Sammy is bullied in school all the time by the upperclassmen. What kind of revenge will he seek when giving the power to do so?
Another fitting picture of Sammy:
http://img.amiami.jp/images/product/main/172//FIGURE-030159.jpg !!
Hope youre doing well. I miss your work so much, and this story in particular. Wish you all well and that you have a nice summer. Hope to see you come back nto writing mood again by time. Cheers
hope youre doing well. I miss your work so much. I hope youre not done writing, please... there is NO other author on here like you. youre my idoll, actually my favorite author I ever met on here. You can also mail me back if you want, I would just love to discuss about your stories more in detail, hear what you are fantasing about. You rock man. I hope youll continue this story, you just have to.
Another Sammy version
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DHAQiZzUIAAacC2.jpg
Miss your work more than anything.
Hope youre all safe and well. I miss your writing so much, more than anything. Hope yu come back! This site needs your addition.
I hope so much you come back. You just have to. This story cant die. Please :(
Wish you will come back eventually. Hope you have some nice Christmas time <3
really hope youre still out there. I am worried but also upset. This story was the best ever written period. Wish there were more m/m authors out there. ope youre alright and will eventually write again. I miss your work a lot.
I honestly dont know where or how to start. I wish I could show you my state of emotions right now. It is PURE HAPPINESS. Pure BLISS. Pure JOY. I was becoming so upset when this epic story wasnt continued anymore, and I was worried you were gone on here. And now this surprise... I dont care it took a long time since the last update, all I care about is this and that there was an update and what you wrote in the chapter end notes there is more to come
I just noticed this stupid site cut off my review, I had to re write it, damn... hope this one goes through.
Please let me first say, this is by FAR the best of all chapters so far. The length, the plot, everything is just the best of them all.
SOOO HAPPY the school started again! It was a bit of a downer the school was closed, and this makes it all just amazingly better again! Please let the school open for the upcoming plots aha!!!
You have just this fantastic talent. I dont know how to say it, but dude, youre like the best author on here, I MEAN it. All the other stories lack a proper logic background, characters, settings, and you just have them ALL. I just love your "High School" setting so much. And how you write, it is like one of these coming to age movies, having all in it what those moves are good for.
Then your realistic szene switches, mid plot. And suddenly, when the reader is DEEP in the plot, a very ironic and cruel transformation happens, youre mastring those moments than no one before.
'Sammy felt a knot in his gut as another person went missing. "Who would do such a thing..."Sammy couldn't agree more. Whoever was kidnapping people was twisted individual. He just hoped that someone found this creep and arrest him.'
This was so ironic haha, what a bad person, wish they arres that creep! I totally hope you WILL continue uanware, Sammy JUST has to never find out, it is 100times better this way. Please!!
I also got the idea, please make the two "pesky" police officers vanish. If they vanish, I am sure the police would forget about the school part and start to dig into their vanishing, thinking it would be a mafia thing. How would a kid like Sammy be beind it? He cant. How pesky the two are also would make such an irony, if they two change into two little fruit flys. Maybe Sammy says somehing about them being annoying and pesky like flys.
'As Bobby started to leave Sammy quickly said, "I might be able to go."Bobby turned around and gave him a warm smile, "Cool, I'll give you the address.""Trust me you're going to enjoy this party." With that Bobby headed off toward Rebecca.'
This was such a thrill. I really thought of, what if it was a cruel trap for some cocky jocks, to have some fun at a party with this fag or sissy boy. Then it totally came different. Maybe you coul still include a party plot like this.
I Just LOVE PARTIES. And during high school, they mostly happen every friday, so why not include them more. I would totally love to see at least one more party chapter, they make just the best and most interesting settings.
'Sammy wasn't sure what Doug was talking about, but he just smiled and nodded, "Yeah, Bobby is a cool dude." "Really? That was nice of you guys." !! Although it didn't make the brownie any less applying, it just made it interesting and unique. It must have been a family recipe.'
BEST IDEA EVER!! With the dope cakes!! LOOOVED IT! It is also sooo fitting of Sammy be so innocent and not know stuff like this!! FANTASTIC IDEA! Him getting drugged is also the best plot twist, I would love to see it again. Him getting drunk by some twisted way, maybe at another party of where he promised not to drink anymore, but he's somehow forced into it, maybe by a dare you to setting.
'Suddenly Sammy was looking at the condom and through his drug haze he was wondering why the condom was talking to him. Just as he was wondering why the condom hated him so much the sound stopped and it was quiet.'
BEST CHANGE SO FAR OF THE ENTIRE PLOT! This was soo funny and soo ironic. Like shes talking to him and Sammy just looks at the condom and in his hazed state is like, huh why is this condom speaking to me and so rude? !!!!!!!!!!!!
'What was supposed to be originally an insult by tossing a small size condom package at Sammy soon turned into a nightmare as Rebeca found that she, the condom now, was extremely small compared to Sammy's member. It all came to her as Sammy tried to roll her side down but couldn't make it roll over the top. Sammy didn't stop trying. Suddenly Rebeca let out a cry as Sammy pulled the condom a little outwards then down and to Sammy's delight and Rebeca's horror she started to roll down the length of Sammy's cock. Finally reaching the end of where the condom could go, Sammy let go of it and felt a very very snug firm grip. It was almost painful but in a pleasurable way. Sammy shivered from the new feeling. His member twitch in response to the ecstasy it's owner was having.
... shot skyward only to be blocked by Rebeca's body. The liquid burned her body and caused her to stretch even more than she already was.'
BEST PART OF THIS CHAPTER!!! I just loved the cruel irony, how she was a too small size of a condom for Sammys penis. LOOOOL! And how the cum made her burn and everything, fantastic. The only things I missed were here gaging and feeling to vomit inside her of it. Then I also wished she was disgusted later on and screaming and stuff. Also it was a bit short plot change of how fast she realized she was a condom.
10 out of 10 chapter. Seriously. And I have so many questions now. Because of the whole Bobby misunderstanding. LOL! I just loved Sammy thinking it was Lucas in his hazed state!! SOO GOOOD, and it may get soo ironic and embarrassing of plots later. I wonder will Sammy forget everything because of being drugged, totally I guess! I also just loved how Rebecca totally was trashed and wasted by her BF talking about her in a trashy way "up above", that part was soo good.
Please let me say, WELCOME BACK!! SOO HAPPY YOU ARE! AND THANK YOU FOR THIS CHAPTER!! It is now my favorite of them all! Seriously!
If I could wish for more to come, I would still LOVE to see a Math teacher become Sammys anus, mostly one of the boys be like him be a shitty person, what an asshole, of a surprise test. And please him not lose his consciousness.
Then I alsou got the idea of some rude guy or girl become the first little droplet of an anal bead, which breaks off, and is lost inside Sammys ass.
The two pesky police officers become tiny fruit flys, and both meet a horrible fate, mostly eaten by Sammys gold fish in his room, the other swatted by a rolled up news paper and still be half squished alive on it laying on Sammys PC desk, for a while. Sammy maybe playing Minecraft.
I also got the idea of someone turn into a bacteria, mostly inside someones ass cheecks, or so small inside a tiny little droplet of cum or sweat.
Someone turn into a single hair inside an ass, or into butt lint.
Someone ends as a cum stain in Sammys underpants or on his bed cover, and him keep is consciousness.
THIS STORY!!! Welcome BACK!! YOU ROCK!!! Happy 2018
Are you kidding me!?? !!! AMAZING new chapter, and another so fast, this was so worth waiting, I am so happy you write more often now. No Truly the best chapter so far. And to make it fast, this is totally my favorite chapter now of the entire story.
And there was soo MUCH irony in here, I love irony more than anything. I will come back to what I mean with this in a bit.
How you write this story is just intense, and seriously, it is by far now one of the best stories ever written, period. On all platforms. I never read such a high quality story before, over time. And the last two chapters?? I loved so much how you put so much love and time in it. The lenght is incredible.
Can I please talk a little bit how a cute and fantastic character Sammy is? You created such a nice cute boy, and he has the most sweet character. I totally can put myself into him as a reader, how you make him have a heart brake over Lucas and how he struggles through his teenage time is fantastic. All the plots you included, the school hours, the afternoons, the free time, the at home time, the cnversations... with his mom, the parties, the bec over his head things, cinema... ALL is sooo fantastic. I would also love to see him maybe have morning woods, jerk off in his room sitting on his PC maybe just in tight boxers. I even could see him wear pink tight boxers, in skinny gray faded jeans like this: https://i.imgur.com/kV2ebv8.png
I also saw this pictured and it reminded me of Sammy of the bunny and colors: https://i.imgur.com/O4s7ulH.jpg
Jumping straight to the end of course I noticed this: Just as Sammy was about to go fall asleep he felt a weird tingling sensation run through his body. "I wish Lucas loved me," Sammy prayed drifting off to sleep.
I hope more than anything, that the next chapter isn't the end. Please don't end this story!! I would wish to read on "forever" honestly. There could still soo much happen and Sammy turn rude random people into goo... or in here, his waste.
Taking up the word, of course I noticed the incredible ironic word play you did here... first Sammy said this:
Sammy eyed him like he knew that it was him, "I don't want any of it to go to waste..."
And then in the stomach the two bullies were like: "Hang on Brandon, there's got to be a way out," Mike said HAA!! A way out of here... get it!? LOL!
And then... the ending, of them become Sammys WASTE! IS soo ironic and awesome, especially because Sammy said it before, he doesn't want his popcorn to "go to waste"... FANTASTIC!!
And now a few words about the best tf you did so far: How Mike was accidentally swallowed whole, and this leads to his outer shell just to melt away, and his inner self... the kernel... books a one way trip through Sammys digestive tract... with a very unfortunate ending, and HIM survive it, and mostly will even survive a horrible future ahead. This is the best thing ever! Please do it again. I would love to see some shitty person become Sammys or maybe Lukes anus, and stay alive, forever, and the cruel moments of him burping, vomitting up turds, and him scream in his mind, and is like please oh gooODD NO NONO -- GA- VOMI---
I loved this sentence so much: He would have vomited if he could, but as a popcorn kernel, one couldn't really throw up.
But also the best part?? This one:
Mike saw through the water above and saw where he just came out of, and things became clear where he was. He was in the bottom of a toilet, stuck in someone's waste. This couldn't possibly be happening, Mike thought to himself as he tried to move or dislodge himself form the heavy mass he was attached to but found he was just as stuck as he always had been. Before he knew it, another object came crashing down from the sky darkening his vision from the outside world. It was another mass of leftovers that the giant above him didn't need, as it collided with the water. Mike cried out as he watched the mass drop down near him.
You shuld have him literally scream at this part NO NONO ONNO GT MEET ME OOUT OFF HEEEERE... and him freak out... where Sammy, above, just casually sits, maybe txt on his phone, and then wipes.
The moment he realized he was just stuck in waste... and another creamy solid ploped near him down sinking into the water, was the best moment of horror ever in this story. Fantastic.... AWESOME!! My favorite part in this story to this point.
And then!? YOU even did it better! Of sammy standing up after wiping to piss. LOOOL!! You rock man!! This is totally plots I have waited for. And This is now my total favorite so far!!
I also loved so much how these rude teens spoke about chicks laughing and making rude jokes, and then also throwing popcorn at Sammy.... fantastic idea!!
I hope so much you wont end this story in the next.... please!! I would still love to see lots of unfortunate dark tf, anus, flies maybe and another like ant or bug, maybe another vore in the future, maybe someine turns into a peanute which also doesnt digest. A cum stain ending, a fleshlight would be amazing, and Sammy never cleans it. Or maybe it was Lukas because of him being straight.
But also... how you build up the chapters and how it suddenly turns into a nightmare is just YOUR own style like no one does on here, and you ROCK at it!!!
Can't wait for the next to come. Thank you so much for writing again. THANK YOU!
I actually thought of a really funny and fitting plot, for this math exam maybe and a math teacher. Or some bully maybe too. Wo gave Lukas an unfair test result of an F... or for the bully part, who called Lukas or Sammy maybe a faggot. And then a bit later Lukas could be like in aconversation "That wasn't fair. What a shitty guy... what an ass-hole." And Sammy would think then, no one should call someone names like that, but in this case, Lukas was right, he really should be called an ass-hole. Even if that wasn't nice. But that just wasn't fair and rude. I read the chapter again it is just too good. I also liked the part with the gurgle and Mike wondering what that was. You should had added an ironic part of Sammy maybe farting or something as the preview of what will happen to him later haha. Oh and that would also such a great tf idea, someone becoming a fart for Sammy to pass!! lol!! And Sammy is totally getting red of it. What if the blue little gas bubble aka fart would then also not vanish but glue to his ass or in his boxers in the back area. I like those please kill me parts the most. Hope to see more of them too again.
how are you !! are you in exam phase right now? hope all are going well! and you have some time again soon to continue writing!! I just loved the two chapter you pumped out, they were incredible. especially the popcorn one and the kernel ending, was mostly the best so far. I love it when the transformed guys keep their memories and spirit, you should do that more, it is totally the best, especially if they end in a very cruel fate like this.
I am honest, I am really upset now... seeing the story end like this, or just in general end. To be honst, there could have been tons of awesome transformations happening still. I see you wanted to end the story, so this was more of a forced chapter, not really fitting in the plot. But still, this is the best story ever written on here. And I mean it! I wish to give it 99 out of 100 stars, just one star missing because I am really upset now, ha. But dont worry. every good story has to end one day. I had so much fun reading this story, seriously. And if I could wish for one just one thing... I would LOVE more than anything, you have no idea... to see you start a new story, in the same style, with Sammy or at least, someone who is "similiar" like him. Your other story Bully for You is my 2nd favorite of yours. And if there is a little chance, you will write a story like Bully for You and this one again, with m/m, and some really unfortunate transformations arcs, like someone turn into a gay boys penis, part of his ass, vore, and even more like this, it would be amazing. Thank you a billion times for this story. I would totally commission a story from you if you want, just give me a shout out ha (: You are my favorite author on here. And this story is the best I ever read, anywhere, it just worked for me, and I was in love with Sammy. Thank you for this story was written!!!! *LOVE* *LOVE* *LOVE*
A young boy insults an old woman and is shrunk in his own home, left to survive his mother and three sisters for the weekend. Will he make it?
please continue this, look good so far
Commissioned story.
A has-been hooker and her best friend use drugs to unwind with her son shrunk in the next room.
Really enjoy this.
I'm glad. :)
James is forced to babysit his younger siblings, so he invites some friends over to make it more enjoyable. Without warning he recieves a package and finds his friends and him at the mercy of his younger sisters. They soon realize that not everyone can make it out alive.
I really liked this chapter! I am a fan of the most cruel situations and death scenarios, so this idea of him liquefy alive by some bug spray was awesome! I have to say I dont like the whole baby plot though. Hope you write more !! Sadly cruel sadistic unaware plots are so rare! Would love to see the protagonist actually have her boyfriend come over and him interacting with the "bugs" too in some very unfortunate way for the tiny insects. Keep it going!
Really hot story!!
A traditional telling of a few people stranded in a girl's bowl of cereal.
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Oh what I have waited for this. So happy to see another chapter. I was actually worried you may have abandoned this story. What a fantastic new hapter. Youre just a god with details, the idea with the phone conversation and the selfie was brilliant. I imagine, what if he phone had really high MP and there was this evidence on this very picture, if you would zoom into it like 100x you may see a microscopic small person glued to the frooploops on her nose... and no one would know the evidence was there, right there on this picture. This is a cool and cruel idea to think about. Sadly I am no fan of "nose vore", which was a bit of a killer for me there. But still this doesnt change how amazing your writing skills are. PLEASE continue!
Hope you come back man. This story was the only really good unaware vore story on here in months :(
