Penname: Mechamini [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: July 02 2015
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am an honest reviewer. I decided to make this account so people who get negative reviews don't decide to attack my stories as an emotional rehash. I check for grammar/spelling (you're probably safe unless it's bad), good plot, enticement/cliffhangers, and loosely eroticism...I know my interests vary from others, but a small role does play into how I feel about it, I am human after all.


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Reviews by Mechamini
Ishrink by Maki Rated: X starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: While shopping for a Ipod a young woman ends up getting more than she bargained for when her Ipod accidentally shrinks someone in the park. However, will what starts out as an accident stay that way?
Categories: Slave, Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Body Exploration, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1863 Read Count: 36822
[Report This] Published: January 08 2008 Updated: January 08 2008
Reviewer: Mechamini Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: July 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A decent story, the cons slightly outweighed the pros though.

 

On the plus sides, I like the punk idea as opposed to the typical "popular beautiful girl". It was also taken from the girl's point of view and the iPod thing was a somewhat novel idea. The blue hair color was awesome. It was also written in a colloquial sense which was nice.

 

On the flip side, it was a very short chapter with room to expand in succeeding chapters, but no foreshadowing. The vocabulary was pretty rudimentary, but I guess it makes sense by the journal-like set up. There was no character development apart from the main character--sort of. The scenery was not described well. Sorry for being picky, it was just pretty low quality for a featured story. It has potential though, don't give up!

 

Summary:

Two girls try to reconnect their friendship with a trip into the mountains. Unaware there is something watching them, wanting to get closer for an encounter.


Categories: Animal, Adventure, Entrapment, Gentle, Lesbians, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15734 Read Count: 49129
[Report This] Published: July 09 2015 Updated: February 19 2017
Reviewer: Mechamini Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Off we go

Incredible, I am definitely glad I read all four chapters. Well worth the read. On with the review...

The story is not at all generic. It had a very unique setting, involved small female characters and was very thorough in its descriptions. It had a thick plotline and great character development. The vocabulary and grammar were nearly perfect and the story kept me captivated throughout. I also like how the giantess had two sides to her, for gentle and violent interaction. I will definitely be returning for the next chapters. I almost feel bad not giving it a perfect five star rating, but every good story must have its points of criticism.

It was a little lengthy before reaching the depths of the water, aka when the giantess interacts with the characters...lengthy for a giantess story. However, it was well worth the wait. There were not really any points of eroticism in the first four chapters, but it leaves plenty of room for it.

I don't have any suggestions because I am believe it would ruin the creative imagination you have. It's all up to you, carry on!

Author's Response:

Thank you! That means a lot! I was so nervous of how it was coming along because its not a typical giantess story. But I did add a few bits of eroticism to the first couple of chapters. But thank you again, awesome feedback!

Fleck by STC Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

I wrote something for someone who touched me in a very special way.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1432 Read Count: 7959
[Report This] Published: July 09 2015 Updated: July 09 2015
Reviewer: Mechamini Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW. I don't know if you outdid yourself or this is just the norm. I was utterly amazed at this. I added both your story and you to my favorites. Where do I begin?

 

The most interesting part was the style it was written in, it takes the point of view of the giantess, and was written almost like a journal, very poetically. The story was enticing, captivating, short and to-the-point. It ended as a cliffhanger, and with a huge sense of mystery/ambiguity about Fleck, likely one that will never be concluded. While I don't like to mention this part as part of the review, it was pretty erotic, it had me nailed word by word.

 

In a nutshell, this is really a must read. I hope that you'll write another one in this fashion or make a second chapter. Well done.

Summary:

While their parents are out of town for a month, 15 year old Katie Nolwind is staying at her boyfriend Matt's house. During this time, they happen to acquire the world's first and only size-changing machines. When friends start getting involved, all sorts of size changing adventures occur! Note: Eventually some girls get unbelievably huge!


Note: This has the same characters as some of my older stories. Shrinking is not really my style, so while dome may occur in the story, it won't happen with the two main characters. Reviews can be done to give ideas for future chapters.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Breast Enlargement, Couples , Giant, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Growing Woman, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Matt's Growth Adventures
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9206 Read Count: 113830
[Report This] Published: July 10 2015 Updated: August 04 2016
Reviewer: Mechamini Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 10 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Machine

A good way to start off your story, it had a bit of a conventional beginning, but it was blunt enough to keep the reader through the whole thing. I think the fact that the sister will be returning leaves room for other giantess possibilities! The capsule was well thought out and thorough in its explanation, however it seemed too abrupt and unexplained how that package made it to the door.

All in all, you did a good job at captivating us and left the door open. I appreciate how you allowed us to provide suggestions, I hope the boy gets shrunken below his regular height and maybe she experiments on crushing him to justify the explanation. Who knows if she will become evil or not? ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, but I already stated that the two main characters won't shrink below their regular heights, and either of them being evil just won't happen. I may have at some point a boy who gets shrunken, but not really crushed on purpose. Sorry.