Reviewer: DcZ Signed 



Date: September 16 2022
Title: Chapter 1: The Goddess Awakens
Yeah, Enid giving some plant growth acelerant and fertilizer magic, Rumana make some golem planters and plows and harvesters, maybe even at tiny size, and a whole shrunken farm second could had. Unshink the food and thats a town’s worth of food saved for the temple at least. And make forest or made up farmland around the city models regrow for even more realism.
And originally had to think of pure hard-light illusion, but that might not give squishing or real food as easily, or maybe polymorph insects into looking and acting like people, but that is also sorta cruel (and some people might have issue) so just animating berries was the final thought.
Thought there prob will have to be given options of eating tinies as a part of the room service, and for new priestesses, might not make as much faith for Zenovia as real people or be usable in the rituals needing sacrifice, but maybe its the act and intent/thought that counts.
And hopefully some cobblers, seamstresses and armorers become followers so their would be clothing and armour directly approved of by Zenovia. Several crafters shrink down and enchant some heels so much the shoes or boots technically count as a temple, then applied that to an entire set of armour. Thats gada be some powerful paladin gear.
Oh, and how Faries/Faeries/Fae or pixies will come in will be interesting.
Eletha might take to Chadwick’s dad about what she did, thats kinda what I was talking about for seeing how that goes, was hard and kinda messy already with just him, and not the rest of his family.
More to help Vann’s temple, Eletha might know some elf who’s been doing combat for several thousand years, and ask her to come over and help train up the temple guard and paladin order. Could even have figured out non-magicaly-asidted/enhanced high heeled combat out of sheer boredom, just for the heeled bonus on too of magical assistance. Or just brainstorm more combat uses of Zenovia’s magic in combat with Vann. Probably not as good or powerful as the war/battle/violence god ones, but still solid.
And I almost forgot this, cam up with it 3 chapters ago but forgot to say, how would succubi work? Their sexy and dom men as women whits is Zenvia’s thing, but their unholy so they might get hurt, or would they counter her power? Would it work on female devils, or other unholy female things? The real questions.
Author's Response: As a general thing I'm sure that Vann can figure out some way for a potential guest to live out her vore fantasies if she so desires, after all Zenovia's temple is a place of power for him and almost anything is possible. Furthermore like most medieval temples I'm sure a small town will spring up around him, complete with the usual tradesfolk who may be able to garner the blessings of a goddess on their wares.
As far as Eletha and Chadwick's dad in this setting humans are able to figure out things a little faster than elves are, or they mature faster, whichever you prefer. Chadwick's dad probably has an idea that he's not the first in the line that Eletha has "played" with but he opted to just let sleeping dogs be on that front. The dead relatives obviously all know and are just waiting to greet her in the afterlife, obviously whatever complaints they have with her are outweighed by general friendship.
As far as succubi go I figure demons are probably in service to a particular god or goddess, Zenovia herself might have a few that are long dormant or a few of other deities might be willing to work for her in the meantime, Zenovia's a fairly mercurial deity overall outside of her infatuation with Vann and friends so an evil succubus could probably get away with a lot while working for her. You might say that Vann himself is sent to right Zenovia after centuries of her own mistakes, as we saw with The Mistress.