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Summary:

Micha is planning on proposing to his longtime girlfriend, Juni. A nerve wracking endeavor for anyone, and even more so when you barely measure up to her ankle. Mix-sized couples were still a bit taboo, but her gentle and playful nature washed away his concerns. And despite their physical differences, they’re just like any other couple, they share romantic moments, the occasional fight, and even a fair share of teasing. 


Their relationship was flawless– well except for one tiny detail: she had a bad habit of torturing tinies behind his back. 


But nobody’s perfect, and what he doesn’t know can’t hurt him. They should stick together for better or for worse… right?



Categories: Butt, Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30341 Read Count: 38259
[Report This] Published: July 18 2022 Updated: July 10 2023
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six, Dancing with Her Devil

Alright, I'll be patient then. But if you are still sort of in the intro phase, why not throw in a couple of problems that don't resolve themselves? It would make for much better reading. E.g. the manager/owner of the restaurant is prejudiced against mixed-size couples, but May, who is awesome, isn't magically there to fix the problem even before it arose. Again, that's just one example of what you could have done. Then Micha would have to scramble (and prove to the readers why they should care about him...), and there might be a strain on Juni so we get to see a hint of what might look like.

It's either that or longer chapters were something actually happens. You sort of say it yourself, you're talking about everyday stuff even though in this chapter he literally proposed to his gargantuan girlfriend. That should be a pivotal moment, not a "meh, we went to the restaurant and it was mildly annoying but it all turned out okay"-kinda thing. Just my two cents. You don't have to go overboard right away but even solving everyday problems can be interesting so long as they have to be solved (and it's actually really interesting from the tiny perspective, it adds so much). Thanks for your reply!



Author's Response:

I can see where you're coming from. Unfortunately, I can't go into any more detail on why I chose specific plot points, character motivations, etc without getting into spoiler territory (which isn't fun for anyone). All I can say is that these choices are intentional. Oh and if you want to chat my discord/email is in my bio. I don't want to flood the review section with a back and forth :)

The purge by Glaazius Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Lennard has to cope with living life beneath his now gigantic sisters and mother after being shrunk down due to a virus.

Take a look at my patreon page!

https://www.patreon.com/glaazius



Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15407 Read Count: 79525
[Report This] Published: September 20 2022 Updated: March 21 2024
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 29 2023 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Glossed over it the first time but came back to read in more detail. There's so much there. My favorite part was the show-don't-tell in chapter four: dirty shoes and clothes, a reference to the forest, and finally a bunch of people in a girl's pocket. That's like a whole shortstory on the side forming entirely in the reader's head, all by itself. You know what went down, even while the protagonist is too occupied by his own plight to notice or care. 

Now THAT's writing. Also the despair and fear of those who may or may not shrink is so well described that I can feel it. This story is great. Thank you for sharing. 



Author's Response: Many thanks for the detailed review, Squashed123!
Very glad to hear that you enjoyed it so much.
And many more thanks for the compliments! They are making me shy ;)

Marooned by minuss Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

A shipwreck with hundreds of survivors on a deserted island. Three of the survivors find themselves much bigger than everyone else. How will it play out? Gilligan's Island or Lord of the Flies? Read on and see.


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47373 Read Count: 107080
[Report This] Published: November 03 2022 Updated: February 17 2024
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20 2023 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Justin

Wicked. I like how you tell the survival plot through dialogue, and sometimes even in the background while characters interact with each other over something more immediate. Also, the length of the chapters is crafted very well. Stunning work. 

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Justin

You cornered yourself. You wrote basically the same scenario over and over again, too scared to move the plot forward, and then you've tilted it all over in desperation. What I would have liked to see while the escape effort was going on and the various relationships teetered out would be for signs that the two naughty antagonists were developing as well. E.g. what if Brandon stumbled upon another group of survivors a little further away, and he decided to share them while engaging in some more immoral acts and experiments. This would result in an even more dismissive attitude towards the main group of tiny people, and spice things up so much that the relationship plot would come to a more believable boil. 

You could still do this. Have Jamie take Jim and Daisy to the other colony where she engages in some gruesome acts with Brandon. Or have Brandon take them all there and show it to Jamie for the first time, and then they do it. Then Justin has to figure out what happened to his friend, and Samantha will ultimately have to save everybody - at least if you want a happy ending. 

This is such a great and unusual story, it would be a shame if it just ended here. Cheers.

Summary:

This story is highly inspired by the episode The little people from The twilight zone.
I gave it my own twist. But in the bigger it is intended that this this story will
exactly unfold like we see in the actual episode.
Hope you like it!

Take a look at my patreon page!

https://www.patreon.com/glaazius


Categories: Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1476 Read Count: 1469
[Report This] Published: July 03 2023 Updated: July 03 2023
Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's a good start. I've always liked your writing. I'm just a bit bummed you didn't put this as a part of "the purge". Maybe it's because I'm ignorant of the actual source material in this instance, but I feel like you could've achieved roughly the same setting in that other story by exploring a little side arc or secondary main arc or something like that. Now you have to go through world and character building all over again while that other great work lays dormant. 

Still looking forward to some meat on this, obviously. 



Author's Response:

Thx for the kind words, Squashed!
Yes, you're right. I could have done this as a sort of side story with the purge.

But you see, I'm just addicted to starting new stories. I cant help it :)

btw, Is there another chapter for Saturn Seven in the making perchance?