I write vore stories. I post my new stories on Deviant Art under the name Marius the Mage. I very rarely post here any longer. You can find more Forbidden Dish stories there, as well as a few other character series and stand alone stories that I've created. Here's the link to the profile and more of my stories:
https://www.deviantart.com/marius-the-mage
I will put stories here based in girlfood's Forbidden Dish restaurant, used with original author's permission
This was a great addition to your story. These characters, both predator and prey, are truely believeable. Wonderful job providing a background story as well as realistic descriptions of being chased and eaten. It seems like what might happen if two lovers actually attended the Forbidden Dish. I love it! I hope we may get a cameo of Skittles and maybe even Adela in future stories.
thank you. I wanted it to kind of have a heart. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
An enjoyable first person narrative; good storytelling, some humor and a great build up to the ending.
The vore lesson continues for Brooke in the School of Civil Service.
Doorknob,
You clearly have a gift for keeping us at the edge of our seats. It was a well written story from the woman's prespective. We're all studiously waiting for more!
Thanks for the kind words girlfood. Your stories are one of the main reasons I got into writing these stories. Really glad you enjoyed it.
Lucy has a little surprise in store for Sheldon. Shrinking, transformation, vore, oysters.
This was an increadable story and one i am going to add to my list of favorites! I love it. More stories please Oishi1
I enjoyed writing it as well. it just took me a while to get around to revising and submitting it.
Detective Constable Lisa Stewart of the Metropolitan CID gets more than she bargained for when she is assigned to a case where tiny footprints are found at the site of a rather strange and sinister murder. More strange murders lead Lisa to believe that there is a serial killer on the loose, but this serial killer has the power to shrink their chosen victims.
cool story. i look forward to more.
Glad you liked the beginning of this story girlfood :-) xxx
a Q&D drink accident story.
A hero rushes to save a damsel in distress. While she waits she has a cookie.
Nice work. A good unaware vore with a bit of a twist. Glad to see you working again!
Five men find themselves shrunk at a day spa full of supermodels.
Well those guys certainly learned their lesson... perhaps a bit too late though.
Indeed. It's kind of a pass fail system.
Class is wrapping up and Brooke finally gets her chance.
Outstanding! I truely enjoyed this creative story. These girls are now off to find other men to eat. I wish i were a male in the Woman's Republic. I can't wait to read more about Brook and her friends outside the walls of the School of Cival Services.
Thank you, Girlfood! Glad you enjoyed. I've already begun the next saga of Brooke so it should be up very soon.
Continuation of the School of Civil Service story. Brooke has graduated and about to get her shrinking device. Just as a warning there is talk of vore, but not a whole lot of it in the this chapter. I wanted to describe the Republic in more detail and I hope I have done that successfully. Enjoy!
Great story! I cannot wait to see what happens next! You are keeping me spellbound.
Brooke heads to the Exhibition to try her new device.
Fantastic writing a great detail. Doorknob you do a great job of painting the picture for a reader and what a picture it is! Well done. I look forward to more!
Glad you enjoyed the story girlfood! It's probably my favourite addition so far, hopefully I can get the next (probably final) chapter up soon.
See my Timescrybe2 account, as I am going to ask the admins to terminate this one as soon as I've finished moving the stories to the new account. This old timescribe account has been malfunctioning since Jan 2019, causing hassles for both me and the readers. I plan to get rid of it ASAP.
good to see you're adding the old story. i will be looking forward to the new additions
Just a reshuffle for the better, but I hope fans old and new really get a kick out of it. I'm honoured that you're reading it again.
A Forbidden Dish Tale from the female perspective.
Fantastic as alwasy my friend. I came up with a basic idea of the restaurant and you took it to an epic level. Well done with using the first person. I am happy to see you writing again.
I'm very glad you liked it. I always feel nervous that I'm hijacking your concept when I write in Forbidden Dish, but I enjoy the concept so much.
A stingy scientist and his well meaning, but not to bright, assistant, have a delicious lab accident.
Origional idea. A nice, silly story.
Yeah. I wanted the predator to have a bit of innocence to her. Despite the horror that would be present if this happened in real life I wanted it to be kind of light.
Marissa contemplates what it means to be thirty while having a little snack.
Fantastic! I love it when a trusted friend becomes the consumer.
It is one of my favorite scenarios. I like the character to get a false sense of security.
A vore writer's wish comes true.
Great work. Very Twilight Zone.
Thank you, I decided to add the narrator and make it Twilight Zone like because the moral and the change of the character felt like the old episodes.
Second season of Forbidden Dish. Every story in this season takes place on the same day.
Well written as always friend. Also, happy birthday French Snack, another great author!
Thank you. I should probably post a link to his works in the story notes for people here who aren't familiar with him.
A man discoveres a shrinking potion and his voyeuristic tendancies get the better of him, with unfortunate consequences.
As always, I enjoy your stories and appreciate the detail you put into them. I wasn't as crazy about this ending as I was with the origional version- I'm a vore guy. Still, very creative and bravo. I hope to see more of your writing soon!
Emma needs something strong to help shift her mornign hangover but with a distinct dislike for coffee, she decides to try adding a little something to help cover up the bitter taste.
~ Another short story for my Danza Macabra Series. This was to get me back into the swing of writing after a loooong patch of disinterest for writing gts stuff ~
well done! nice attention to detail.
cheers ^_^
I quite like this story, despite several elements i dont usually like lol, I'm not a fan of 'nano' size, it took a while to get the shrunken guy character feeling natural, and personally, i hate coffee hehe :P