Reviewer: smellinlove Signed
Date: August 20 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
Hello Jacksmith,
I really love reading your stories but I'm not really a mom-related fan. I loved this story though but there's one part in this story that I feel is missing. I know you've been harassed by some guys here and that made you stop this story leaving it very short. I think it is just fine if the whole week of bootcamp only lasts this long, eventhough it leaves me really disappointed.
But there's a part I feel would be cool to be filled as it feels kinda empty - I'm talking about the part where you write that Scott has been handed down to his sisters a few times when his mother had to go out in flip-flops, leaving him at the mercy of his sister. I think this story would be really complete once you've explained how and when was the first time Scott got struck by the fact he was going to be his sister's property for the first time.
I hope my requests are not too much to ask, you don't have to continue/complete this story if you don't feel like it, but that would be really awesome if you did and I would appreciate ;)
Love to read your stories !
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I see where you're coming from in wanting to see that particular part of Scott's life played out. I skimmed over that in the timeline for a couple reasons: 1, to avoid further discomfort from the community using such a young character as Scott's sister like in this story, and 2, I've already written several separate stories involving a little sister taking control of her brother, so my intention in this series was to focus on other characters relationships and directions.
In the 3rd story of this series, I do show the actual first encounter between the shrunken Scott and his sister, though she hasn't actually been given full ownership of him at the time. It's just tricky business writing such young characters, with the potential for community backlash. I just try to write what the greatest number of people will find acceptable. However, I appreciate your interest; if you like the relationship of Scott to his sister, she'll make appearances in later installments of this series.
