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Tales of a Shrinking Sister by christiawi9 Rated: R Round robin starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
Summary:

An 18 year old sister finds herself shrinking and must live through the embarressing trauma of shrinking smaller then her 15 year old, 12 year old, 8 year old and finally two year old sisters. suddenly she isn't the dominate one in the house and her mother just doesn't care. Can she survive her sisters as they realize the upper hand they have?


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Feet, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Slow Size Change, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49454 Read Count: 346055
[Report This] Published: December 31 2012 Updated: October 12 2016
Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: January 20 2014 Title: Tales of a Shrinking Sister

In real life mothers who are breast feeding aren't supposed to drink alcohol. Do you think this might effect things somehow? It might in some way interact with the drug and cause some weird effect; or it might just make Kate drunk as well?



Author's Response:

Actually Jane can't breast-feed her at all. She might have taken the drug but it take a while for it to take effect, a couple of days in fact. What she is doing here is trying to get Kate use to the idea of breast feeding. which in my opinion isn't a great plan but she is completely drunk. If Jane breastfed her when the drug has taken its effect and has been drinking then the consequences are unknown. This drug is still slightly experimental which is why it is part of this program. If you want you can suggest a possible side effect.

Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: January 18 2014 Title: Tales of a Shrinking Sister

I'm very glad to see you are back to writing again. Things are starting to take some very interesting turns plot wise. I'm very intrigued now about that Asian woman and her driver, and whoever this "master" person is. Hopefully we will find that out soon enough.



Author's Response:

I didn't really explain it in the chapter but it is easy enough to figure it out. Although i'm not gonna tell you who "master" is, but it is a character that has been introduced =)

Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: December 15 2013 Title: Tales of a Shrinking Sister

Well, to be honest I'm not a huge fan of the cold android personality you created for the government agent. I think its probably realistic though, because government agents probably do tend to be like that in real life... I'm picturing the agent as being like a "men in black" type of government person who has no emotion and shows no emotion but just has a job to do.

I think since you went with that angle you might as well have just made her a man. Actually, right now I think 100% of the characters in your story are female, so if the agent were a male it would have given a little more diversity, and since its a minor character there wouldn't really be much consequence to it. The agent being female is really only relevent for the breastfeeding angle, but this woman is too cold and robotic for that so it really wouldn't have mattered.

As for this agent, if you do the Michael Munchkin idea then you could have her appear again because she might show up at his house and give him and his family the same rundown as Kate and her family. So that's an idea if you want her to return to the story for some reason.

As for what you said about Jessica being rich and probably having her own specialists for her breast-feeding treatment or whatever, I guess that would make sense... if her family can afford special treatment then they would probably arrange for the very best for their daughter, and that is probably part of the key for how she's had the disease for so long and been able to hold out so well. That, and of course the fact she doesn't have evil siblings bullying her like Kate does...

But what if there were special breast-feeding women out there that are paid to help the shrinkers for a living? Not free government agents, but private sector professionals who are hired to make house calls and breast feed the shrinkers at a great expense? Maybe this is the sort of help that Jessica gets... and maybe with the money Kate's family gets from the government maybe she could afford to get a house call from one of these women? And that's another way you could tie it in with Jessica because it could be the same woman who also suckles Jessica...

And who knows... you could maybe even work out a scenario where Kate and Jessica both breastfeed the same woman at the same time, because there are two breasts so there would be one for each... maybe this woman could show up at the school during their lunch break to provide them both with their lunch... and that's something Stacy and other students could ridicule them for and laugh at them for because they get to eat normal solid food, but these shrinker girls have to be breast fed like babies... just an idea... and if you add in Munchkin and he becomes a shrinker too then he could be added into that whole thing as well.



Author's Response:

Now that you mention it a male character would have been simpler. I made teh Agent cold because I didn't want them to be a likeable character and so I could remove them easily from the story. As for teh breast feeding I am writing a chapter for that but will not involve Jessica. This hormone used in the breast feeding is new and experiemental and so hasn't been released to the public that much yet. THat is the point of the government funding- to test their creations. But don't worry, there will be a breast feeding chapter shortly for Kate. =)

Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: December 15 2013 Title: Chapter 1: introducing the characters

Yeah, I know what you mean about the "stereotypically large breasted women". I would not suggest that every woman in a story be described that way, but I don't see anything wrong with using them sparingly because large breasted women do exist in real life, so to have just one such woman in an entire story shouldn't be a problem, but I would agree it shouldn't be over done. I just think having the agent have big breasts would work well with the whole breastfeeding thing because it would really underscore that, and maybe its another thing that could add to Kate's humiliation.

Personality wise, it would be cool if the agent was kinda like Jessica in that she loves to help people and that's why she choose this occupation, and if she has huge breasts that could be another reason why she got into this because they would be an asset to help with the shrinkers...

Maybe since this agent has met with and helped other shrinkers maybe she's met Jessica before and maybe suckled her? You said Jessica doesn't have sisters, so maybe Jessica can't get the breastfeeding she needs from her own family so maybe this agent visits with Jessica regularly and suckles her?

This brings up possibilities because then the agent becomes another link with Jessica and there's alot of potential you can do with that... but to start off with maybe have the agent ask Kate about school and stuff, and then Kate would mention she has a friend there and describes her and then the agent's eyes might light up and she says "I know her too! she's that cool shrinker girl I breastfeed" and that could get an intersting conversation going and maybe you could have Stacy eavedropping behind the corner and hearing the whole thing and plotting and scheming with whatever she's hearing.

Have the agent anyway you like though... even if you want to go with your original idea of using a man that's fine too. Doesn't really matter too much because he/she is just a minor character anyway so its no big deal either way... I just think that a woman would be better personally because of the breastfeeding potential and then you could have that link with Jessica because Jessica could be a regular client so they know each other very intimately.

But no matter what you do I think one thing you need to think about is the agent is probably going to look at Kate and how small she is and then look at how long she has had the disease and make the connection that something isn't right, and this will have to be explained.

Also, Jane still knows something isn't right about how fast Kate had shrunk and that was never fully explained to her either. The way you described her is that she seems like an uncaring mother, but really she does care though, so if that's the case she needs to get to the bottom of this one way or the other.

Whether Kate and Emma tell the truth to Jane and the agent or come up with some sort of lie to explain it is up to you, but I think for realism sake they have to say something, because realistically a mother and a welfare agent isn't just going to ignore something serious like that.



Author's Response:

1- I didn't mean "big dreasted women" as in women with normal big breasts. I was referring to the fetish in which women have unrealistically big breasts. Just normally big breasts are fine by me, I guess I thought you meant the fetishy big breast. My bad =)

2- I was thinking of Making the agent be nice and kind but for some reason she is coming out as strict, professional and uncaring. A person of business. A guess i wrote her like that because I have been writing a lot of characters who are nice so my mind wanted a change. also, I didn't want a character people would like as she isn't really a minor character. I could make her have a nice side, like a warm caring personality under her hard exterior.

3- I wouldn't be able to connect the agent (Erika jones, BTW) with jessica because of a very important reason. As jessica is part of a rich family they have enclosed themselves off from the world officially. Therefore no-one comes to their house unless they have to specifically be there. Jessica would have been diagnosed by the family doctor and any treatments she recieved would be from a trusted doctor. They wouldn't use a random government agent. That's at least how I see it.

4- I never had the Agent originally as a male, that was just my default character. I knew I needed an agent character but I hadn't thought about them at all so I just made them male. I was most likely always going to go with a female character as I wouldn't know what to do with a male character in that circumstance.

5-The truth to the agent and the mother are my biggest concern. I knew that the agent was going to notice the sudden shrinkage and ask about it but I had actually forgotten about the mother (Thankyou for reminding me=)) They'll probably be fed some BS story about kate being overstressed but The agent will most likely not buy it all.

thankyou once again for your helpful input. I've written half of the next chapter and might be able to get it out in a few hours (My brain is fried right now). =) Hope you continue and enjoy reading.

Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: December 14 2013 Title: Chapter 1: introducing the characters

Sorry for writing so many "reviews" but there's no simple messaging system on this site so I have no other way to give you any suggestions/ideas I have... but that's not really what this reviews section is for and I'm sorry that its getting cluttered up like this. You do have the ability to delete them though if you want...

But there is one thing I thought of about that breastfeeding idea that I didn't think of until after I had sent that last "review" and that was if the agent that comes from the government program is a woman then she could not only bring up the breastfeeding idea and discuss it with Jane and Emma, but also give a demonstration of it by suckling Kate to her breasts, much to the dismay of Kate who might not like the idea but wouldn't really have a choice...

But if you were intending the government agent be a man that's fine, but it would rule out that possibility... but if you go with a woman agent and go this route you could have describe her as being a very well endowed woman with very large breasts and you could say she's a professional shrinker suckler and that she knows she has large breasts and she decided to put them to good use by helping shrinkers with them and she explains to Jane and Emma how its a pleasurable experience and that once they get into it they will love doing it too and look forward to it... even though Kate on the other hand might be humiliated by it and be a fussy "baby" and not cooperate... but if Jane and Emma grow to like the feeding thing then you could have it so that this becomes one of Kate's chores like the foot rubbing and Jane in particular expects it whether Kate wants it or not, but maybe Emma is more lenient about it and more respectful of her sister's wishes so she doesn't force it, but still enjoys it nonetheless.



Author's Response:

Don't apologize for writing so man reviews. I enjoy getting reviews as it gives me something to do in my boring life. If you really find it a bother but still want to give me suggestions we could easily find a way to do that =) But anyway, about you suggestion. I hadn't really thought about the agents gender and had given tehm the default of being male. But I would most likely change it to female. So, a big breasted, well rounded person, huh? I could do big breasted but might decide to do normal sized breasts as I have trouble writing about the stereotypical "big breasted woman", if that makes sense. I could write about how She not only gives the family the idea of breast feeding but also (under teh government plan) supply them with lactation hormones. These special hormones produce milk which is specialy designed to help stop the shrinking process. That might work.

Anyway, don't think that getting too many reviews are annoying as it honestly isn't. If I did find it annoying I would just stop reading reviews, there prolem solved =) but i do enjoy reviews as I love to hear the opinions of others.

Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: December 14 2013 Title: Chapter 1: introducing the characters

I was reading through italykeke's suggestions and in regards to what he suggested about Jessica, please don't rush that through too quickly because I like her and she is a cool character so I would like to see her be able to stand up to Stacy and Amy for at least a little while longer. His idea is fine, but don't rush it too fast and just waste how you've built up such a cool character.

If you put in the Munchkin character and have Stacy start bullying him to speed up his shrinking it would be cool if Jessica sees the bullying happen and comes to rescue him. Of course this would piss off Stacy even more and help build things up for whenever she finally does manage to beat up Jessica... but don't let that be right away. Let Jessica knock her down a few pegs just a little while longer.

And if you want my idea for when Stacy finally does kick Jessica's ass, I think it would be cool if what happened is Jessica knocks Stacy down just like she always does, but this time around Amy sees this happening and she is tired of Jessica always winning and not shrinking so she decides to join in the fight and while Jessica is beating Stacy fair and square, Amy cheap shots her from behind, or maybe Amy's friend also joins in too and this is what overwhelms her...

So not only is Jessica facing people larger than her, but she's outnumbered by them and they are using cheap tactics so its not fair at all, but this is the only way they can beat her because she's just such a good fighter with her martial arts skills.

That's how I would like to see it done, but hopefully not too soon though, because I hope she'll be around awhile longer and be able to come to Munchkin's rescue at least once or twice to help build things up for the final finale.



Author's Response:

I wasn't planning on using his ending idea but was mostly focusing his Emma and mother interaction idea. I thought they were really cool. So don't worry, Jeescia will be around for a while and it will take quite a bit to take her down. Amy's "friend" Will also probably jin in on the action I just have to find a wy to reintroduce her and give her a respectable role. It might take a chapter or two before they make it back to school but when that happens shit will definietly go down between Stacy and Jessica. Also, I like that tautology you put at the end: "Final finale". Funny =)

Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: December 14 2013 Title: Chapter 1: introducing the characters

Oh, and in regards to breast-feeding, when I first suggested it I didn't necessarily mean it had to involve lactation. I just thought Emma and Jane could want Kate to suckle their breasts just because they wanted to treat her like a baby because she's the size of one. It was intended more for fun and playing around than actually to feed her. Its just like the foot rubbing idea.

But as far as the lactation goes, even if Emma was never pregnant she could still be able to lactate if her nipples were stimulated enough by Kate's suckling. There's also drugs that could help the process along... if Lactation is supposed to help shrinkers like Kate then maybe Emma could get a prescription for one of these drugs to help induce lactation? If lactation helps the shrinkers and if the government has a program to help the shrinkers then maybe that's something you could have that agent discuss when he/she shows up? He/she could give Emma and Jane pamphlets on the subject, or something like that.



Author's Response:

I don't think simple nipple stimulation ould be enough for lactation to occur. I'm not a biologist but I'm pretty sure the body needs specific hormones for it to produce milk. these hormones are produced when a women gets pregnant but not from nipple stimulation. As for your last idea I think it's really good. I like the idea of Jane and Emma being handed pamphlets instructing them that breastfeeding helps while Kate just sits there with a stupified look on her face. I'm actually almost up to the foot rubbing chapter. I can't believe it is taking this long to get past the "character developement" pages and the "Emma interaction" pages. 

Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: September 21 2013 Title: Chapter 1: introducing the characters

I just want to say that I've read the story from beginning to end and there are things I like and things I don't like. But one thing that kinda disappoints me was something in one of the early chapters where you wrote that Stacy couldn't wait to "wail on" her older sister, but that never really happened and now with her being so small it is no longer possible for that to happen the way I had hoped it would.

The way I would have liked to see it is that when she had she shrunk down to Stacy's level somehow they both get in a fight and its a serious fight with fists and that sort of thing. But I'd have liked it to be an even fight. I don't like how you made it that Kate is incredibly weak even for whatever size she happens to be. Why not just let her be her normal strength in proportion to whatever size she is?

But maybe even with them both being equal in size and strength, you could say that with Stacy being a bully who has been in a lot of fights in school that she would win just by experience or something. Oh well though, what's done is done...

I will say I did like that Jessica was able to bring Stacy down flat on her face despite being smaller and weaker thanks to those jujitsu skills. I think it makes things better when the shrunken people are able to fight back to some extent and aren't completely helpless.



Author's Response:

well what is done can always be improved. because i don't know what people want specifically and because i am very new at this i easily predicted that there would be places in the story that people would want changed or improved. that is why i guessed i would have to go back and add chapters in between the chapters i have already made. if you want i can add a chapter or two in between the shrinking chapters to incorporate what you wanted. it would give the story more life and interest so i thankyou for your input. also, i just have to say that i love your stories so much. they truelly are amazing to read.

Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: October 31 2013 Title: Tales of a Shrinking Sister

Jessica seems like a really cool person. A few things I have to say though is first of all, even though you devoted an entire chapter to her and her backstory, you still haven't described how she looks. Secondly, when you first introduced her in chapter 8 she introduced herself to the class as "Jessica Tone", but now in this chapter when runs into those bullies she introduces herself as "Jessica Mayborn" so which one is it?

But I think rather than change one of them, you could just run with this and explain it by saying that she gives her wrong name deliberately in order to protect her identity so that the bullies can't find where she lives and you know... because being a shrinker person is obviously dangerous. So you could explain the discrepancy that way... any maybe the real truth is that her real surname is neither Tone nor Mayborn. Maybe its something else which she confides to Kate because she trusts her enough. And then through Kate perhaps Stacy and Amy somehow manage to get that secret information, and then, you know...

Just an idea. :)



Author's Response:

you want to know what the funny thing is? that is precisely what is happening. i delibrately made her give the wrong name to the bullies so that they would spread the word to find this "mayborn" when she really doesn't exist. i was actually going to write that in but decided to end the chapter. i'll be sure to add it into the next chapter. your idea that she gives only her real name to Kate is interesting but i find it kind of pointless as her name would be on the role at school so all the teachers would know her real name. sorry for the confusion, i'll be sure to explain everything in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: November 09 2013 Title: Tales of a Shrinking Sister

I think Emma should beat the shit out of them for what they done. They certainly deserve it, and it would add more credibility to the story, because I don't believe every single person in the world would either do this or accept it being done. It would be nice if at least one or two of Kate's sisters had a conscience and wasn't all just out to get her. Also where is the mother in all of this? She seems completely oblivious and/or indifferent to the whole entire thing. Obviously she is unfit to be a mother.

And one final thing, I'm skeptical about Stacy being able to fart so soon after she had just taken a shit. That might be possible, but I'm a bit skeptical about that. Since she had just taken a shit the smell would probably be really horrible anyway so she wouldn't need to fart in order to humiliate Kate with her butt. Just my opinion anyway.

But seriously, Emma should do something to try and stop this. I don't mean to say that she should necessarily succeed in stopping it, but she should at least try. And these girls need their ass beat for what they've been doing...



Author's Response:

1) where is the mother? at this point she is still working extremely long hours and is rarely home and when she is home she is dead tired. However, i have set it up so that the family will soon recieve money from the government because of kates condition allowing their mother to be home all the time.
2)Stacy was able to fart so easily BECAUSE of the dump she took. it made room and allowed the fart to freely escape without being block by crap. or, at least that's how i imagined it, i get everyone has different bodies and would react in different ways.
3)so you think that emma should be good and not bad? okay, i think people clearly want that judging by the reviews and so i shall do that.

thankyou again for you review, as i truly do appreciate them, and hope you enjoy the next chapters. i'm actually kind of ill right now so i will have t wait to get better before i can write a chapter for this story as it does take a lot out of me. instead i'm starting a new story just because i like the concept i came up with but don't worry, i will still continue this story. =) 

Reviewer: Chozo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10 2013 Title: Tales of a Shrinking Sister

Good job. Its good to see that not everyone in the family is psychotic and out to get Kate. Chapters like this are the sort of things that separate priceless stories from 10 cent jerk off material. Sure, this chapter isn't jerk off material, but if you want a story to be taken seriously and be respected this is essential. Now the story has more depth to it.

Of course, a 15 year old sister being maternal towards her older 18 year old sister also has some appeal to it. It doesn't all have to be violence and evil like Stacy does. Maybe Emma could treat Kate like she's her baby or something? Perhaps even breast feet her or something? That sort of treatment isn't cruel, but it could be degrading and humiliating for Kate since she is supposed to be the bigger sister but now she's her little sister's baby... maybe that humiliating treatment might cause Kate to shrink even though Emma didn't mean to? That's an idea...

Of course if Emma protects Kate this means that Stacy doesn't get her, and that would suck for Stacy, but perhaps Stacy could find someone else instead? I have an idea for that if you are interested... since your stories seem to be in parallel universes of one another and with the same characters across all of them, how about introduce that Michael Munchkin into this story? And what if its suddenly announced that he has contracted the shrinking disease? Since he's already short to begin with he wouldn't have far to go, and Stacy could step up her bullying of him to accelerate the process. Just an idea...

I'm also interested to see what will happen when Kate's mother comes home and Emma fills her in on what's been going on. Maybe you could have her mother baby Kate and breast feed her and that sort of stuff? But it wouldn't be as humiliating as if Emma were to do it, because its natural for a mother to be a mother, but its not natural for a younger sister to be a mother if you know what I mean...



Author's Response:

thankyou. Yes, I am trying to write a few maternal chapters in which Kate feels more and more belittle by Emma but only because Emma can do things that Kate should be doing. she doesn't like the fact that she is so useless and that Her once younger sister is so mature, powerful and useful around the house (essentially replacing Kate).

I am afriad that their will be no breast feeding from any of the characters. Not because I have anything against it but because it just seems incredibly out of character and I cant' fathom a scenario which would lead to it. I do however really like your idea about introducing Munkchin again but I think he should play a slightly different role than just a standard Shrinker toy for Stacy (Although lets face it, that's what he'll end up in the end).

All in all, I should be able to release two chapters every week until this writing spurt disappears and my mind goes blank again.

Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: December 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: introducing the characters

In regards to the Michael Munchkin idea, take your time with it and stretch his shrinking out a bit like with Kate, but it doesn't need to be quite as slow as that. Show the ways that Stacy bullies him at school... she is already bigger than him to begin with and if its like in the other story then she has already been bullying him for years anyway, but now that he caught the shrinking disease that gives her even more of an reason to bully him than she had before. And don't just have her fart at him like in the other story. Have her really bully him and beat him up and things like that and take his lunch money and that sort of stuff like bullies really do.

As for the breast feeding, I agree there's no real practical reason to explain why it should happen, but I was thinking it could happen just because Emma wanted to do it out of maternal instinct. Since Kate is the size of a baby Emma might see her as one and want to baby her.

Planet of the Tinies by Dudemanguy Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

A female explorer gets stranded on an alien planet. With no recollection of how she got there, she must find a way to coexist with the miniature civilization.


Categories: Maternal, Giantess, Adventure, Couples , Gentle, Growing Woman
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13691 Read Count: 54472
[Report This] Published: February 19 2013 Updated: February 17 2014
Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: February 25 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter I: Crashed!

I would just like to say that I would have strongly preferred if her size would have been measured in miles rather than feet. Feet suck.



Author's Response:

Lol, if she was miles tall, how would she interact with all the tiny people? (Other than stepping on them of course.)

Thanks for the review Chozo! Never expected one from you. It's kinda cool that the older authors are starting to take an interest in this. You, Pixis, Malaka, sheesh who next? 

But anyway, thanks for reviewing! (Sorry she couldn't be a couple miles tall, the plot clearly stipulates 400 feet and I can't stray away from the plotline can I?)

Mamma Mia by Poolster Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

A middle aged mother of two finds herself lonely after her two children go off to college. She determines to have a weekend with her children one way or the other.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Butt, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Entrapment, Humiliation, Toilet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14427 Read Count: 83443
[Report This] Published: February 20 2013 Updated: March 14 2014
Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: February 25 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Henry's night out with mommy

If I may make a suggestion, since Jenni is jealous of the girl her son has a crush on, how about she track down this slut and use a vial on her and reduce her into a parasite on her body just like she did with her children? Except in her case since she hates her for stealing her son away from her, have Jenni be cruel to her, and make the shrinking permanent.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the suggestion,im not sure if or how to introduce more characters.This was originally slated to be a 5 chapter story,but as I was thinking of a way to wrap it up my mind went blank. Im going to try and resume this story in the next couple of weeks,and the next chapter will be a good sign of where it's headed.

Reviewer: Chozo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 09 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Jenni's dark side

Awesome! I'm sure Jenni is pleased to have eliminated her son's slut so now her son should be spending more time with her. Also I'm sure she loves the thought of having reduced this rival to a speck that now has to live off her body's waste in order to survive. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: April 19 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Struggles on the slopes

I can't imagine anything more humiliating than being a microscopic parasite trapped in the ass of your worst enemy and having no other choice but to either dine on their "butt cheese" or starve to death. That has to be a very difficult decision to make. But if she is going to spend the rest of her life there she will probably grow to accept it over time. Maybe after a few years it might feel like home to her and she might even enjoy it? Who knows?

Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: May 27 2013 Title: Chapter 7: The Ex-SuperSized

Glad to see you continuing this after more than a month hiatus. One thing I remember reading in the earlier chapters is you mentioned that since Lucy and Henry are biologically related to Jenni it meant that they are strengthened by being on her body somehow. So I am wondering since that is the case, what does it mean when she shrinks people who are not her biological offspring and turns them into her parasitic slaves? Does this mean that since they aren't biologically related that being on her body has the opposite effect and weakens them somehow? Maybe what this could mean is that Henry and Lucy are nurtured and able to grow back to normal, but the others are not. Or maybe they even get shrunk further? I don't want to see them be killed or shrunk into oblivion because that would end the fun, but since they are not Jenni's kin you would think this would have some negative effect on them in some way.



Author's Response:

That storyline will be addressed shortly,but I felt the need to address all of Jennie's personal issues first. Depending on which way it goes Diane could play a bigger part in the future or be written off soon. I felt that there needed to be closure with Jenni's ex so all of her personal demons could be excercised.

Milky Way Evolution by Poolster Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

This is going to be a story centering around a changing world, a cautionary tale of where our society is headed...Be Warned.


Categories: Giantess, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: Milky Way Evolution
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9845 Read Count: 50822
[Report This] Published: February 23 2013 Updated: September 09 2013
Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: September 09 2013 Title: Chapter 1: A new guard rises.

Please continue your Mamma Mia story.

Waking up by Poolster Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Jake had fallen asleep in his mother's bed,she was gone at the time and he would sometimes go in there and lay on her serta matress to relieve his back after he got off work. When he awkes the world is a different place.........


Categories: Instant Size Change, Giantess, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3543 Read Count: 23904
[Report This] Published: February 23 2013 Updated: February 26 2013
Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: April 27 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Morning Revival

One thing that doesn't make sense is that in chapter 1 you write that Lucy took a shower and then went to bed, and then in the second chapter she wakes up and comments on how she doesn't have time to take a shower. Why would she need to take a shower again so soon when she just showered before going to bed? That doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Just thought I should point that out. Other than that keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for pointing that out,sloppy writing on my part.

uTopia by gerald Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

The last attempt to save humanity has become hell for its inhabitants. See how three woman friends are trying to alter the balance of powers for the greater good or their own benefit.


Categories: Crush, Gentle, Lesbians, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 169493 Read Count: 155154
[Report This] Published: May 08 2013 Updated: November 18 2013
Reviewer: Chozo Signed
Date: May 10 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Intro - how it all came about.

I read the intro as well. One thing I would like to nitpick about it was that 2,000 mile radius ship in the pacific that was sunk by blowing up some bombs. I think if anyone ever built something that large they would use compartmentalized hulls which could only be flooded in the damaged areas as opposed to the whole thing being sunk, because if you are going to build something that large it would be stupid not to take every precaution. Just my thoughts.



Author's Response:

Yes, I was not sture about this part for a minute - but the main thing is, that deep underwater nuclear detonations create significant pressure changes and with such scale plus water weight overhead - there will no materials able to stop flooding and hull tear, theoretically - and we are talking multi-megaton devices, which tend to generate a lot of energy, even if most of it escapes as gamma...
I also never said it was a single-compartment ship, just simply that if given enough time and effort, anything can be destroyed - for instance if most/all compartments get damaged - I just think somebody would have found a way with so many possibilities the assemblers give and it is hard if not impossible to protect against every single threat (that's why I'm also a bit scared for the future). Also - keep in mind that the ship was not yet complete (hmm, which part I may have missed in the description).
As for the logic and reason - at first I was going to describe a network of inter-connected undersea bases - but eventually went for a more "dramatic" approach - since it is not like it's a central point to the story or anything.

Besides - when was the last time anybody has seen a smart government? You know how the bureocracy works...

But I really do appreciate picking it up - it is the second least feasible thing that found its way into the intro, I believe ;)

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