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A Charmed Life by CoalWhite Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

A prince trades his freedom to become a giantess' pet in order to avoid an arranged marraige.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, BBW, Fantasy, Gentle, Giant, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69086 Read Count: 342614
[Report This] Published: January 14 2017 Updated: December 21 2018
Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It is too bad of me that I want Tor´s brothers to interact with Eric and not exactly in a gentle way?Idk why, but I just really want to xD it should put some things in perspective for him... not to mention I REALLY like giant male content and is lacking in this site. The reason is obvious, is a giantess site, but none the less I enjoy every bit I can have of male interaction.

I still love Tor btw. She is not entirely good, but she isnt evil either, and that makes her realistic. People want her to either be a gentle and perfect giantess or to see as some nasty person that eats humans, but honestly, just let her be something in between. Someone that has rage moments, that makes mistakes, that takes bad choices, but that tries to do her best, and that doesnt regret anything she has ever done and that´s just awesome. Let her be real. Not good, not bad, just real.

And kudos for mick not being a total asshole ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for loving Tor! Someone has to. haha She is a very "real" character. Just hang on for the next swing of her character arc. I'm about to add some stuff to it. ;)

As for Mick, he's not an asshle. Very much the opposite. He's a pansy. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed
Date: April 02 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Now here comes the characters I wanted to see so much!!While Eric hasn´t interacted much with them, I trust he will in the future ;)

I like Mick the most, even if he is a wuss. I hope he gets to redeem himself in the future, because he do cares for Tor, and that´s nice. I actually kinda liked either Thomas or Brad, im not sure, the one who said that she got a pretty mare and a nice stallion?maybe because he actually seemed to at least appreciate the horses?those two are still a mistery. And Jason. Fuck Jason, even if it was pretty stupid of Tor to do that, since she has Eric to look over for. She should try to have some kind of tense cordiality at least instead of open warfare. Not that I can blame her for hating them but its still the wiser thing to do.



Author's Response:

Yeah, anger tends to cloud the judgement. It's one of Tor's faults; her temper. Not the brightest, but she let Idiot have a bit of revenge. ;) lol Thank you so much for your review! I hope the reveal of her brothers was worth the wait. There is definitely more to come in the future. 

Family Reunion 2: Cousin's Mercy by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

A mother and daughter have spent more than a year on the run with the tiny survivors of a vengeful family reunion. However, when a second size-changing incident occurs, they’ll be forced into another unfortunate get-together that may bring down the whole family tree.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Instant Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Family Reunion
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16144 Read Count: 60938
[Report This] Published: February 06 2017 Updated: July 06 2017
Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

OH MY GOD Im so happy with how things turned out. I know im on the minority here, but I just cant let go of Ashley being a colossal bitch to Alisson in the first chapters of the previous story, not her parents killing Anna´s husband. Ashley is still the same entitled bitch, that thinks that her parents are angels that didnt deserved to die not to mention how she humiliated Alison. So yeah, Im not letting go of that and I hope Alison gets back to normal height and that the two of them can have revenge on Ashley and her family. Not his boyfriend though. He is okay.

 



Author's Response:

Can't spoil, but it's probably safe to say based on this ending that Ashley has some incoming events which she's not going to like or agree with :)

Titan Empire - The Federation Chronicles by DrCreep Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

A story series intended to explore the Federation side of the Titan Empire.

These chapters pertain to the story Olympus Colony.

For further reading and background: www.http://thetitanempire.com



Categories: Unaware, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Middle Age (50+), Butt, Crush, Feet, Maternal, Mouth Play, Vore, Humiliation, New World Order, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30508 Read Count: 51037
[Report This] Published: November 02 2017 Updated: November 20 2017
Reviewer: Naoru Signed
Date: November 04 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think you are a bit misguided here. When someone says that a character has two years in titan years, that character is a human. Is like saying that in human years, my dog is 3 years old, but in dog years thats 21 years. A titan that has two titan years is a two year old toddler, not an adult. Everytime the scale has been used on the stories is like that, and this comes from someone who has readen almost all of them.



Author's Response:

I see what your saying.. I'll make an adjustment back to Earth years to eliminate confusion.

Maggie by JackoSpako Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

After attempting to uphold standards, a fast food employee is subjected to the whims of the enigmatic Maggie and her ruthless brothers. 


Categories: Giantess, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12585 Read Count: 25978
[Report This] Published: December 18 2017 Updated: November 21 2018
Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Travelling Family

I love it!I hope Patrick get his turn next ;) also, do you do Roleplays with your characters or are willing to do so?like, maybe on an IM service or something?if so, I would love to!I got Discord, whatsapp, facebook...I hope you are interested. With this I mean like, written roleplay with characters and such.

MAJOR/minor SPECIAL by NotSirk Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

The MAJOR/minor crossover special done to it's completion.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, BBW, Mature (40-49), Gentle, Giant, Muscle, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FM/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36645 Read Count: 41331
[Report This] Published: December 19 2017 Updated: February 11 2019
Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19 2018 Title: Chapter 1: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

Love is so mean...

Okay, if someone read my review on the latest chapter of New lives, then you know Im a big Lindsey fan, and ot reflects on this; to me Sabrina was really annoying, and a couple of her insults were too mean spirited for my taste, like "Gross man body" is really something hurtful and rather low to say and Im happy that Lindsey had the right quip to it, because no matter how hard she tries, Sabrina cant deny she is Izzy´s step sister now, and thats not something that is easily overcome. Now, I ask you, is it normal on this society to date step siblings/siblings?or is still wrong? In any case I prefer Lindsey way more than Sabrina.

 

Which at the end of the day doesnt really matter because she has a crush on the man of the hour, Rando himself!I dont know what to think of it. Izzellah´s crush is more than obvious, and if it keeps going well...so obvious it will break Lindsey´s heart. Not to mention she is still rather judgemental(jealous?)of Shannon, which, acording to word of God(Kurogane335) isnt against an open relationship of sorts. Maybe there is a threesome or polyamorous relationship in the future?who knows!well you are the author, so you know ;) As for shippings goes, Im not a fan of Sabrina and Izzy, like Lindsey and Izzy more, and as good as Izzy and Alejandro can be, I dont want him to be away from Shannon in any way. Though there is Samantha Paolini who could be great for Lindsey or Alejandro...and of course Lisa. Lets never forget about Lisa and how Lindsey eyed her.

 

One more thing, I wanted to ask your permission to rp with others on discord on the MAJOR/minor universe, entirely Ocs, nothing related to characters or events of your stories. And if anyone wants to add me, rp if I get permission, or talk about these series add me!my discord is Naoru #8749 

Sorry for the shameless self promotion, but it would mean a lot to get your approval. You have made an amazing universe and I love it!

 



Author's Response:

Hey! First off go ahead and rp or whatever you want. You have my blessing if that's what ya need. 

As far as Sabrina and Izzy go. It's probably as looked down upon as it is in real life. I'm not trying to promote incest I just like drama and think the nature of their parents relationship makes Izzy and Sabrina's potential romance more tragic. It's like a soap opera. It's honestly not fair for them and it probably won't work out especially with Gloria being pregnant now. Sharing a half sibling would make things even more awkward. That being said MAJORS are far more open when it comes to minors in general which maybe makes it less taboo to MAJORS. Minors are kind of seen as sex objects to some. Part of it is that minors have short life spans so any romance with one is more celebrated because it will be so fleeting. So there's some MAJOR/minor psychology for you! It's a pretty complex issue and I'm sure some psychiatrist in the universe has written dozens of books on it. That all being said if Izzy announces an interest in Sabrina they would have their parents blessing. It's kind of thier fault the two even met and they kind of set it up to begin with. I'm sure some in society would look down on them though. That's why Lindsey picked at the subject. She went right for the jugular but then again so did Sabrina!

Izzy does have a crush, but also knows Alejandro is engaged and respects that too much. Plus she's very afraid of Shannon. It would take a lot for that to workout. Kurogane might write my characters in his story. Will see what he does. If/when that ever happens. As far as Izzy and romance in general? She's too busy for it at this point in her life. She's open to something happening but she's not actively persuing it and trying her best not to be a tease. 

Thanks for the comment! 

 

 

Elite Sister by Link Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

A cure for cancer. A cure for aging. Peaceful societies governed by the Elite — teens and preteens gifted with size, strength, and eternal youth.

Perfect, right?

Kyleigh certainly thought so. Outgoing and overconfident, she began training her shy and awkward sister for servitude at the age of nine. Two years later, as predicted, one of them did indeed become an Elite...


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Gentle, New World Order, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27543 Read Count: 74233
[Report This] Published: January 16 2018 Updated: March 03 2019
Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, good news I hate Ky a little less. A lot. I think is because she is being kind to Les, taking the side that they both will have their advantages and that they are going to be different, but each one strong in their own sense. Only think I dont really like is her still wanting Les to be her vassal instead of cooperating together, but you could say is an emotional crutch Les needs to overcome herself, and that she is so annoyed at Les being the center of attention when she wouldnt have complained if she was, but it may be too much to ask a twelve year old that kind of insight. I hope everything goes well for the two of them



Author's Response:

As for Ky wanting Les to be her vassal, I agree, it seems a bit disparaging.

Then again, vassalship seems to have been in place in this society for a very long time. Perhaps they're unable to feel the inhumanity of it just as a fish is unable to feel wet. The fish knows no different.

Also, we still don't know too much about what being a vassal entails. The word itself connotes negativity, as would slavery, but in NWO stories connotations may not always match the reader's initial perception.

Thanks for the comment, naoru.

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Im going to be the unpopular opinion in here it seems: I dont like Ky. Everyone is so happy because she is going to make a difference, she is still strong after not being an elite, blah blah. All I see is that Les has a terrible self steem, that she keeps seeing herself as inferior to her sister, and that even with the chance to finally be strong, the only way for her to find pride and a sense of worth is being inferior to her sister. Ky was all too happy with seeing her sister as inferior and reinforcing that role, and got all pissy when it didnt became truth, ruining her sister´s only chance at independence by dragging her still into being her inferior. So far is a tragedy to me, and even more because apparently everyone on the comment section keeps praising this abusive, demeaning girl for no reason. I love the story, going to keep reading, love the writing and so on but I really dislike Ky and I hope she gets some humility and for Les to truly shine without being anyone´s inferior



Author's Response:

Ky can be difficult to like, in turn making her POV less enjoyable for the reader. No one wants to be stuck in the head of an unlikable character.

At the same time, she's in a tricky situation. In some ways, her dreams have been crushed. Perhaps she's doubling down on her attitude as a subconscious defense mechanism. Perhaps not.

I don't like to postulate too much because it's difficult for me, as the author, to put my head in the space of a reader, and I don't want to reveal the thoughts/feelings she has that don't make it onto the written page.

Either way, thanks for providing a counter viewpoint.

 

MAJOR/Minor : New Lives by Kurogane335 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

A continuation from Dance with Fire, set in NotSirk MAJOR/Minor universe. I highly recommend reading his story to better understand this New World Order and all. Dance With Fire may be interesting, but I'll try to develop it without too much call back, for new reader's convenience. I'll try to put out a chapter every Saturday.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Couples, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, New World Order, Violent, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223239 Read Count: 235974
[Report This] Published: February 03 2018 Updated: August 26 2019
Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Farewells

I reaaaaaaally dislike Lindsey. She was a consistent annoying brat on the first one, and here she keeps looking down on Sabrina like if she is such a big deal, not to mention being annoyingly possesive at Alejandro. I really hope she realize how full of herself she is.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, Lindsey's character growth will come. So far, she is at the worst time any MAJOR can be, early puberty (well, soon) where they are even more unruly, clingy and aggressive than ever. And to add to the problem is his brother's and her family's past. All the Ferrand are, in fact, over-protective of Alejandro, and for Lindsey it comes out as this clingyness. Plus, she knows that when it comes to the social ladder, she is on an upper echelon compared to Sabrina... bue fail to understand that it doesn't mean that she deserves more or that she is better because of it. Typical MAJOR point of view however.

Anyway, many thanks for the review !

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Farewells

Im actually apalled that no one writes reviews for this, so I will apport my grain of sand, about how things are going in general.

Not going to lie, Lindsay was really annoying for me at first, with her sudden crush on Izzella that struck me as rather superficial and shallow, but now, I have grown rather fond of her. She is exploring herself, her body and mind, and so, and is on a really confusing age, but Im really rooting for her.

And Alejandro...he really likes making things harder for himself, isnt it?he didnt needed to say that he was unbounded in front of the whole school. In fact, he really doesnt need to hide Shannon, he just needs to say that he has a MAJOR girlfriend, and thats it, not even need to say her name. Or maybe he could just say her name and get everyone know he is the fiancee of the biggest girl around, and done, no more troubles for Rando!but of course he has to announce it and say things in the most vague way possible for people to interpret it as that he is single and free for the pick. I thought you were smart Alejandro...

And since Im writing this, I wanted to ask if anyone would like to rp on discord with me using Oc set on this universe, on discord, whatsapp, or even facebook messenger. I mean, if you and NotSirk dont mind. It would be all Oc, no characters from neither of your works. sorry for the shameless self promotion, and really looking forward to the next!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review ! 

I'm glad that you're liking Lindsey, because she is kind of hard to write. I want her somewhere between an "enlightened" MAJOR and a more typical one, with Alejandro being her "good angel" so to speak, while Izzy turns out to be her "inner demon" by unleashing those very common behavioral patterns for MAJORS. Plus, she is at a hard time of her life, entering puberty and all, moving away from home. I hope Alejandro will notice that not everything his rosy for his sister. 

Speaking of our titular Minor main character... he never knows when to quit. I mean, he did lose an arm and all because he was too stubborn to give in to what MAJORS expected of him, and it hasn't changed. Plus, he doesn't want to advertise his relationship with Shannon for the moment... plus he's probably thinking that if he is with Shannon, everyone and their mother will try to woo him away, just to be able to brag that they snatched something out of the Matthewson's purse, so to speak. MAJORS are dumb like that. 

Concerning the rp, I don't mind at all, but you should try and get NotSirk seal of approval, since it is his universe, I'm just a helper, really !

Reviewer: Naoru Signed
Date: June 01 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Farewells

Samantha is a girl after my own hearth. Seriously, she is becoming quickly one of my favorites along with Lindsay, and is a shame that she surely wont end up with Alejandro, not that he needs any more suitors; they would be quite the charismatic pair. In any case, team Samantha ftw! Also fuck Shawna and her cousin. Seriously, fuck them, specially Shawna. This chapter made my day, I absolutely love reading this story every week!

If you want to rp on this universe, please add me on discord! Im Naoru #8749 I promise, it will be really fun!



Author's Response:

Thanks ! I'm not in rp, especially audio, sadly, more of a writer really :p

I'm glad that you're liking Samantha. I won't lie, at first she was meant to be a love interest with whom Alejandro would more of less feel very attracted and finally chooses Shannon. But now with the sexual tension with Izzy, I felt it would be one suitor too many, so I had to find something new for her, and being 'Rando's best friend seemed right. I'm glad you're liking it. This chapter was really hard to write, I had fiished it and then scrapped two third of it because I didn't like at all the vibe it had ended having.

Helena is kind of a typical MAJOR, quite oblivious of the Minor's struggles around her, but she means well. Shawna is more that I felt the need to have some minors (and I'm trying to highlight the difference between a Minor like Alejandro and a minor like her, if you see what I mean) who are actually fond of the world as it is. And I mean, frankly, if you're lucky, what is there to hate for a minor ? You're basically allowed to spend your whole life worry-free ; no need for education, just find a MAJOR, no need for work, just find a MAJOR. Obviously, some probably falls by the wayside and I can't help but wonder how old minors are seen in this society, but overall, if all you want is a carefree life, the statu quo can be great for a minor. But we'll see more of Shawna's PoV in the next Interlude in three weeks.

Because I have other projetcs that I've left on the side for too long and this week I'll try to work on them, so no chapter next saturday nor sunday or before, folks !

Reviewer: Naoru Signed
Date: June 04 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Farewells

Looking at it from that point of view I guess is understandable, but Shawna is still quite rude at how she ignores Alejandro´s trauma and experiences. As for Samantha, there is always Lindsay ;)

 

P.S:Oh no, I didnt mean by voice xD I like to rp writing, not by voice. Is pretty much like writing a story with another person, and I use discord, whatsapp and any other IM services I can get an app on my tablet to make it easier. And if anyone is reading out there and want to add me feel free to do so.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, we'll see some info from Shawna PoV during the next Interlude. I don't want peoples to root for her, obviously, but at least she'll become undestandable, I think. And More than Sammy, there is jenny for Lindsey, just saying :p

Concerning the rp, my GF would probably kill me if I tried, she already let me write the story and that's great :p

Reviewer: Naoru Signed
Date: June 22 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Farewells

So...To capitulate, Shawna has been sexually abused by her aunt since she was a child, and she has horrible stockholm syndrome to a family that doesnt seen anything wrong in using her like a stress relief of some kind. She is an orphan and is scared of what could go wrong, and only wants a life of safety, where she can be sure she is safe, so she has idolized Majors, the beings that can give her the safety that she craves so much. Dear lord you did it again, I have pity for someone I hated. Also, what will she think when she knows that Alejandro is with Shannon?if he even is, since Shannon keeps pushing Izzy on him on one of those "if you leave something let it free" kind of thing. Which is nice but also dumb, since she can lose him. Not to mention I want Izzy with a girl. Like Lindsey.



Author's Response:

That's pretty much it, yup. Shawna won't bulge from her positions, she has reasons to feel as she does, after all, and most minors probably just want to be safe, either because they don't know better or experienced traumas where MAJORS were saviors. And to them, the "Righters" are potentially dangerous, because "their" MAJORS could grow distants and leave them alone. You'll see how she feels about Shannon and Alejandro when the matters will sprout in the story, don't worry. And in my mind, Shannon and Alejandro will end together, but it doesn't mean that him and Izzy can do good to themselves and those they care in the same time :p

Tour Group by Notkent Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 52]
Summary:

A tiny family gets more than they bargained for when their holiday plans take an unexpected turn. A tale with characters galore and hopefully, something for everyone.

 

Will continue soon on my Patreon (https://www.patreon.com/NotKent?fan_landing=true).


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Incest, Insertion, Legwear, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77931 Read Count: 284756
[Report This] Published: September 01 2019 Updated: April 12 2022
Reviewer: Naoru Signed
Date: January 08 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"you are my best friend in the whole world!" Then proceeds to get said friend on a massive ass and masturbate to it. Sounds legit.

Now seriously, I hope she will apologize in the morning when the anger fades away,and the rest of Becca accidents to be accidents.If not then I hope Anna never forgives her. And that it actually hurts Emilie. Like,they are best friends,allegedly,and it may be silly to be upset over some hot action I enjoyed very much(Beca is best girl)but is really sad Emilie would so flippantly use Anna as some sond of masturbatory toy to act on her crush and enact her fantasies by proxy. Like,she should be at least sorry the next day right?

To Break in a Pet by WriteofPassage Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 262]
Summary:

The lone survivor of a horrific Shrinkee massacre is left dealing with the four giantesses responsible for the bloodbath as they compete to become her sole owner. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 411107 Read Count: 248088
[Report This] Published: September 01 2020 Updated: February 18 2024
Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22 2022 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Okay wow. The Abbots are model parents all of a sudden. I mean not really, I already had noticed how good they were to Harper, and loving of her and supportive, but yikes, they really are the only ones of the bunch that don't treat their daughter like shit?Leah's dad has a weird thing going on with her, and Naomi's parents are seemingly strict and poor Molly has...oh god, I feel so bad for her. They are shit to her, they are shit to Anabelle, like I can't believe they made even the Abbot's treatment of Annabelle to look sort of nice. I see Molly's mom stroke a chord in people and I do see why. She sucks in the most close to home way to people who had never dealt with shrunk people but probably with overbearing, strict parents.

I'm worried for Molly and Anabelle and their mental state if they are both pushed so damn hard. This chapter was more about the parents than Molly and I'm seeing a trend. I do like that. Actually if I may be so bold, I would LOVE a prequel story with the parents as youngsters in college themselves and some new shrinkie or them creating their murderous evil group. I don't know why but the more stories about the parents's pasts I heard the more I want a story focused on them when they were all young. It would be tons of fun. But then again is my imagination going crazy xDDD

I'm worried that Molly being too submissive to stand up for herself or for Anabelle will hurt her chances of imprinting. Is a pity, I do love her but she needs to man up. Woman up. Idk.

Looking forward to the next one!!



Author's Response:

Haha! Right? In comparison the Abbots are suddenly parents of the year. 

Yeah I agree with you, Naoru about the negative reaction Mrs. Gates received. I think her cruelty is a lot more realistic and recognizable than attempting genocide on shrunken people. 

I've written SO much background on the parents in their college years and the founding of the BSA. If people are interested, I'd maybe write a couple of chapters about them in a spin off story or something. 

As for Molly' womaning up...you'll just have to see if she steps up. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

a279;Thanks again for the comment Naoru! 



Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2023 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Sorry for taking so long!I forgot to check for a while hahahaha

Okaaaay so you were right in telling me to watch out for Nell. Her having the same desires as Naomi, but hiding them so Anabelle wont dislike her is...interesting, I have to say is a lot more than I gave her credit for, though I still like Naomi more. 

And talking about Naomi, things got tense with chef Dufort, poor Camilla and Naomi being incredibly petty. I'm really happy that Anabelle managed to get a win, finally, and save her, at the cost of...giving hell toa child molester??I seriously dont get Anabelle sometimes. If I was her, and had been so horriblu bullied, no one would ever get me to shut up, I would be bringing hellfire to Zoey and all the bullies. But oh well, I guess she has her reasons. And oh my god Zoey keeps getting worse and worse and more abusive, obsessed and deranged. And Naomi is not far behind, though Naomi is better because she would never beat Anabelle.

Im still kinda starving from Naomi content, too much Nell, more Naomi hahahaha enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2022 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

This was amazing. Very nuanced and got our girl Molly all the attention and love she deserved. I reaaaally like everything that's going on in here. Molly standing up to her parents after Anabelle went through some intense torture was as sweet as Anabelle standing up for her. It was amazing. I loved that dream sequence, Molly as an actual giantess fits really well and Poppy becoming bigger and bigger on the dream sequences is clearly an indication of how much she is winning the battle over Anabelle's mind. And well, I do appreciate some love to Molly's ass. I

Is interesting that Molly stayed nuanced; she is nice, gentle, loving, and a match in personality and trauma bonding for Anabelle but her views have been warped by her parents and the organization they created. She operates under "If shrinkies are slaves is because they are naturally weak and so deserve it because they let it happen" which is some actual rhetoric used for slavers back in the day, only with shrinkies they do are smaller and weaker so is easier to be convinced of it.

Everytime there is an imprinting episode Anabelle loses a bit of herself, and the next comes stronger. I think next will be Naomi with perhaps some Nell and their parents so Leah gets last spot and the last word unless some Zoey or whatever happens?I...don't want a surprise xD Naomi and Leah deserve their time and I'm quite excited for Leah specifically. In case Naomi is next I'll go ahead and say I'm not a Nell fan, and that I think Naomi's parents will be another nightmare.

My ranking hasn't changed much, if at all, so far Leah is still my number one, Harper two, and then Naomi and Molly. I think Anabelle imprinting with Molly could be nice if Molly keeps her parents at bay, though I still prefer Harper over her. Can't wait for Naomi and Leah!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Narou!


I love writing the one-on-one scenes of Annabelle and the FF. They're always very revealing. Those dream sequences are the most difficult to write, but they're also my favorite parts to write, so I'm glad you appreciate them (and Molly's ass).

I'm glad you said the thing about Molly's rhetoric, because that's what makes their ideology so dangerous (and we'll see more of that going forward) because it's based in pseudoscience that has proven to have been historically effective (although this story doesn't exactly take place in our universe). 

I think you'll be slightly surprised by the order of the FF, but everything is done for a reason. I'll also say that I am so thrilled that although Zoey has physically been in maybe two out of 30-something chapters, everyone seems to be excited for her return--as you should be. 

As for the FF, I'm curious to see if your ranking shifts after the backstory chapters. 

Thanks again for commenting Naoru! I always like seeing what you think. 

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Okay I have a confession to make. I really like gobernor Windsor. He is a sexy, manipulating, evil motherfucker, and from the set of parents he really is my favorite, so when the spotlight went to him I was really happy. Now, I do expected him to go for manipulation over sex or punishment/training, but I wasn't expecting him trying to get Poppy to imprint on him at all. I really doubt that will ever happen, but it showcases the weird rivalry relationship he has with Leah. Now, what does makes him worthy while the Abbots weren't?Can't be cruelty, they are cruel too, and literally ate a shrinkie like if it was the meatball scene from Lady and the tramp, can't be attractiveness since the other dads are attractive too, so, what is it?what do you want Poppy?

With that said, Leah will always be number one darling in my heart, and her seeing Poppy sing her father praises had to be awful for her. So of course she is tense and anxious and will want for Anabelle to imprint on her ASAP. Now, what will this end in?who knows. I'm indifferent to toejam, don;'t think she is a type 0 at all just some deluded girl, Byte confirming that Anabelle's blood brainwashes tinies into servitude which bodes bad for when Naomi's mother experiments on her blood and possibly discovers it??

Waiting for more of our beautiful goddess Leah next time!!



Author's Response:

I agree Naoru! There's a reason I introduced him first to Annabelle. His cruel laugh when she first tried to call for help in one of the earlier chapters was meant to be the first instance of a bait and switch from one of the FF's parents.

Hahaha what does Poppy want, indeed. The imprinting whys, whos, and hows will be explained in a few (two??) chapters. Honestly it's a huge reveal that will amaze some people and disappoint others. The clues are there, but I don't think anyone can guess because I haven't connected them yet. 

Not going to say anything about the blood thing because I'm afraid I'll spoil something, but keep up that thinking, Narou.


Thank you for commenting again, Naoru, your lust for arguably one of the most evil characters in this story always makes me laugh.




Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

@Ralgar, WriteofPassage has already stated several times that they are busy with their own personal life and you go all thanks and then a few days later you come to ask "is it done yet??are you updating yet??" and is not even the first time you do it. For some reason you keep coming just to poke the author demanding updates, and at this point you are starting to be rude. This story has always managed on a slow update schedule. This is not a paid job, this is a hobby and the author can post updates whenever they are able to or wish to do so. Just wait like the rest of us, and stop coming like a child on a road trip "are we there yet?are we there yet????"

Stop being annoying, respect the author, their time and their personal life. The update will come when it comes, so for once, please, pretty please with a cherry on top wait for it without complaining.

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Okay so the Leah chapter is here and is every bit as glorious as I have expected. It tell us that Leah, after losing her mother at such a young age and then "losing" her friend, one to a disease and other to what she perceives is a disease, has some horrible trust issues and in general anxiety over diseases so is no wonder that a small person, genetically made to adore her and love her unconditionally who is virtually immortal is a dream come true for her. Despite looking the most confident of the group she is actually the most insecure, and her possessiveness makes a lot of of sense now. She is terrified of losing the people she loves.

And with that it also comes the weird relationship she has with her father where apparently they see each other as equals and compete fiercely over anything and everything which...could be good if you see it as a sign of respect, and I'm sure Leah sees it this way but to me competing with your child like that is just...not good parenting. You are essentially bullying them, and telling them you are not and will never be a parental figure to be trusted, but a rival and for a girl that lost her mother I say she needs a parental figure more than a rival.

I think is interesting that it gives the society of shrinkie haters an extra dimension. They see shrinkism as a tragedy or horrible disease, to the point a mother would be willing to kill her own beloved child over it. Reminds me of people that would want a dead child rather than an alive gay or trans child and it makes them seem more real in a very sad way. The toe jam revelation says a lot about them and how they are and behave.

Also, I'm kind of happy Leah did what she did with whatshisface because I really, really, reaaaaally didn't care for him. As a love interest he is like bland and uninteresting. I'm sorry because I love all your characters and I know you put a lot of effort in writing them!But I really hopes he never comes back. Also, I LOVED that Leah heard Anabelle singing and I dont know if I want her keeping the recording to herself or if I want her to share.

Also like someone before me commented I dont want anyone to get their just desserts. For me the ideal endings are Anabelle imprinting in one or all of the girls and remain more or less herself and actually learn to love one or all of the girls, or for the girls to organize a coup and throw over their parents. That would be fun. But then again I have always vouched for the imprinting ending



Author's Response:

Really interesting comments Naoru. 

Annabelle really is a godsend for Leah. She seems to check off every item on her list, so it's no wonder that she views her as hers by right. And yeah, all of the BSA Founders have...interesting ways of parenting. They do truly love their children (yes, even Mrs. Gates) they just have very warped ways of viewing the world and that features into the morals/lessons they wish to instill into their children. Yeah, HDD is a not so subtle metaphor for (insert marginalized group), they believe they are doing the right thing by eradicating them because of how society treats them, without maybe considering how their own actions are a symptom of said treatment. 

Hahahaha I think the Oliver hate is very funny. Personally, I like Oliver but I also have the advantage of having his and Annabelle's past history in my head. 

As for the ending...we'll just have to see.

Thanks for your comments Naoru you gave me some good insight. 


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