Ryan thinks he's safe from Shrinkism but finds out that he is in for a big surprise.
I really love this story. Especialy this unaware part on chapter 7.
I hope this will have happy ending like Big proposal which was also a great story.
In this story, you are an assistant at a fairly major law firm in the city. You work for one of the big attorneys at the firm, Kayleigh Smith. She's a tall redheaded 41 year old woman who is as kind as can be, but has a little secret regarding shrinking and CPR dummies.
Maybe you could assist her with this...?
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Nick unlocks a secret power within himself, and begins using it to fulfill his long-held fantasies with his beautiful, plus-sized wife, Cassie; but he soon discovers the dangers that such a power can bring, AND what could happen if he loses control...
Approaching 250 reads…🤗!
Important note: I’ve received some feedback saying that there have been formatting and grammatical errors spotted in several chapters, so if you should find any errors—misspellings, incorrect character names, or grammatical mistakes—please leave a review and let me know ASAP so I can fix them, as these can distract from and greatly diminish the story experience.
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This is reall great story.
All three you stories are really great.
Your describtion of all events is really good. I also like this positive vibe in your stories. Even with ending of this chapter I still have small hope for good ending for nick :)
Well, thank you for reading my stories, and thank you for the review.
This was really great story. I really like your style.
I didn't really like this ending as it was really sad but I'm really glad to hear that you also plan to write alternative ending.
I would say that that bond we created with nick and Chris from your stories is due to your quality as writer. You write these characters really well. I generally like stories with good endings but it rarely become so import to me like in your stories. You really manage to make me empathize with main characters which is quite rare on this website. This is one of the reason I like your stories. Second reason is detailed description of staff that happen to them. I especially liked this part with unaware training and unaware slipper time.
To sum it up this was really good story my favourite part was unaware training and unaware slipper time. Still my favourite story remain "Babysitter trouble". I think "Babysitter trouble" is my favourite story on this website 😊
I eagerly await for alternative ending and new stories from you.
Thank you for listening to our feedback and for changing ending of this story.
I really appreciate this.
Here I would like to say one more thing.
Please don't discouraged by all this feedback about previous ending. Please stay positive and continue to write new stories.
I think that you received all this feedbacks due to extremely high quality of your work as whole. When you create masterpiece you create great expectation :)
Normally when I read story and find some ending really bad, I just shrug my shoulders with some disappointment and move on.
In case of your stories, you manage to really pick my interest, you manage to make me empathize with character. To sum it up you manage to make me care about story.
I really like your stories and have very high opinion about them and you as an author.
I didn't like previous ending but I would still rate this story as 5 stars.
I eagerly awaits for next chapters and new stories.
You are really a great author :)
Well, I do apologize for this whole mess, and I certainly appreciate your continued support and kind words. I’m taking this all in stride, and I promise to deliver a better ending. I just don’t want everyone to simply expect a happy ending every time, but I certainly understand people wanting one in this case. Obviously, my readers, like yourself, wouldn’t be so passionate about this story and it’s characters if they didn’t like how I wrote them.
So, just a reminder, the original deleted ending will be tweaked and reposted as the “alternate ending”, and I’m currently writing a new ending.
Other people's POV in the Shrinkism universe
I really like many of your stories but man this one was dark.
It was well written but for me it was to dark and sad.
I have mixed felings about this as i come normaly to this webiste rather for sexual stuff not for emotional.
Still i must agree that this was good emotional story it did make me cry.
Simon has Regressor's Syndrome, rendering him and all other sufferers on the planet around two inches in height. Normally, he lives in a specially designed colony with other people of his height and disposition, but this week he's visiting his normal-sized sister, Milla, who's just out of college and living on her own for the first time in her life. Simon's ready to cut loose and enjoy the big-person world for all the delights it has to offer... but he didn't count on one factor: Milla's roommate Beck, who seems to have a strange fascination with our tiny hero's size...
But Simon is an optimist. He can make friends with anybody, especially somebody his protective big sister loves and admires. Will he win Beck over? Or does another fate await him?
Nice story :)
I hope they will manage to save before its to late.
Thanks for the review, friend! And yeah I hope so too - but it's not like I control that outcome, now is it?
But truly: I wouldn't worry too much. Beck loves Simon too much to let anything happen to him. Surely she'll rescue him from inside her...
...won't she? ;)
