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Summary:

A story inspired and set in the same universe as "Make America Big Again" by Asterisk, Inwiththebooks although probably not a one to one correlation.

WARNING: This is a macrophilia fetish story, but does have the dressing of a political satire to help drive the narrative.  As such, there will be concepts that could be construed as political commentary.  If this concept or the idea of a narrative which might be in conflict with your own world view makes you uncomfortable, turn back.

WARNING: This story is a spawn of my fucked up twisted brain; the story is sadistic, gory, and brutal, as a warning, and if you question your constition, probably not for you.  If these concepts bother you, turn back. 

Ok, now that's out of the way...

The story picks up in media res - after men have been reduced to Tinies some women form an underground railroad of sorts in an attempt to smuggle tinies away from harsh owners to New Zealand - a place where tinies have normal rights and there is an attempt to reverse the process.

Our protaganist - mark - is about to start his most dangerous part of this journey yet - getting through the airport.  He's about an inch tall.

As the name implies, foot heavy themes. 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Middle Age (50+), Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 341683 Read Count: 488933
[Report This] Published: November 04 2019 Updated: February 28 2024
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24 2022 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter X-57: Fireside Chat

Honestly for the bonus chapter college girls, I can't decide between the following choices.

 Stephanie 

Amoe 

Kelly 

Ani

Linh 


I can't decide between them XD (Would be fun to have bonus chapters for each XD) They all have aspects I really like and character traits/backstory bits with Mark that make me want to read more of them. 



Author's Response:

Hey Vegataboy,

My personal goal is to have all of the characters be equally interesting and unique (easier said than done).  So i'm glad it's a bit of a conundrum.

However, for now, as they say with the highlander: There can only be one!

I don't want to water down the bonus chapter in anyway by trying to do too much.  It will probably be a long chapter, hopefully highlighting some of the personality/behavior of the specific character deeper in a very macrophile type way.  Perhaps if I feel like it in another story we can look more at these characters, but that will be a very distance and speculative future.

-Kenny

TitaniCondom by fairway1 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

The TitaniCondom is the latest and greatest adventure the world has seen. Thousands of passengers are shrunk to 1 micrometer in height and put into luxury bubbles in an unbreakable condom. They are then taken for the ride of a lifetime. However, on the maiden voyage, the passengers find that the condom may not be unbreakable!


Categories: Giantess, Couples, Crush, Feet, Giant, Incest, Mouth Play, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6232 Read Count: 35493
[Report This] Published: December 09 2019 Updated: January 03 2020
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: December 10 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn, this is a great idea :D

Love the husband and wife aspect, as well as the giantess having her sister in the condom as well.


Can't wait to see Skye's reaction to learning she accidentally killed people (will her sister survive!? If not, she's going to definitely be feeling some grief)

Not to mention the companies liable for damages and lawsuits over people being killed in their 'experience'

Great work on this first chapter, loved the description and how Skye played with them and used her mouth on the condom, etc it was all written quite well.

Hope to read more soon. 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: December 17 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Damn! Another great chapter.

Loved that we got more of a peek into Skye's past and her motivations. 

As in chapter 1, you wrote the interaction so well, very descriptive and sexy, love how you detailed her oral interaction. 

And as a foot fetishist, the fact she'll be using her feet next chapter has me very excited and wanting more :D

I keep thinking something is going to happen with her sister, either she'll die with another group and Skye will not only have to face the deaths of hundreds of innocent strangers.

Or her sister will survive and be traumatized from having witness so much death at her sisters hands, their relationship forever changed and possibly ruined with Sea never being able to see her sister the same way again, as nothing but a murderer who took the lives of so many people so insignificantly.

As I said, I can't wait for the next chapter, it'll be fun to see what her feet will do :D



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked this chapter! Without spoiling anything, I'm pretty sure you will like the next chapter ;)

And more will be said on Sea for sure.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: January 03 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

You promised feet content, and you did not dissapoint.

 

I loved this chapter, great POV from Sky again, loved her fancy footwork XD Plus we now know where her sister is in the Titanicondom, Sky tapping on that section with her toe is a great image to imagine. 

 

It was a nice change of pace following along with the Jenna character, as well as seeing a bit of her kinky backtory with her friends, loved the threesome aspect, and when she wound up on Skys toes, only to be sucked off by Jack.

 

This story continues to be well written, and very sexy. Thank's for another great upload, can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter so much!

Summary:

189 years ago the world was ravaged by the Shrining Virus. 99.5% of humanity was shrunk within a matter of days. Since then, the world has adapted to the existence of Big and Small people. While some Smalls are free others are owned.

However, the Bigs are not safe, because the shrinking virus still lingers in the blood of all humans. One out of every 15 Bigs will shrink during their lives.

Paul is the son of a powerful woman: a Senator who fights for the rights of Smalls. However, when Paul shrinks, will he be treated fairly by the women in his life or will he learn that all those lofty ideals are just for show?


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55686 Read Count: 219679
[Report This] Published: December 23 2019 Updated: June 25 2020
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: February 11 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Team Building Exercises

Surprised Paul hasn't gotten suicidal after all the shit he's been put through, and being forced to fuck his sister against his will. 

Not to mention having all his human rights stripped from him and demoted to a pet, someone's propert, I don't know how much longer his sanity can last.

Wouldn't be shocked if he threw himself off a tall structure or slit his wrists.

Sorry for the dark-ish review, but just seeing the treatment he's gotten, one can only wonder just how much longer he can endure such abuse and treatment till he finally has had enough. 

 

And the sad thing is, his sister and others probably wouldn't care (except for thos who sympathise with tinies and wish for them to have rights) it could perhaps make him a marty of sorts, or not, could just be seen as another tiny death that is insignificant in the grand scheme of things of how this world works. 

 

Summary:

A catch-all for one-shot stories of all kinds


Categories: Couples, Breasts, Entrapment, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Slave, Violent, Vore, Butt
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137738 Read Count: 230367
[Report This] Published: January 25 2020 Updated: January 27 2024
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Friday the Fourteenth

This was a great chapter, nice twist on the classic slasher tropes and including a size element. 

It was fun seeing the 'final girls' really enjoy having him at such a tiny size.

And I loved the final cliff hanger. (setting it up for a potential sequel? or just a reference to how Jason Vorhees always came back again and again) 

Summary:

Sara and Riley had different expectations for their hookup, it turns out.


Categories: Odor, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Insertion, Humiliation, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5627 Read Count: 16668
[Report This] Published: February 17 2020 Updated: February 17 2020
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: February 18 2020 Title: Chapter 1: A Big Surprise

Ok, this was insanely good!!!!

Firstly, this is another great addition to your 'Tiny Tinder' idea, especially focusing on two women this time around. 

I love the content, the fetish sections were great, you really put us in Riley's shoes here (though not in the way Sara wound up in them in the end of the chapter).

Great use of body worship and insertion as well as butt stuff, and I really liked Riley, I was rooting for her to put Sara in her place.

Hope to see more of these two in future. 

Summary:

Jeff is a 28 year-old washed up musician who has lost his way in a life of drugs and alcohol. When he develops a bad hip as a result of his poor lifestyle, he has to go to the hospital for an x-ray. There he gets the surprise of his life: his former neighbor, Sarah Helleger, works for the hospital and is going to take his x-ray. The last time Jeff saw her, he was 18 and going off to college, and she was a little 11 year-old tomboy. 

Now, 10 years later, so much has changed. Sarah has grown up into an alluring, captivating woman. And she's taller than Jeff. Much taller. And much bigger too. Jeff feels overwhelmed by her presence, and the more they interact, the more interested in Jeff she seems. But what does Sarah really have planned for Jeff?


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 213762 Read Count: 252636
[Report This] Published: April 07 2020 Updated: February 06 2022
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2021 Title: Chapter 44: A Tough Decision

XD Is it weird I kind of want Jen to be put in her place by Sarah.

Idk I just got the image in my head of her trying to tell Sarah off, but she just gets shut down physically and verbally by Sarah's huge form.

The Stinton's are going to be in for a reeeeeal wake up call. 

Can't wait to see how this goes, keep up the great work. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment, vegetaboy! <3 

Summary:

     Nick unlocks a secret power within himself, and begins using it to fulfill his long-held fantasies with his beautiful, plus-sized wife, Cassie; but he soon discovers the dangers that such a power can bring, AND what could happen if he loses control...

Approaching 250 reads…🤗!

Important note: I’ve received some feedback saying that there have been formatting and grammatical errors spotted in several chapters, so if you should find any errors—misspellings, incorrect character names, or grammatical mistakes—please leave a review and let me know ASAP so I can fix them, as these can distract from and greatly diminish the story experience.

I absolutely love reading and responding to your reviews, so please keep them coming. Tell me which parts are your favorites, or something you think can be improved upon. Post feedback (suggestions, criticism, etc.) freely, though please be polite and constructive. Enjoy! I looking forward to hearing from you all!


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Series Of Scenarios
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 150108 Read Count: 253922
[Report This] Published: April 08 2020 Updated: August 24 2021
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: November 14 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: A Little Strained

*sighs*

Cassie's cluelessness is really tiring now. How she doesn't think to check on Nick, after everything that's happened. Even if she 'thought' she might have heard something, after everything she should have taken more precaution and thought "Nope, gonna check just in case"

And her moments with Nick in this chapter (when they're having sex) was a bit of a relief, but as you yourself said, her feelings for Nick seem to be subjbective as long as he's following what she wants. As long as Nick is doing things the way she wants, everything is fine. 

But if not, she's a moody intollerant bitch who treats him like a bug, or sub-human, "no no Nick, don't explain yourself, don't tell me your genuine fear and the fact you can't fucking control the shrinking, I don't want to hear it cause I'm not happy with you" - Cassie

Why not put up some camera's or some sort of system to allert her when he shrinks, you would think after almost dying multiple times that Nick would say "Yep, I need to put some cameras up" or some sort of alarm system.

*sighs* with all that being said, I am looking forward to the next chapter, you write the tiny scenes so hot, and I love Cassie's body and interacting with her feet and massive form (though at the same time, Cassie's aloofness and ignorance, and bitchy attitude pisses me off)

It's conflicting XD



Author's Response:

Well, if nothing else, I’ve certainly invoked an emotional response from you concerning the characters. You empathize with Nick, and you regret Cassie, which is what I was going for, so I guess I’ve done a good job writing this story. She’s ignorant of her own faults, and ignorant of Nick’s situation when he’s shrunk, which you picked up on, so congrats.

In any case, thanks for your input.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02 2021 Title: With Great Power...

Well my previous anxiety has sky rocketed!!!

Please please please don't let Nick's journey end in Cassie's shit. 

Cassie's arrogance shining through here (how she says it 'won't happen again' and she'll make sure, about squashing Nick. You can tell the moment she loses her temper or he turns on her again, she'll try and squash him, or more gaslighting and abuse)

I was hoping this chapter would end on on a highnote, of Jenny finding Nick. But nope XD

I will be left anxious and worried about him till the next chapter.

(I withheld a longer rant about Cassie this time.....this time....XD)



Author's Response:

So, I’m not sure if you read the other reviews of this chapter, but there were several people dismayed by the ending. As I’m sure I mentioned before, Jenny’s character was a late addition to the story, and if I had it to do over again, I probably would’ve added her from the get go. The trouble is I had already outlined where the story would go and how it would end before I even started writing the first chapter. I’m glad you’ve been an avid reader and invested in the story from the get go, and if you still want to write an alternate ending, I’ll be more than happy to collaborate.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27 2021 Title: With Great Power...

OK ok ok!! Fuck, that ending actually has me feeling anxiety!

I hope Nick is going to be felt in time!! 

Jenny continues to be a saint, and I loved the interaction here (again your tiny/giant intraction is again top notch)

I don't care for Cassie's apology, it's too little too late, after the complete dehuminization and abuse she subjected Nick too has affected me too much. Cassie can go die in a fucking ditch alone and unloved for all I care. 

Or drown in her own crocodile tears!

*sighs* Yeah, she is iredeemable in my eyes, and if it were up to me, she would be jailed or killed. (I still have ideas for writing a spin off AU with your permission of Cassie shrinking and being put through some real bad shit XD)

I feel bad for Jenny as I know she's going to feel bad for what she's done to Nick.

(Again, I am literally feeling anxiety here over that cliffhanger! Please don't keep up waiting too long.)

Nick has happyness and a loving woman in his grasp don't let it be taken away by an unintentional vore. 

Also Nick needs to get his powers back under control (It may have been the dream that shrank him, but his control was perfect) 



Author's Response:

It’s true that Cassie’s tears came too little too late, though I want to point out that her catharsis is genuine (at least in her eyes). This is what has Jenny so nervous: she’s afraid that Cassie is going to manipulate Nick into taking her back and forgetting about the promises he’d made to Jenny.

And as for Nick...well, you’ll just have to wait for the conclusion.

However, if you would still like to do a spin off story afterwards, you’re welcome to do so.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: A Little Rendezvous

Yes....yes....(breathes a sigh of relief)

I cannot express how much of a relief this chapter was to read. 

The connection between Jenny and Nick was so palpable here. Not just the physical connection, but also emotional and genuine feeling.

Jenny's concern for Nick was so good to see, how she was worried for him, but also enjoying exploring a sexual partnership with him.

(The sex scenes showcased your writing once again in writing tiny/giant sexual content so well. I loved it!!)

And Jenny reinforcing Cassie's horrible behaviour, her deplorable actions and fucking abusive actions towards Nick. She didn't sugar coat it, as said in previous reviews she abused Nick, she belittled him and gaslighted him, and straight up tried to KILL her husband.

Nick is finally escaped from the Cassie-fog of delusion, she is in the WRONG, he does not have to apologize to her! She's an abusive cunt who does not deserve him, and finally he is seeing the toxicity he was becoming complacent in, hell was craving to return to.

He's free from that delusion, and is now free from wanting it.

And Jenny pointing out everything she did, and reasuring him was so good to read. Jenny feels like an avatar of all the compassion and love that Nick should have gotten from Cassie, but was denied.

I am once again happy for this story, happy for Nick, and now for Jenny as well. Like the previous chapter I have finished this and am filled with excitement and happyness (instead of blind rage and a desire for vengeance.....well not so much XD I still want to hurt Cassie, but at the same time I am relieved for Nick)

Thank you for giving us Jenny, she is the partner Nick deserves, and is finally getting.

Now let's get those divorce papers going! XD 



Author's Response:

Well, if nothing else, you’re proof that I know how to write my characters well. I really am glad that you take the time to review my story, regardless of whether you do or don’t like what happens. In retrospect, I really do wish that I’d introduced Jenny earlier in the story, There’s so much more I could’ve done with her character.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: A Little Unexpected

I'm so sorry for the lateness of this review, the holiday season was busy for me, and I honestly didn't see this updated.

Yes....yes YES ok, this chapter did fufill a lot of my desires for Nick.

He's finally FINALLY breaking through the Cassie-delusion he held, and realizing what a fucking asshole she is.

Jenny, she seems like a breath of fresh air. And a genuinely kind soul that Nick can connect with.

I'm saying it now, divorce the cunt (aka Cassie...I have many insulting names for her I call her in my head when reading this), and get together with Jenny. 

Jenny who seems like a decent person, who is willing to explore Nick's abilities without judgement or condescension.

And Nick needs some positive relationships in his life.

I loved Jennie's reaction to learning Cassie lied, like yes!! Turn the tides, form a mob on Cassie and chase her out of town.

I really really really want to write my own little (pun intended) revenge fic on Cassie!! She deserves to suffer, she deserves no empathy or kindness (unlike Nick who does)

Cutting off my review here as I don't want to go super Rant mode!

But this is the first chapter in some time that ended with me happy, like genuinly happy for Nick and his prospects with Jenny. 



Author's Response:

Well, as I said in another review response, I never expected Jenny’s character to go past the mailbox conversation, but I realized that there were some story arcs and character development I could do with not only her own character, but with Nick’s as well. In retrospect, I kind of wished I’d included her in a few earlier chapters; there certainly could have been some “fun” and “interesting” tiny encounters with her...

 I’m glad you liked Jenny’s reaction to Nick’s story. The Conversation between her and Nick was the hardest part of this chapter to write: it had to hit certain plot points, but also had to flow smoothly and seem believable. I certainly hope it was.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: December 11 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: A Little Guilt, With a Side Of Salt

Ok, a lot of stuff happened in this chapter. 

I am excited to see where it goes next.

Yes, Nick should be more dominant and express his feelings.

I am still rooting for him to just divorce the bitch known as Cassie. 

The whole line she said about having a long way to go before she can even "Begin to forgive" him really pissed me off. (I know you know my thoughts on that bitch already) but that line just reignited my hatred for her.

Nick needs to be forgive....Nick, nick's not the one who ignored someone's feelings and fears, and is a conditional loving asshole.

*sighs* I won't go into it further as I know I'll wind up ranting, and you probably are sick of me filling the review section up with rants.....(or idk, maybe it's nice to see such passion inspired by your works, even if it's ranitng angrily about a character you wrote. Don't get me wrong, you have written these characters amazingly well, I've said that before. Cassie is just a character who seems to be engineered for me to hate XD )

In my head I was imagining Cassie suddenly shrinking uncontrolably, and Nick showing her how scared he was (payback on her ass!) But I know you probably have your own thoughts on where to end the story.

.....would you be ok with others maybe writing an 'AU' (cause I sometimes feel like just writing Cassie shrunken and put through some shit while tiny, just for my own catharsis XD) 



Author's Response:

Don’t worry about renting. You’re simply reinforcing that my characters can invoke emotional responses. For me, it just means more reviews, suggestions, feedback, and on your case inspirations. It’s your reviews, and several others like it, that have inspired me to make a few changes to the end of the story, and I think you might like where it goes next.

If you would like to write an “AU”, you have my blessing. Just remember to cite the original story in your summary.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: December 01 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Little Punishment

I can't 

.I just can't muster the energy to leave a long review 

 

There's too much anger and frustration in me to do so.

 

Cassie doesn't deserve him, and yes you've said they both need to realize the toxicity here.

 

I still think Cassie needs to have a moment of realization where she discovers Nick was telling the truth and how much of an insensitive cunt she's been 

 

Her feelings mean jack shit to me after how's she's treated her husband 

 

Nick needs to stop pining over her, he shouldn't have to win her back. He shouldn't !

 

Fuck Cassie



Author's Response:

Yes, yes, we all know how much you loathe Cassie. The important thing to note in this chapter is that Nick is out of the apartment and away from her. He’s now free to be able to regain control of his powers, but before he can actually do that, he needs to let go. Remember, though, in the end, all the bad ones eventually get their comeuppance.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: September 28 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: A Little Man Lost

I know she's worried and emotional and all

 

But part of me thinks nls Cassie's being a bit of a bitch 

 

She seriously needs to let Nick explain his side of things instead of trapping him a jar like a fucking insect 



Author's Response:

I agree that Cassie isn’t considering Nick’s side of things, but she’s more concerned with his safety than his feelings at the present moment. Like I’ve mentioned before, I didn’t want Cassie to be some unrealistic “perfect, bombshell wife”; I wanted her to be realistic, and to act and react like a real wife would if faced with a similar situation.

Also, with Nick at such a small size, Cassie can’t hear or understand what he’s saying, so she can only go off of his body language. If you recall, she DID notice Nick’s displeasure about being put in that jar, but she was too concerned with his safety, and too upset to find a better alternative.

I know Cassie’s personality maybrub you the wrong way at times, but it those qualities that make her seem realistic.

I appreciate your feedback, and I hope you continue to read on. 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: September 17 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: A Little Birthday Present

Another very sexy chapter

Great work on the interaction and smutty scenes 

 

I find myself disliking Cassie over the past few chapters, I don't know if this is your intention or just my views on her character 

 



Author's Response:

Alright, give me some details: what exactly don’t you like about Cassie? Is it her personality, her features, or how she deals with Nick?

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: October 05 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: A Little Bedroom Trouble

Still thinking Cassie is being way too bitchy to Nick 

 

But am excited to see what happens in the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Well, the stress of the situation is getting to her, and it may be only a matter of time before she cracks...

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: October 29 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: A Little Laundry

Nick, just leave this bitch!!

Seriosuly Cassie has lost all sympathy for me .

Will she ever get help?! Like she needs therapy, they both do. 

She's not listening to his side of the story, and is moving into territories of abuse (she's knowingly forcing him to do what she wants, and abusing him physically if he doesn't)

Is this couple supposed to have a happy ending, or not??

I kind of want Cassie to have a huge epiphany moment of how she's treated him, and actually believe's Nick's story, just to see the emotional strain and toll it'll put on this bitch. 

Sorry if I seem like I'm bitter, but her character (as it stands now) is fucking horrible to Nick. 



Author's Response:

It’s perfectly fine that you’re not a fan of Cassie, and it’s true that she doesn’t listen to Nick. She’s ignorant of his situation, even when she knows he’s small. The strain on their marriage is definitely reaching the breaking point, and it’ll take more than councilling to keep them together.

To be honest with you, your dislike of Cassie is kind of the point. She is supposed to be demonstrating conditional love, and that it’s really not healthy in a marriage. I’m actually really glad that you picked up on it, and feel sympathy for Nick for having to put up with it.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: November 23 2020 Title: With Great Power...

Love the foot content here, another great body-interaction chapter. 

*sigh* Cassie's  little 'heart to heart' has done little to put me on her side, especially since her oblivious ass is still stupid enough to try crushing any 'bugs' she finds.

I hope she 'does' hurt Nick, I hope she hurts him so bad, that when he turns back to normal size, she'll have no fucking choice but confront what she's done, what her oblivious careless atittude and dismissal of Nick's fears, has caused.

She needs to find out that Nick was telling the truth, and that he can't control the shrinking. 

She has to be confronted with how her bitchy fucking atttitude has effected Nick, and almost killed him. 



Author's Response:

When it comes to Cassie, it’s true that she can be oblivious and ignorant to Nick’s plight, but she’s not stupid. She knows that Nick’s latest shrinking episodes haven’t necessarily been his fault, she just doesn’t care. For her, the stress of literally having to worry about every step she takes is tiresome, and who could blame her? She can’t even walk around her own apartment without worrying she might accidentally squash her tiny husband.

But, she’s been ignorant of Nick’s feelings and this chapter not only cements the regret she feels, but also that Nick, even with the way Cassie treats him, still loves her, and that might end up being his downfall. Despite how she treats him, he’s hopelessly devoted to her. Even though it’s true that Cassie needs to realize that she’s in the wrong, HE needs to realize that her love is conditional.