ryan's mother needs to be confronted with what she's done 

 

she's clearly not taking enough precautions and needs to be alerted to what she's done ( everything, including her killing the other tinies ) and how it's affecting Ryan ( plus would love to see her reaction to knowing how her nudity affected him, etc )

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: November 05 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ok, so Emily and his mother need to be confronted with their shit.

I think Emily should definitely feel horrible for what she's done, but there could be some reconciliation.

But I still think Ryan's mother should fuck off XD (She's crazy!)

This chapter was definitely a whirlwind, so much interaction and situations Ryan was put through and I am excited for more. 

But yeah, his mom and Emily need to be confronted with their actions and behavious. 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great seeing this story updated again.

Ryan seriously can't seem to catch a break.

I still feel like Emily needs to have some consequences with what happened with her students and not believing him, but I still hate Mary. (I mean she needs to be confronted with her action, the communicator, squashing the other tiny right in front of her son, she needs to go XD)

But I do hope Ryan gets home to Emily, he's not in a good situation here at all. 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18 2022 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Urghh, Mary is such a bitch. 

She's part of the problem and doesn't even see it (and I still can't get over her crushing that other shrinkee). She also needs to stop perceiving Ryan as a child. 

I want Ryan and Emily to get back together, but obstacles (and Ryan's own decisions) seem to be keeping them apart.

Great work on this chapter, can't wait to read more. 

Summary:

Steve works as a maintenance man in a cryogenic lab. After a prank goes wrong, he finds himself in a much different time


Categories: New World Order, Butt, Feet, Entrapment, Footwear, Insertion, Humiliation, Slave, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7902 Read Count: 19138
[Report This] Published: May 13 2019 Updated: May 13 2019
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: November 25 2020 Title: Chapter 3: A History Lesson

I know you haven't updated this is over a year, but I hope you return to this eventually.

I am hooked! Really great set up and chatracters here, I can't wait to read more. 

Summary:

A college student's secret collection of shrunken nano-cities receives two new inhabitants in the form of her brother and his friend, who must adapt quickly to appease their new god or be destroyed.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15416 Read Count: 119035
[Report This] Published: June 02 2019 Updated: November 26 2019
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: August 23 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm really hoping Nicole becomes aware of the two of them being tiny, I'd love to see how that would shake things up

Author's Response:

Who's to say she's not already aware?

Summary:

A story about a human living in a world where the Police are all Giantesses. He gets convicted of a crime and sentenced to death or live as a slave. He chooses life as a slave to hopefully prove his innocence against beings that are never wrong. He may regret his decision...


Categories: Incest, Giantess, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Odor, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57367 Read Count: 80233
[Report This] Published: June 09 2019 Updated: March 19 2020
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: June 10 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This story is really great so far, I'm loving the interaction ( even if scat isn't really my thing )

I do hope though that Caleb gets to eventually prove his innocence, it'd be great seeing how the Giantess' reacts to having unjustly tortured him for crimes he didn't commit and how they'd go about making amends.