Reviewer: bb91 Signed
Date: May 17 2016
Title: Chapter 1: A prova
I only speak English and had to translate this online, but what I read was fantastic. The story was engaging with good turns to keep the interest. I liked both Mark's growing frustration and Julie's indignation, with both failing to see the others point of view. It made for a really good read. I hope you write more in future because I look forward to what you can deliver!
Author's Response: Thank you very much.It is really nice to know that someone who doesnt even speak portuguese had such interest im my story.Your review also makes me happy because House Rules, was the first story of inanimated transformation that i really enjoyed,it is still my favorite one, and it was a huge inspiration to this one.
I was planning on post first chapter of the english version before finishing the portuguese one, but im not fluent so it take some time, and writting was being so fun.Julie forced me to finish her story, i couldnt think of anything else.