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Summary:

     Nick unlocks a secret power within himself, and begins using it to fulfill his long-held fantasies with his beautiful, plus-sized wife, Cassie; but he soon discovers the dangers that such a power can bring, AND what could happen if he loses control...

Approaching 250 reads…🤗!

Important note: I’ve received some feedback saying that there have been formatting and grammatical errors spotted in several chapters, so if you should find any errors—misspellings, incorrect character names, or grammatical mistakes—please leave a review and let me know ASAP so I can fix them, as these can distract from and greatly diminish the story experience.

I absolutely love reading and responding to your reviews, so please keep them coming. Tell me which parts are your favorites, or something you think can be improved upon. Post feedback (suggestions, criticism, etc.) freely, though please be polite and constructive. Enjoy! I looking forward to hearing from you all!


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Series Of Scenarios
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 150108 Read Count: 253900
[Report This] Published: April 08 2020 Updated: August 24 2021
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: September 17 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: A Little Birthday Present

Another very sexy chapter

Great work on the interaction and smutty scenes 

 

I find myself disliking Cassie over the past few chapters, I don't know if this is your intention or just my views on her character 

 



Author's Response:

Alright, give me some details: what exactly don’t you like about Cassie? Is it her personality, her features, or how she deals with Nick?

Godd(x)s of Youth by Ebb Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A young girl and her very small non-binary roommate attempt to navigate the terrifying world of young-adulthood, as they begin their first semester of university together.


Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Lesbians, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24392 Read Count: 27355
[Report This] Published: April 18 2020 Updated: May 04 2020
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: May 04 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Sorry!

Screw Q

Elaine/Sarah/Hebe seems like a great relationship to go forward and explore.

Great chapter here, looking forward to more ( also Hebe is lucky to have been included and sandwiched between their bodies, and get up close and personal with Sarah's big feet )

Author's Response:

thanks for the review! i do intend to elaborate at least a little more on Q and Hebe's relationship, but I have a lot of relationship dynamics i want to explore so it won't be for the entire story.

Summary:

Roberta continues training her shrunken son to be her perfect sex toy, and befriends another lonely middle-aged mother with a similar love for sticking her own boy in secret places. Done as a commission.

Visit my Patreon for early-access chapters and exclusive stories: https://www.patreon.com/JacksmithShrinkStories


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85535 Read Count: 275298
[Report This] Published: June 11 2020 Updated: September 19 2023
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24 2022 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Damn these two guys are getting put through the ringer in this chapter.

Again you show a detailed and descriptive experience of their time inside their respective GTS as well as do a great job making the reader visualize and imagine the atmosphere of these womens bodies.

As well as the differing personalities, and vernacular of both women.  

I mean these women are tone deaf to their children's pleas and hatred of their situation, but I guess they're pleasure addled minds just won't or can't accept the truth that they hate being used as sex toys XD

Great work as always on this chapter. 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14 2022 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh Kyle's deeeefinitely going to be going up her butt as well as her pussy...

Horny morally/ethically screwed up Milf's seem to be the winners in this story as proven time and time again, so I doubt Kyle is going to get a happy ending (but Joanne and Roberta surely are)

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24 2022 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Is Kyle doing to die? 

Like that would be a powerful way to go, trapped between two horny BBW Milfs.

Plus might show his mother the gravity of her actions.....or not, she might keep going. 

But the fact he's in such pain/injury, I think if they go all out, or continue to, he's going to die. 

I am excited to see how the story wraps up. And curious if there will be any sequels/continuations set with some other members of their group. 

Summary:

 

 

Inspired by many of my favorite stories, and by current events. 

A virus is spreading across the globe, one that shrinks men, and makes womens breasts grow. 

This story follows a young man living with his mother and sister during these times. 

After amount of requests I got, I decided to make a kofi, and I will prioritize writing based on donations. However, I will continue writing regardless if I go donations or not and eventually write spin offs in the same universe following other people.

https://ko-fi.com/ittybitty926


Categories: Breasts, Breast Enlargement, Feet, Gentle, Incest, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24980 Read Count: 161658
[Report This] Published: June 12 2020 Updated: June 16 2021
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Firstly, I hope you're ok. Cancer is a horrible thing to happen to people, and my best wishes go out to you.


Chapter wise, this was really well written.

I loved the section with the congresswoman, her blunt and dismissive attitude toward the male reporter and the imagery she evoked (scrunching toes = manslaughter)

She's framing it as a good thing, but in all honesty, this is just women removing legal consequences for what is murder, sugar coat it in all the progressive/positive empowerment shit you want, it's still women taking power away from men, and freeing themselves of consequences because they are too apathetic or uncaring to want to take precautions around tinies.

They don't want to have to be careful where they step, or make sure tinies aren't on seats, or have to adjust to these new circumstances.

They're basically saying "You're shrunk now, fuck it I'm not going to change how I live my life to accomodate you, so get out of my way or if you get stepped on, who cares. I'm not going to go to jail, or even be fined for kiling you, you are now a inconsequential death to our new social system"

Phew XD Sorry for the rambling there. I actually did like the Congresswoman (even if she's clearly just giving all men the middle finger) and her line about needing to see some congressmen about their voting was a great little line XD They might wind up underfoot and 'accidentally' crushed. 

Or forced to serve her feet (either way, she's enjoying her new position)

Great work on this, excited to read more. 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Firstly, thank you for giving us more of Congresswoman Alexia.

This was a great chapter, and that cliffhanger!!!

Could the tables be turned (or balanced)

Will women now be shrinking too??!!

Will the Congresswoman change her tune if now she  or other women may be shrunken by the virus (I bet she'd shit herself having passed a bill that was suppose to benefit her and now could be detrimental)

Loving this more and more with every chapter.

Summary:

DISCLAIMER: Contains Giantess, Vore, some Gore, and cruel murder in a sexualized context.

In a classic, post-apocalyptic wasteland with a twist, a race of new human mutants with the ability to grow their size to massive scales named shifters pose constant threat to the last few basins of humanity that survived the end. Our story follows a young human named Adam, and a shifter named Maya as they cross paths and change each others lives for better and for worse.

A collaboration between @coalwhite and I that's been gathering some dust for a while. This sucker came out to over 200+ pages, so this will end up being my first long series on here. Won't know how many chapters there are until I edit the whole thing, so let's go on this ride together, yeah?


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Growing Woman, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29545 Read Count: 16852
[Report This] Published: July 19 2020 Updated: August 23 2020
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: July 23 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1-2

While Vore isn't my cup of tea exactly, these two chapters were well written. 

Excited to see where this goes from here. 

Summary:

A hapless 11th grader at a high school with a very strict principal volunteers to help some of his teachers complete training for shrink discipline certification. Whatever that means...

 

(This is my first story - critiques or comments are appreciated)

(Complete as of 2020-12-15 - it seems I can actually finish something from time to time)


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Butt, Feet, Maternal, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83452 Read Count: 166283
[Report This] Published: July 26 2020 Updated: December 16 2020
Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: September 18 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Getting to know Loren Issakinen

I was so eager to read this when I saw it posted, but was busy earlier and just got the chance to sit down and read through it. 

This is now my favorite chapter overall! 

Sexy content wise you continued the trend of great imagery and descriptive scenes, the part with Brett in her shoe was great, as was him sucking on her toes full size. 

The mouth content was also really well done, and evocative. 

Non-sexual content wise, you've really gone a long way in developing their relationship. Or at the very least, establishing the framework for one here. 

Her treatment of him while shrunk is fully understandable, and also links with her lacking of social and personal relationship norms. She hasn't been in a loving totally consensual relationship with someone before, she doesn't know the proper etiquette, and that's without adding in Shrinkee's.

For all her intellect and tech savy, human interaction is where she she finds herself grasping for answers, and the anxiety and genuine fear here when she potentially screws up what could be a first real relationship with someone who likes her and admires her not just physically but also intellectually,  is shown so well and I was feeling her anxiety and fear bleed through. 

I stated before I wanted to see this relationship grow, and how I could see Brett continue it beyond their 'shrinkee training' and schooling, and this only reinforces that. 

I genuinly am rooting for these too, and excited and hoping to see where their relationship goes from here, not just physically but emotionally and personally. 

I have my concerns what will happen to Brett at the hands of the other teachers, or the Amber character. But I am hoping that Loren will either save him, or support him after the potential trauma or negative interactions, being there for him when he needs her, and vice versa. 

(phew) sorry for the long winded rant/review there, but hopefully it gets across just how much I like these two characters together. 

And that's even touching on how excited I am to see the next chapter's content XD



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks! I really appreciate your review. I am glad that you feel that the backstory adds value and that you like the characterization. Loren's character is very close to my heart.

I can't reveal how the story will end, but you'd be correct in apprehending that there are at least some figures ahead who will be of the "unchecked merciless hedonist" sort, and maybe some real malevolence, but nothing bloody or fatal.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: November 23 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Yuan Gu's feet, and delivery to the enemy

Yes!!!! 

I was hoping for an update on this story and you did not dissapoint.

Wow ok ,so I loved his time under Yuan's feet. The difference between hers, being rough athlete + mature feet was a great combination. I loved how you described them as being like rough construction paper with smelly weights.

Her feet definitely are tough, the description of their texture, their smell and sweat was really hot. 

I also loved her dominant attitude and control over Brett. (The backstory with her and Wendy was a nice touch too)

I wouldn't mind seeing more of Yuan, it also is a great precedent of her making her son watch Brett, she definitely has her eyes set on him 'honoring' her feet in future. 

Nice seeing Loren again :D It's great that she's still looking out for Brett (and I still love their relationship, and where it could go in future)

But damn! The egotistical bitch the Amoral Amber (Yes, I know what it is XD) is back.

Wendy.....really, you just handed him over to the girl. (sighs)

Whatever the circumstances, I know Brett is probably going to have a detour on his way home. 

Another fantastic chapter, keep up the great work. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! The pace has slowed a lot since I've just moved house and had way too many home projects to undertake, but I can do a bit of writing on the weekends now.

You may be quite assured that when I finish this I willl mark it completed, I don't like to abandon stories randomly.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: October 26 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - The track girls finish, and Yuan Gu enters

Nice work on finishing up the track girl experience. Brett was definitely put through the ringer there. 

Yeah, Nancy has lost any chance of me liking her. I think one reviewer said it best, she's practically abusing Brett at this point (and the whole incident where she had their neighbour use him) and now threatening him to play along with her demands. She's a fucking bitch, and that's a nicer way I would descrbibe her. 

I am so happy you brought in Yuan, from her short intro here I was right to be excited, now Brett is going to experience the rough and honed feet of a sexy dominant chinese athelete XD 

I can't wait to see more of Yuan and her feet, I wonder if Brett will get any 'release' under those toes, or be forced to release. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: October 17 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Nancy's track team's feet

Nancy.....*sighs*.....still think she's being a bitch, I just struggle to like her with her freaking attitude. 

Brett certainly went through a marathon.....(he he) of feet in this chapter. I knew Amber was going to be trouble!!

She has a seemingly giant sized ego even without needing any shrinkees around, 'the amazing amber'.....seriously. 

But Feet wise, Brett had a lot of different soles and toes he got to taste, and seemingly will taste, so feet and kink wise, some nice choices.

The mouth scene was ok too, and I love that Loren is still checking in. ( I still ship her and Brett so hard!)

I am excited to see Mr's Gu's sister. Yuan seems like she'll be a treat, a dominant asian woman with some powerful feet (smelly and rough and athletic, combined with her attitude, ooh that is going to be a good one) Combine that with the language barrier, that is a tantalizing tease you've left us with. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the feedback!

You've got a good grasp on who the villains are ;)

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: October 02 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Mrs. Alka Padmanabhan

Another great chapter!

Nice switch to a teacher with some smaller feet again (though I love big ones, and any foot is big to Brett)

Nancy is such a bitch! Like urggggghh, I really wish she'd get off Brett's back, he likes ot be shrunk and he likes feet, he's almost an adult. 

(and yes, parents 'blah blah blah' what would others think about him)

In this verse, shrinking tech is out there, it's a wish fulfillment for so many people who would relish the chance to be temporarily shrunk. 

Nancy's attitude is really pissing me off, but I am still excited to see where this goes. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

This universe is not going to make shrinking technology "generally" available - it exists only in fairly limited circumstances and owned by governments, prisons, militaries, universities, and corporations. As far as wish fulfillment goes, well, yes I agree it very much sounds enjoyable, but I like to write about them from a POV where it's still something novel and unusual to the characters, and I especially have trouble enjoying straightforward indulgence without any tension- I like dissembling, misunderstandings, cultural mix-ups, missed connections, and drama. So we'll probably see more of it, including from Nancy.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: September 26 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Mrs. Samson and Nancy's unaware friend Melissa

Damn

Nancy really has some issues she needs sorted out....like really. 

Loved the interaction here, some more great feet content and ass content. 

I'm worried that Brett's wrist band went off earlier, Loren may have tried to contact him. 

Excited to see more as always! And great work on this chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

The wrist communicator that went off was Katie messaging Brett, which he ignored at the time, but he read later in the chapter.

Once Brett told Loren that he was in Katie's custody in last chapter, she knew that she didn't have to keep personally checking in on him.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: September 20 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Loren's exit, and Mrs. Samson and friends

Loved the (mostly aftermath) scenes of Loren and Brett and his thoughts on having brought her to orgasm. 

It's a good idea showing Loren's anxiety and worries over her feelings for Brett and vice versa, it's a realistic scenario I'd say that she is now taking a step back out of concern, be it for Brett himself (in her mind thinking it's probably best) or herself. 

Be that as it may, I am hoping Brett and Loren wind up together in the end still, there is so much connections between them already, they just need to trust in one another, which is admittiedly hard for Loren given her backstory, but I'm hoping they do wind up together. 


Now, speaking of Mrs Samson, some great dialogue and interaction there, I love her having some wide size 11's, and subgecting Brett to them.

It was kind of surreal reading his mother being in the room while he's lapping away at Katie's toe-jam buffet XD But the atmosphere is definitelty one fit for some mischief and teasing, mature women drinking and having a tiny guy in the midst, definitely potential for fun at their feet. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback!

It is easy to write Nancy as I also had a very tumultuous relationship with my mother and if you accept the premise of the world so far, her logic, I can promise you, is very much realistic. I hope I'm making the motivation clear that she is not personally amused by the things that other people are doing with Brett and definitely has no attraction to her own son. But she acts under the belief that it's his fault and he should be refusing to continue with the program. She sees his performance as basically akin to prostitution with her own friends and colleagues. Now, if he chose to break his contract at this point, they'd have to get Brett out of Westwood, and Nancy would have to quit her job. So he's made it hard for her either way, and it makes her very upset with and unsympathetic to him.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: September 01 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Alicia Gomez's vibrant mouth and intense feet

Anoher great chapter, and teacher.

Loved the lively interaction between Brett and Mrs Gomez, the mouth scenes were great. 

Plus her having some big feet that were cooking in those socks before Brett's arrival was a nice touch, gave Brett a much more flavorful feast XD

Not sure how I feel about Sentra, she seems like she's going to be a massive (pun intended) bitch to Brett, and could cause trouble to his so far, mostly pleasant and consensual fun. 

Would love to see more Mrs Gomez, along with some returns from Ms Gwu and Ms Erenli :D



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback!

Lol who is Sentra?

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: August 25 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Miss Erenli's commuting feet

Ok, so this is a review for the last few chapters. 

I loved loved LOVED The Mrs Gwu's feet chapters, they were very well written and the description of Brett's interaction with her feet and their smell/etc was done so well, very sexy. 

I'm hoping we get to see Brett have some fun with her sister. 

This chapter was so well done too, plus some foreboding with Brett's mother XD

His interaction with Ms Erenli was a great light toned interaction, plus some more great foot content. 

Any possibility he's going to interact with her mother? It seemed like the interaction where she spoke about living with her mother, and her not speaking much english, could have been a set up for some interaction with Brett in future? 

Anyway, have been loving these latest chapters, and so excited for more! :D 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback!

What happens next with Miss Erenli and her mother? Does any of Mrs. Gu's circle come in? We'll see in coming chapters ;)

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: August 30 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Miss Erenli's mouth, and interlopers

Another fantastoc chapter!!!

Loving the interaction with with Miss Erenli, again some really well written feet interaction with her and I love her attitude and interaction with Brett.

 

And I love that you inlcluded her mother, nice to see Brett having some time with some more women on the mature-side of things. Love the description of her feet and mouth play with Brett, and loved her take on the experience (how she felt having him service her in those ways)

Hope this isn't the last time we see Umaima :) 


All in all, another great chapter, and some great content.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words!

I really like Miss Erenli because she represents the kind of gentle, humble, and tiny-bit mischievous impulse that I like to see in giantesses. Her mother is really a very similar person, but there's the added layer of a communication gap, language difficulty, and preconceptions about shrinking that lead her to her treating him a little differently.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: September 08 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Alicia's Exit and Loren Issakinen's Interview

(would have reviewed earlier but my computer decided to reload and I lost the review I was writing)

Loved this chapter, it was great seeing more of Brett and Alicia. 


I also liked how she was honest with Brett about her desires and her thoughts on him having been toyed with in her ass, it was an interesting dynamic as well as her being married and how it affected them both. 

You summed it up well, and left a great 'what if' scenario that they both will most likely not be able to replicate again. 

I am very excited for the next chapter with Loren, she seems like a great and interesting character (as you've established with the other characters so far) and I am looking forward to her interaction with Shrunken-Brett. 

I'm also interested in seeing Mrs Samson in a future chapter, you mentioned Brett thinking she would be harsh and strict, which would be fun to see, but perhaps it might only be a front for students, and in private she's the opposite. 

......or maybe sjhe's just as strict and harsh in private too XD 

But we'll have to wait and see.

I'm looking forward to seeing Loren's time with Brett :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your support! Wrapping up a good character is tough but you are right in that it is hard to replicate the conditions...

Ms. Issakinen will be my favorite - and of course you'll get a chapter with Mrs. Samson after.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed
Date: September 12 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Loren Issakinen's Foot

Wooh!

You did not dissapoint with this chapter, a great follow up to their first meeting. 

I loved their interaction, and the scene leading up to the shrinking. I loved Loren's assessment of Brett and how she cut through all the bullshit and simply laid it all out in front of him. 

I also like that she was open and encouraging of him to enjoy himself and 'release' I hope we get to see some intimate moments. 

This also introduces a new form of dynamic which could be explored in later chapters (I know I said this with a few of the other teachers, but I feel it applies here too) where you've laid out a scenario and interactions which could have Brett back with her again.

I could see Brett visiting her on weekends of afterschool for more shrinking fun, or just to talk. 

Loren is presented as not having many people she interacts with in her private/social life outside of her work and job. 

And the visible change in her demeanor with Brett after their conversation, her more playful and gentle actions with him while shrunk, and her willingness to explore his desires (and on the flip side, his desire for her to explore hers) 

Makes me feel that this relationship could grow into something more, and Loren could find a close friend (or little lover/tiny friend with benefits (or normal sized)

Hope this chunky review shows how much I really freaking loved this chapter, and am so excited as always to see more (but even more excited than normally XD)



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! I appreciate your review.

I think that you pretty much have Loren figured out, but she may have a few surprises - although your suggestions for a future relationship that they will have, I believe will not be disappointed.