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Fallout multi-chapter Fan Fic with Scalie/Scaly giantess content. (For those that don't know Scalie/Scaly is Furry for lizard people)

After years of hardship, life had finally given Drew the break he needed. He had a beautiful girl, good friends, and a home in a small pre-war town just north of the border in Canada.
All that had ended when the Greenskins AKA Super Mutants had attacked. The love of his life as well as half the town was either taken or killed. Those that survived left and Drew along with his friends Jack, Amy, and Jarik found themselves in a town known as Colville.
There they rebuilt their lives, but the pain and memories remain and now, there is a new threat, one that may threaten the whole region

This is where the story begins.

Note: this is a fetish story with fetishized characteristics. Inspired by the Domclaw pics that are out there.


Categories: Giantess, Sci-Fi, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 144284 Read Count: 49305
[Report This] Published: July 31 2022 Updated: October 22 2023
Reviewer: DcZ Signed
Date: July 31 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Colville

Well its a start,  pretty good characters, character interactions, and plot so far. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for checking out the story. Plenty of plot still to come.

Summary:

Vann is an adventurer, or he'd like to be, he doesn't have much in the way of strength, and despite years of trying he doesn't have any magical talent either. Desperate, he makes a plea to the divines, and finds his way to a lost temple where a forgotten goddess is willing to raise him up as her champion, granting him immense power. The catch? Well, she's the goddess of Female Domination, and the rituals and acts she demands in exchange for her blessings can be quite... interesting, as can her punishments for disobedience. Luckily Vann has his friend Tyra, herself a lady knight and experienced adventurer, to help him navigate things, and she's quite eager to make sure he performs those rituals correctly...

A comedic fantasy story about a mage in the service of a femdom goddess fond of size changing, and the adventures he has along the way.


Categories: Adventure, Breasts, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Muscle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Untitled Greenanon Monstergirl Setting
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59649 Read Count: 54269
[Report This] Published: August 10 2022 Updated: September 15 2022
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Date: August 10 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Goddess Awakens

Oh this seems the like start of another good one. 




Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: August 15 2022 Title: Chapter 2: A Taste of Power

Oh yeah time ill tell if it was worth it. Hopefully magic grows with usage and time. (and sorry everyone for the long review)


With what kinds of people Zenovia’s followers were, some obviously there the Big Band Evil Guy/Gal(BBEG) of some people's adventures, and all the way down to the cult that runs a brothel or something. What interesting conflicts or interactions between them and the other deity(ies) of love or similar, back when they were more common. 

There's gadda be some full sapient(more inclusive and expansive than human) sacrifice rituals in there that he and others obviously couldn’t do, legally at least, and cause Vann would die. But two could be comoed, in a ritual circle crushing a shrunken men with high heeled shoes makes the high heels no longer cause any balance concerns, running in a stiletto on a muddy battlefield would then the possible and only left to the person's own skill or balance. Crushing them inside the shoes makes the shoes perfectly fit and perfectly comfortable, and probably make it so the wearer and Zenovia has controls of the inside so tinies can be held inside, like what Eletha is doing but better in every way, more convenient, or give more options. Subject as well to the quality if the footwear and now of Zenovia’s iconography is on it, and what she thinks of it. Also another one of crushing under barefoot to give some super agility, dexterity, divine sure-footedness, or never-ending perfect food health. And probably some other version that uses women, cause some be traitors and heretics or such (better to have a way of dealing with such, maybe something only Vann can see, cause he’s choose), or just women were used, Female Domination can be a female dominating another female too. So the sacrificing of both a man and a woman in those rituals, 6 men and 6 women, was ultra overpowered to whoever managed it. (and IF that's the case, the enchantments Zenovia’s book has for these (when the sacrifice rituals aren’t used, or instead use a tiny as a constant source of power) might be interesting to compare with normal balancing, sure-footed etc. footwear enchantments that are used, or that nobles use because they can) 

Or some rituals might get some maxing out or bonus from being done to a death. Probably highly variable, only some, and it is probably Zenovia’s call at that point. 

And there could also be similar rituals for boobplate, bikini plate, and others. Maybe some done in a ritual circle (or shape), or a piece with a different effect applied, prevents true death within that aria, so some of the rituals could get real nary without real death, but cannot do the sacrifice rituals (cause no death). Or a building enchantment that shrinks men on some premises or aria or building. Or allows for the shrinking and growing of space, a more conceptual way of making bags of holding or TARDIS spaces. Far from real spacial magic and what it can do, but just good enough. 

More back to what some her followers did, some noble lady and her the female members if her clan, did the high heels and various clothing ritual on their entire shoe collection and wardrobes, and with their maids and servants too, got taken down by someone, or maybe the place got cursed, so there useful materials from that mansion or castle, and some of their shoes and such are artifacts laying around. Or a female knight made an order and they used her enchantments for their armour. Or an all female merc/bandit band, ambushing caravans and even having princesses or queens for ransom, besides the men. And with all the other leftovers of Zenovia’s followers from back when. Probably even some hidden valley or place that a follower teleport shrunken villages and a city or two to play goddess with, heresy probably but Zenovia was asleep, and maybe that follower died, and now its a tiny land with several tiny kingdoms. 

With being 500 feet (152 meters. 300 ft is as tall as the statue of liberty, so 500 is tall) of Embiggen (besides what stories or records say back they’ve happened), and depending on how big dragons are(if they exist, from just DND kins, or bigger (thought hopefully not as big as Ancalagon the Black), you know some of her followers use her rituals and spells on dragons (or tried). Cause they could use Embiggen to maybe stuff a dragon down their underwear, or shrink them for the same and use them for even more power. Or a female dragon decided to try Zenovia out, the whole politicking/drama between the dragon god(ess) and her when their domains or followers overlap/interacted would be an interesting story, if it ever gets motioned or involved (besides the dragon one, deities or smithing or craft, and the one of love/sex for the brothel thing. so many) . If Embiggen increases size by scale and not to a size, a dragon or existing giantess might try these. Whatever happened to the ones that did. 


Two, more practical things: first, with dragons as an example, and other races might not be mammals, for females don't have boobs, and I can guess Zenovia likes those. So some "womanizing" (by humanoid standards) ritual might be a thing if she deems it needed for that follower. For lizards, insectoids, fish/aquatic that aren't' mermaids, maybe dryads/trees (depending), or even non-humanoid sapients. Goda think of theses things as a diety, can't be too exclusive. 

The second one is that since its female domination, then Zenovia had to have rituals, or a few, for shen women wanted to have children but not have men involved. Either between two, bick one or the other both to have kids. Or be a "virgin" birth (of course it won't be, this godess loves sex), or some bigger one what brings Zenovia directly to help, makes some charecter creator like dream for the daughters(s). Or and orgy ritual needing at a bare minimum 10 women, whatever it does, And maybe some particular for sons and such, have to keep up the populations of both. Perhaps the two-women-mating ritual or spell was taken after an all female noble family or two had it for a while, Zenovia's influence was removed, and now is something for the court physician and mages of royals and nobles houses have just in case, cause it's not a bad precousing is two houses are need to marry and only daughter are available, or two women fell in love but an heir is still needed. Noble dynastic arranged marriage management, probably pretty boring in the end.


Well this was another long one, hope it gives food for thought. (Again, sorry to anyone reading the reviews and seeing this thing)



Author's Response:

Zenovia is probably more of a chaotic neutral aligned deity than outright evil. I like to think she intended her followers to do good in the world but just got caught up getting horny watching all the chaos they were causing. Her followers definitely ended up as villains in plenty of other people's adventures. 

As you said for obvious reasons Vann doesn't want to do any of the lethal rituals lol. That said Zenovia has plenty of enchanted artifacts floating around which we will see later in the story. Also Zenovia definitely accepts women dominating women as part of her worship, though men are her preferred targets.

Zenovia can probably do all things to help out if a woman really desires not to have a man around, that said bigger rewards demand bigger service.

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Date: August 16 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Setting Out

Now that was a fun 4th wall break. 

And the various things dwarves are evidently up to. Quite advanced getting to germ theory and it being heard all the way out there, if they even visit a truly big city or capital, bet all the doctors and healing will be mentioning it and how to have healing spells with it in mind. If they need to get new healing spells. And more of the dwarven ‘nonsense’, plus what others may have come up with that's similar. 

Rumana’s going to be important later isn’t she. 


Back sith the rituals thing, Zenovia must have come up with so many rituals during her horny has about her followers, it would be curious enough to eventually learn what she removed/left out of her book, and what she left in, considering what rituals are already there and how her followers acted back when. Some could have even taken that magic for a different goddesses or demons or such of their own use. Means some divine legal battle has to happen over taking her spell for a different high being used. So that's another task for the pile , destroying those ‘corrupted’/heretical versions’. In some way. And other divine catching’s up she’ll have to do now that she's awake. 

And other leftovers, if someone is killed after being Embiggen, would it leave their giant corps, or would it undo? That will have to be learned naturally later, probably part of the scars of some city from when that happened. Or some lakes in the vague pattern of footprints, even if eroded they still line up. Their clothing might even still be around, if it comes with the ritual. Add that to artifacts of Zenovia’s, old tower sized armoured heels left somewhere, or a full suit, or such. 


And I do recommend looking up any dnd store channels on Youtube or r/DnD so you can get more inspiration that I could probably fit into a whole story’s worth of reviews. Get stuff for the background or encounters. Whatever you think is cool or good. 

And a patron avatar of Tiamat art, cause it looks good, spent ages looking for it just for this, cause it what made me think of whatever dragon deity and Zenovia discussing about their followers overlapping:https://nitter.net/ishton/status/1385648294853029898 



Author's Response:

The dwarves here are sort of steampunk/science focused relative to the setting's other races, though far on the frontier their more impressive achievements aren't visible. Of course try convincing people of germ theory in a world where evil spirits and curses actually exist, I imagine those dwarven medical pioneers have many frustrating talks with the setting's priests and mages.

Rumana will appear later in the story yes

Obviously there are some heavy DnD and general fantasy RPG tropes heavily influencing this one. I'm well familiar with them, so don't worry on my account!

Anyways as for Embiggen I imagine you'd go back to normal if you got killed while it was active, though the giant footprints might still be out there from whenever it was last used though. The giant growth thing would be a rarely used thing even for Zenovia's followers, as Vann notes it's extremely lengthy and difficult to pull off.

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Date: August 18 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Enid of the Wilds


Well that answers what kind of ‘beast kin’ (if the is the term) people are around, unless there are also Catgirls/fox girls of the Khajiit/Tabaxi variety. 

Either and both could work. 


But Vann really does need to read more into the books. 



Author's Response:

This story is a sort of parody of DnD style adventures and RPGs in general, so yeah there are probably furrier girls out there, I'm definitely into monstergirls but the full on anthro/furry kind like Tabaxi don't really do it for me, so it's unlikely that one will show up in an erotic sense in one of my stories. Nothing against anyone who is into that, I certainly won't claim a moral high ground with how many monstergirl stories I've done, but that's my personal taste lol.

Vann definitely needs to read more into the books, more will be explored as we go along.

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Date: August 24 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Out of the Mountains

Well, I bet other elves take the human “guiding” a little farther then even Eletha would be conformable with, or even thinking about. 

And outright immortality, yeah some elf follower of Zenovia has got to still be around, and doing her own human breeding program for all those millennia. The smaller since make storing and controlling easier, and they could easily kidnaped new people for more diversity if needed. If were talking practicality. Might have even forgotten what Zenovia is all about, and so has to get a reminder or dealing with now that shes awake, and to clean up the mess now that she might need to change her image and not get on the worst side of whatever keeps the gods in check. Or the elf went insane as immortal can, having somehow avoided whatever normally let elves not go crazy from time. 

Some pantheon of Order Undivided, or some chaotic lawfull eldritch thing is their enforcer, lawfully in that it follows the laws of physics, and somehow doesn't need magic or even divine power to do anything, and chaotic cause chaos theory  and quantum mechanics. Maybe even the gods are unnerved by it, needing “sock puppets” in its “appendage”, that doesn’t make peoples heads explode, go mad, or freak out, to even interact with mortals. 

Could be funny if it had an anti magic effect, in that the laws if physics beat up magic for its oucnk miney and then assert dominance with a T pose, causing all magic to undo its effect and everything follows physics, get everyone’s interviews of whatever divine legal case it was doing, and then leaves. Just weird. 


And the Dwarves already know the world is round, kinda surprised the elves didsn’t figure it out, going to some high enough mountains and looking, or just being around so long so notice. 

Guess we’ll find out latter, goblins need dealing with. 




Author's Response:

The thing is elves in this setting are (mostly) not evil, just kind of arrogant. The ones that do what Eletha does really do believe themselves friends of the humans they "guide," like most would never do anything to hurt them and would be really troubled if they upset them somehow, at the same time they don't really understand why humans might find the knowledge that their best friend basically acted as a mentor to everyone in their family for centuries might be off putting.

Without going into spoilers there are some servants of Zenovia who are still around and doing things they shouldn't be.

Knowledge that the world is round was actually pretty common among educated classes since something like 300 BC, mostly thanks to Greeks and various groups that learned from them. This world is a sort of medieval fantasy mash up, so they'd actually be late in making that discovery, but the dwarves here are more scientifically oriented rather than magically inclined. There are probably elves that do know the world is round, but their society and ideas change slower than others.

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Date: August 24 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Out of the Mountains

Fair of why the elves take these new ideas and changes so slowly, probably also why it will be a while till they get why it might be questionable to be ‘guiding’ a family line. Even if not malicious  a majority of the time. And I know that the world was found be round so long and ago and know, hence the mention of figuring it out by now 

Wonder it would be considered insanity by normal elves for an elf to actually adapt as fast as humans or dwarfs. And orphan or kidnaped elf baby raised by humans and so has the mindset and timeframe. 

Or some humans found out or got told (this couldn’t have been the first time), and took it far worse then Chadwick, and did something. Killing or ensuring some long term hatred of elves is the least that could happen. I could see someone erasing the elf’s memory, taking some illusion flesh crafting for the ears, and passing them off as a humans and made to life as sone for a whole, not even noticing the lifespan themselves. And thats if the person has the magical skills for it, things could be so much cruder, and some use for a magical and immortal creature could be found. Or other curses. 

And then there wether any gods care about this, or even what the ones who do do. Or some culture or secret society of human is around to deal with this somewhere because they didn’t approve. 

So interesting stuff. 


And not really a spoiler to me, of course some of Zenovia’s followers are up to no good still. It would be interesting in itself of the history of the followers of other gods and how they do thing the diety doesn’t wish, what they were, how they were dealt with, and what/if divine law/protocol is about this. When it becomes relevant of course, doesn’t even need detail just casual comments. 



Author's Response:

I think that as the elves age maybe some of them realize why humans react negatively to it, for Eletha at 800 she's still a "young" elf who thinks she has humans figured out but clearly doesn't. Elves are probably saved from too harsh of a reaction by the fact that ones who do this probably cultivate a positive relationship before the revelation, that said yeah there are probably some people who took it worse than Chadwick, outright murder is probably pretty rare but some elves might not find their reception with their friends to be as warm as it was. 

The gods probably don't care, the elves are "immortal" in the sense that they don't age, most of them still find their end eventually. To the likes of Zenovia Eletha's 800 years are nothing and she's no different than the rest of the group, even more spiritual beings like Enid, who may or may not be immortal themselves, don't spare a lot of concern for what the peoples of the world are doing unless they really start upsetting the balance of things. I doubt the elves would be successful manipulating their way into power over humanity as a whole, this world has too many other players and humans are capable of their own magic, divine intervention, or technological growth. Any elf who wanted to use this tactic against humanity would also run into the same problem as a Crusader Kings player, 300 years breeding your perfect king and then one lucky assassin brings you back to square one.

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Date: August 24 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Goddess Awakens

Yeah, fair that she couod be young and not realise it, and all the pain of and work to make a perfect king, cause like you said woth Crusader Kings, its way to easy to loos it all, and thats assuming being in isolation and extreem controll. Some other humans might notice/find out and not want a king put there by an elf period, or some unluky plague gets the perosn, and then thers even older elves which might come along to stop it becaus they’ve been wiser. 

And then there the elfes that sucseded at theses, the backfire statistic (some elf had to have looked into those even for intellectual curiosity), or the evil elves that needed to get stoped, or some early history horror stoies, might inform some more official rules on it and why elfe children ard how they are a out this, if one asked thier teachers/elders. But thats all decent background lore, not neceseraly relevent to the first male shosen of a feail domination godess that has macro and microphilia. 



For akilmilo’s fair point on the true immortality, might be the slow growth or maturation rate thats normaly there, or elves have an ultra low breeding chance compared to others, medieval infant mortality rate (if they already have a hard time with germ theory, without some elf only diseases as well), dying in wars that they had to have had in the past, elf on elf murder, dying on theses adventures (since if Vann handt shrunk, had more magic, skill and had wanted too, he could have killed Eletha, meaning another more powerful mage could, and thats just mages in a straight up fight) or anything else that can kill anyone. 

Or at least these might contribute enough. 




Author's Response: There will be more on Eletha's development as we go on, probably not a ton on elven society as a whole since it's not super relevant to this particular tale. Vann could definitely beat her if he really focused on it, he's more powerful and he could spend a few days having fun with Tyra and come at her almost unstoppable, of course they're all on the same side luckily.

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Date: August 28 2022 Title: Chapter 6: The Plains

Huh, yeah there would be some elven ruler from the very beginning, must have been an interesting time when they were cave people, or living in thatch or mud huts. And just how good he is at king stuff, had to have gotten economic and diplomacy mathematics down to instinct by now at least. 

And Creation being after Time, so some weird things must be from that period, not to walk of before Time. Or Space. 


And two artifacts of Zenovia’s, a whip and heels. How curious you don’t even name a hight or what exact kind of heel, thought that might be variable, wether at the wearers command (a not immediately obviously setting) of Zenovia’s and what she thinks best fits the wearer. Like the speculation a few reviews ago, theres probably some instruction on how to make similar heels in the book. Now just to think what other artifacts do. And All the JEWELLERY.

And while in that section, though, there probably also taboos, and maybe needing shrunken for it to get the detail right. 


Another good chapter!


P.S.  heres "The truth about chainmail bikini" and you can look for inspiration on more of Zenovia’s artifacts, and the other female armour subs. Enjoy!



Author's Response:

To go into the elf thing it's a sort of Tolkien thing where even among an immortal people there are only a handful of them still alive from the very beginning, I imagine the Elf king mentioned by Eletha is incredibly wise and like you said has probably mastered politics, economics, etc, and it's thanks to him that the elves are still around and prosperous despite being haughty jerks to the rest of the world.

There are a few religions that detail what divine beings are up to prior to the creation of the world, and it's always trippy and weird, Zenovia probably wasn't the goddess of anything at that point and if it's not obvious she's not as serious as most gods probably are.

I'll try to give some more description of the boots next chapter.

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Date: August 28 2022 Title: Chapter 6: The Plains

Oh yeah that elf king must be dam good at his job.

Yeah, Zenovia probably didn’t do much during that period compared to other deities, and yeah that must have been weird, but also might mean there are gods not a part of Creation, and things that stayed outside of Creation. Or what some of the gods discovered and built during that time. 

 

Oh and it wasn’t a complaint about the boots, just an interesting choice. Could work out either way. 

And theres a version that allows flight, wall/surface climbing (make any wall or ceiling the floor for the wearer), water walking, stealth enhancement, ones made of metal (for full plate) to crystal(especially magical), prison for tinies, visual customization, and maybe minor Enlargement if paired with other stuff. Or besides a Zenovia-magic-use boost/bonus/modifier. Or they have/can be unlocked or added in its own quest, it’ll have to be seen. 

It’s all up to you as always and I trust you will do a fine job wordsmithing it. 

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Date: September 02 2022 Title: Chapter 7: In View of the Enemy

Another good chapter!

Wth just the efficiency, Vann could make some money writing some papers on how to improve the other shrinking or growing disciplines, add to general scholarly knowledge. If combined with whoever regularly uses bags of holding, or the wagon/cart/crate version, shrink the cargo first, put them in, then shrink the containers too(if there is not incompatibility between the spacial and shrinking magic). 


And yeah, Eletha having it a bit rough dealing with Chadwick now, and probably on such and incredibly short timeframe of days compared to her previous years. 


And now thinking about it, would a shrunken person yield the same amount of blood as their full size, maybe once it leave them it rapidly unshrinks, or with some modification to the spell. Obviously that could work on Embiggen so far. Reason for this thought is a vampier could use this to drain full people using this, ore more easily hid them and eat them, and with Embiggen they could get a big source. Or a follower took several vampires and make a deal to let them drink while shrunk to max out blood. That a benefit for the vampires. 



Author's Response:

Zenovia's shrinking magic is probably mostly used offensively rather than as an enchantment, keep in mind she probably imagined those spells being used by powerful dominatrices shrinking their foes down to toy with them.I suppose a sufficiently powerful mage could shrink bags of holding within each other, plenty of DnD groups abuse the mechanic after all lol.

Eletha has a ways to go yet before she realizes why her friends don't approve of her behavior, even if she has the best of intentions.

A vampire could probably use shrinking magic to transport victims easier but would want to restore them to full size for proper feeding I'd think. I suppose shrinking potential thralls for the blood offering could be an easy way to create a lot at once.

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Date: September 02 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Goddess Awakens

Oh and here the bikini armour thing, embedded links don’t work :(   

https://www.reddit.com/r/ImpracticalArmour/comments/w96l5j/the_truth_about_chainmail_bikini_by_mcnostril/

And a good gag is Full Body Armour, search is on that sub or in r/gaming .



Author's Response:

I've seen it, very amusing!

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Date: September 06 2022 Title: Chapter 8: The Mistress

Boss battle time! And Vann seemed to have gone first and rolled a good hit, even it it didn’t do enough damage.  


And understanding asteroid are a thing huh, well I don’t think she can keep good tabs on dwarven astronomy from all the way out there, but her nots should be worth a lot to sell. 

Thought a Lich might get some ideas: https://funnyjunk.com/The+comet+lich/wNYoMjA/

After they git her, and maybe not kill her, Carlotta might get to visit Zenovia with Vann when both are unconscious. And Vann sill also get to look at what Zenovia punishments for heresy are. 


And to add to the last reviews thing on vampires, a vampier over the millennia had to have decided to combine known size changing magic with Zenovia’s Embiggen for efficiency to make some ideal candidate bigger while under trance (whatever if the best blood for vampires) and the shank themselves snd their coven and harvested the blood from the now far larger ‘blood donor’. Bet that would allow a truly large amount of vampires to enjoy a full meal. Then the prison is shrunk into a tiny and made to recover for latter.


Thought a different interesting leftover of Zenovia, also using elven longevity, a elf learns the basic set of spells and prayers and such, but not much much in her youth (possibly younger then Eletha), and whatever happen, just kept going it. And so shes been at it for several thousand years, perhaps even in a particular city foe a thousand years directly. And over that she accrued the equivalent of divine interest, it just been sticking to her and not going to Zenovia cause he want doing it completely. 

So nothing evil, just an ultra faithful follower, who probably would have been a better choice for chosen after all this time, and once Vann finds her would get scheduled to replace him once he’s dead. 


Oh, and a fun bonus thought, a sheep girl who’s head of an unrelated cult, Cult of the Lamb and such, if Enid’s cuteness is anything to go by. 




Author's Response: Whatever might be left of Zenovia's priesthood was scattered to the winds, any immortal followers she has are probably so far underground even the goddess herself would have trouble finding them, that said an elf or a vampire or some other aged being might know some of her rituals even if they're not a full time follower. Enid for example is younger than Eletha, but still recognized Zenovia's name even if she didn't know a lot about her. As for replacing Vann with an immortal, that comes with pitfalls too, mortals make fairly didactic and active worshippers where immortals can tend to get stuck in a rut. The day may come when Vann needs to think about a successor, but it's far off yet.

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Date: September 07 2022 Title: Chapter 9: A Test of Faith

Yeah this was a good chapter!

Devine court must be something, especially with enough gods involved. 

And Eletha got what she wanted. Do hope the acts for the next few hours give some power to Zenovia, for her more direct involvement. 


Also, for all that its going to be done next chapter, this almost feels like a the first session adventure to a longer campaign. After wards is the break period for levelling up, ‘off screen’ character development, and the world outside the party also moves forward and reacts to their actions. 



Author's Response:

Yeah it's very much in the style of a tabletop campaign. There will probably be one more chapter to round out the main story and one final one on Zenovia's temple and Vann's efforts to re-establish it.

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Date: September 13 2022 Title: Chapter 10: The Return Journey

Noice. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: September 15 2022 Title: Chapter 11: The Temple Restored

Good story all the way through. can’t wait to see what you do next!


And yeah, a tiny town definitely needs terrified villagers, suppose some solid illusions should do it, or maybe pseudo polymorph some kid of berry or regrowing things so rampagers could properly squash or eat them. And Zenovia can do the final touchups and behaviours imputing to her tastes and standards. And people volunteering or ”volunteering” to be small in them. 

Then its making multiple one more people come along and who want it use it. 

Could expand to smaller villages, bigger cities, different scaled, difference races or countries, even scenarios like fighting an army or being mercenary giantesses who have to kidnap the princes or princess intact or assassinate someone, or dress up as a dragon girl and kidnap a prince or princess for a night in the ‘Lair’. 

Advertising/pamphlets/invitations will be easy at least, get a normal bit of paper, make the printing press plate as small as possible (easily enough at shrunken size, then copy past with some metal magic along the whole plate, not like its much metal to change in some weird way), then cut the paper properly and then grow them to normal size, and have possibly thousands or them from just once pieces of paper. Could come with some temp or once charge enchantments/spell scroll that do fun things or add to it. Aditinaly would let Zenovia have eyes thorough them all, and if any far older or existing followers are nearby or find them, shed know. And they could come join the temple, or send letter and organize new branches. 

And what next adventures will happen will be a whole other campaign, by then Vann will probably have more precesses(or maybe even more permanent resents), probably more dwarven inventions, maybe even plans for a portal directly to Zenovia’s realm, see how Chadwick’s family and Eletha will continue to work things out longer term, other adventures in the meanwhile. will be by then. Eletha might even invite some other Elf friends of hers if she enjoys all this this much. 

Who knows what will get together again, and what new people will show up along the way. 


So thanks for writing this!



Author's Response:

The funny thing about Vann is that despite being a sub in the truest bdsm sense is he's actually very powerful, willful, and knowledgable and is rapidly becoming well versed in Zenovia's specific magics. He can probably figure out a way to do a lot of wild stuff, at least within the temple lol. Between Rumana's steampunk tech and Enid's nature magic he can accomplish a lot. At some point he will definitely be able to populate the tiny town somehow in a way that won't be lethal to the tinies but still give the giantess the excitement of squishing and eatint them.

Eletha making contact with Chadwicks relatives via Zenovia would be amusing, I imagine they have mixed opinions on the "relationship" through the years. Other elves might drop by, I like to think elves that pick up the adventurer lifestyle are considered insane by their fellows, like why risk death over silly quests when you're immortal? Still she probably knows a few.

Zenovia is obviously very happy with Vann, but if any of her followers have kept the faith this long she'd reward them handsomely.

Anyways who knows what the next campaign entails!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Goddess Awakens

Yeah, Enid giving some plant growth acelerant and fertilizer magic, Rumana make some golem planters and plows and harvesters, maybe even at tiny size, and a whole shrunken farm second could had. Unshink the food and thats a town’s worth of food saved for the temple at least. And make forest or made up farmland around the city models regrow for even more realism. 

And originally had to think of pure hard-light illusion, but that might not give squishing or real food as easily, or maybe polymorph insects into looking and acting like people, but that is also sorta cruel (and some people might have issue) so just animating berries was the final thought. 

Thought there prob will have to be given options of eating tinies as a part of the room service, and for new priestesses, might not make as much faith for Zenovia as real people or be usable in the rituals needing sacrifice, but maybe its the act and intent/thought that counts. 

And hopefully some cobblers, seamstresses and armorers become followers so their would be clothing and armour directly approved of by Zenovia. Several crafters shrink down and enchant some heels so much the shoes or boots technically count as a temple, then applied that to an entire set of armour. Thats gada be some powerful paladin gear.

Oh, and how Faries/Faeries/Fae or pixies will come in will be interesting. 


Eletha might take to Chadwick’s dad about what she did, thats kinda what I was talking about for seeing how that goes, was hard and kinda messy already with just him, and not the rest of his family. 

More to help Vann’s temple, Eletha might know some elf who’s been doing combat for several thousand years, and ask her to come over and help train up the  temple guard and paladin order. Could even have figured out non-magicaly-asidted/enhanced high heeled combat out of sheer boredom, just for the heeled bonus on too of magical assistance. Or just brainstorm more combat uses of Zenovia’s magic in combat with Vann. Probably not as good or powerful as the war/battle/violence god ones, but still solid. 


And I almost forgot this, cam up with it 3 chapters ago but forgot to say, how would succubi work? Their sexy and dom men as women whits is Zenvia’s thing, but their unholy so they might get hurt, or would they counter her power? Would it work on female devils, or other unholy female things? The real questions.



Author's Response:

As a general thing I'm sure that Vann can figure out some way for a potential guest to live out her vore fantasies if she so desires, after all Zenovia's temple is a place of power for him and almost anything is possible. Furthermore like most medieval temples I'm sure a small town will spring up around him, complete with the usual tradesfolk who may be able to garner the blessings of a goddess on their wares.

As far as Eletha and Chadwick's dad in this setting humans are able to figure out things a little faster than elves are, or they mature faster, whichever you prefer. Chadwick's dad probably has an idea that he's not the first in the line that Eletha has "played" with but he opted to just let sleeping dogs be on that front. The dead relatives obviously all know and are just waiting to greet her in the afterlife, obviously whatever complaints they have with her are outweighed by general friendship.

As far as succubi go I figure demons are probably in service to a particular god or goddess, Zenovia herself might have a few that are long dormant or a few of other deities might be willing to work for her in the meantime, Zenovia's a fairly mercurial deity overall outside of her infatuation with Vann and friends so an evil succubus could probably get away with a lot while working for her. You might say that Vann himself is sent to right Zenovia after centuries of her own mistakes, as we saw with The Mistress.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16 2022 Title: Chapter 1: The Goddess Awakens

Fair on the craftsman and town, at least food wont be an issues like I proposed. 

And interesting take on demons and succubus and how they relate to gods. And true, one or a few might still be be out there needing to hav their mess cleaned up.  

I also PMeded you a thing on discord, didn’t want potential spoilers for others. 



Author's Response:

I don't really use discord, but yeah they can probably use the magic to take care of most aspects of temple upkeep and supply. Real monasteries managed with a lot less than Vann's got after all!

Magna Gratia by GTS33, Melanie Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

In a world where the big regularly dominate and abuse the small, Jeannine wants to break the mold. Believing all three races to be inherently equal, she rescues 'tinies' and protects them in her home. Assuming the role of 'protector' she seeks to help as many as she can, even if the world would look down on her for it.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Fantasy, Maternal, Sci-Fi, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 182625 Read Count: 169412
[Report This] Published: August 24 2022 Updated: March 06 2024
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Chapter 1

Good start. 

Also got stories I had ideas for 10 years ago still around that I wanted to write up and put on this site. So congrats on achieving it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! It was a long time coming.

The Jaded Soul by gtsemp Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

When a tiny man appears on the beach, Shelby's quest to help him leads her to discover new facets of herself and the people closest to her.

Categories: Breasts, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25200 Read Count: 12398

[Report This] Published: August 28 2022 Updated: August 28 2022
Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Worm

This is a very good start. 


Us readers will have to see what other kinds of interactions there will be as they come. 



Author's Response: Thanks! I just added the remaining 7 chapters. Would love to hear what people want in a sequel for sure.