Penname: WaffleCone [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: July 13 2014
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basically slow shrink lover


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Kyra by little mikey Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 96]
Summary:

A loving father of one inexplicably starts shrinking.  Unfortunately for him, his daughter soon realizes that she doesn’t have to take orders from him anymore – and their relationship starts to take an entirely different turn …

 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Incest, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 199743 Read Count: 719822
[Report This] Published: March 06 2014 Updated: September 07 2014
Reviewer: WaffleCone Signed
Date: July 13 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Intro

I agree...that was a real hard chapter to read. I like the slow shrink and everything. From the daughter getting bigger...the friends....and Im assuming the the young girl will tower over him soon enough, but wow that left a burn in my stomach. It make me wish for him to just get away or to even die just so Kyra can get a ultimate burn of loosing a father and in her twisted mind a son. At least in Pariah the man sorta had a choice and was too....enticed to follow logic. This man is getting the shit list everyday. I wont be surprised if Kyra planned this for some twisted logic she has.

 

all in all I pray for a happy day and a happy ending for him. I dont think I can take another Pariah ending. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I never intended the story to go on this long originally, but I found out that I didn't want to see it end so I just kept thinking up new ways to torment him and putting them in.  From a plot perspective, though, I can see how it might come across as a little much.

Reviewer: WaffleCone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Putting all the torture for Jimmy aside...Im going to guess the only reason Kyra let all this happens is simply cause she is sadistic pure and simple. Reading the story from chapter one to now leads me to the only possible reasoning. She just like to hurt which gets her riled up. The other girl whose name I forgot just plain hates him which is open and shut case and now Amy who was the "nice" one turns out more devilish then Kyra and Sandra (name popped up).

Yet....if you think about it...Jimmy is also their crutch in some way. Anything bad happens...automatically blame Jimmy...I took a cookie from the cookie jar.....torture Jimmy till he passess out....you get my drift? Jimmy's shrinking is giving a thrill to all the girls in the story....a mother complex for Kyra with S&M. The same applies to Sandra and Amy as she is starting to explore it justifying it from her "betrayal" as she thinks. Heck even Suzi does the same thing but for child like behavior.

but enough of my rattling. Its a interesting story just too much humiliation even for me lol. I can sense the end game which I hope we can officially know why Kyra let all this happen. Im still hoping for that happy ending or even an ending where Kyra gets a Big "screw you" moment like Jimmy died or something. IF you could just give Kyra that one Screwed moment and I prolly could stomach the rest lol

 



Author's Response:

You're right about Kyra's motivations, I didn't give much reason for her to act like she does but it's just her nature and her being corrupted by basically unlimited power and freedom over him.

That's an interesting viewpoint on Jimmy being like a crutch to them.  To be honest, I never really thought of it that way, but there's probably some truth in it.  I do see Kyra (and Ms. Johnson too) as being mostly aware that he doesn't deserve what's come to him -- rather, they willingly blame him and act as if they think he's culpable for everything, even if they usually know better.  It's really just Amy who has been duped by the other two into genuinely thinking he's a bad person and irresponsible, etc.

But yeah, even for Amy, I can see her willingly turning a blind eye to his actual actions now and simply assuming the worst of him no matter the situation, using him as a crutch as you said.  Interesting point.

 

Camilla by little mikey Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Society is changing rapidly, and Mark Lawrence has fallen behind the times.  Looks like someone will need to catch him up … but who??

 


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Humiliation, Incest, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47101 Read Count: 61548
[Report This] Published: August 20 2018 Updated: February 10 2019
Reviewer: WaffleCone Signed
Date: October 23 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Maybe I need to re read this but at this point I dont know if this is a growth story or a shrinking story. I do know that this story is starting to feel like a Kyra two.  I understand that this is a feminist world and its gonna get dark. I guess you want to be the Edgar allen Poe for giantess/shrinking stories, but overall your pulling the same methods...just that this time it seems far fetched. Even if Camilla is a foot taller I cant see her father wimping out that easily unless the society is full of superwomans now. I skimmed your story so maybe i miss that part so forgive me. 

Ill wait a bit longer to really judge it. But Im sure its time to reveal the curtain at least to know if camilla is gonna get bigger or the papa is getting smaller...knowing you and the way this story is going its gonna be the latter.