Reviewer: Shrinkmeister Signed
Date: August 23 2017
Title: Chapter 82: A Test of Wills
Damned Omega bitches... You gotta love Oliver's resolve against overwhelming odds as he stands firm against the sadistic monsters. He calls them out for what they truly are. Unfortunately, as the hag said, she could torture him in any of a number of ways... tearing him slowly apart... a clothes iron... acid... crushing body parts with a pair of pliers… not good. As others have said, I don't think she will do these things... even if Oliver resists. I love Oliver calling the bitches out. The sisters have become so numb to what they do that they see nothing wrong with any of their crimes because in their eyes, their victims are never really people, they are a sacrifice yet to be made, an offering to whatever pagan deity they blindly worship and the life energy the sisters need to perpetuate the deception.
Pix brings up a great point that I hadn’t previously considered. Those sisters with one child have a first born male and the mother stops there with no other offspring. Where the first born is female as in the case of Sersei or Harmony, the brothers are a couple of years younger than their sisters. Given the dislike Edith has for (normally sized) Men in the lives of the sisters, this must mean that the siblings have different fathers who may have met the same end as Charlie.
I want to second the point made by a prior review... This story works so well because we genuinely care about the protagonists. Cam, Oliver and Stan are good, likeable people that have become victims to the most loathsome, Satan like creatures imaginable. They take on a pleasing form to lure in their prey. Their victims unaware of the smoke and mirrors until it is too late. There must be some way of taking this sick operation down. It’s up to Oliver to stay strong to protect and give a chance to Stan. In turn, Stan, Deacon and company (Samantha?) must put a plan together. If Stan has a heart to heart with Samantha, she might spill the Omega beans (as crazy as the story would sound). I could see a determined and armed Stan make his way back into the Omega house to take down Edith. Not that I condone violence, but exceptions sometimes need to be made…
Author's Response: After that surgically precise delivery of Oliver's father's fate our boy stayed true and yep called them out on their BS. The question can he stay strong while they have their way with him? Or will he escape again and seek revenge on Cerys? Oliver has proven himself a challenge to these efficient killing machines. A few questions answered but still so many others asked. 🤔