Penname: Trisar [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: November 23 2007
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Nothing special. I'm just an author from Fanfiction.net and occasionally DeviantART. You might know me, you might not. Leaning towards not.
Beta-reader: Yes
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Summary: Two college-aged friends, male and female, investigate a mysterious invitation to a place called 'GTS University', under the promise of allowing women to grow into the sky. What starts out as completely innocent becomes far more involved. The girl gets to grow big, as promised, but the male...
Categories: Adventure, Breast Enlargement, Crush, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Slave, Violent, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15976 Read Count: 148445
[Report This] Published: November 08 2007 Updated: February 23 2010
Reviewer: Trisar Signed
Date: October 05 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This last chapter seemed a little... contradictory to me. Heather is apparently best friends with someone who thinks nothing of crushing someone and licking the crushed person off her hands, she herself nearly killed Chris by using him as a toy (after outright killing someone else for no good reason and stuffing another one into her purse), but she's horrified at an equally-tortured voice crying for help or death from Sandra's purse? It doesn't add up at all to me.

Author's Response: Allow me to explain. Heather may be a violent GTS, but she has a tinge of good in her...and, compared to Sandra, she isn't nearly as cruel. This chapter is supposed to convey that Sandra has done something so horrible that even the 'evil' Heather is horrified by it...the idea is to put Sandra over as a real bitch.

Alice by Comrade Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Alice buys a mysterious old locket and shares its 'special' power with her sister and her school friends.

Premium Entertainment Comrades.


Categories: Incest, Body Exploration, Gentle, Lesbians, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33337 Read Count: 227368
[Report This] Published: December 17 2008 Updated: December 17 2008
Reviewer: Trisar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Alice & The Locket

Just finished reading this about a week back, only now had the time to leave a comment about it. In my opinion, one of the best, and sexiest, works on this site. The images evoked by your narrative left me able to perfectly picture everything as it was happening. An absolutely superb piece of work.

Summary:

Holly is a two-inch tall 19 year old attempting her first year at college. Along the way she'll have to learn how to handle her ravenous roommate and the struggles of being surrounded by new people.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, BBW, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41244 Read Count: 353494
[Report This] Published: January 15 2014 Updated: July 20 2019
Reviewer: Trisar Signed
Date: February 19 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Holly seems to be starting to enjoy living dangerously. I'm going to guess, based on the first chapter, that this still won't be the end of her yet. I wonder how Linsey would handle knowing that her fellow tiny (if not quite as tiny) girl is starting to like being "play-eaten." Something tells me she won't enjoy it as much herself.

On a technical note, while I can handle most of the minor errors I've seen, one thing that bugs me is your dialogue formatting. It gets a little tricky to follow conversations that are short sentences on the same line. The general rule is: when starting a new subject or someone else begins speaking, make a new paragraph. The lack of indication of who is talking makes it a little tricky sometimes, too. Just my two cents.

Reviewer: Trisar Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Very nice chapter. Looking forward to the next one--curious about how Linsey managed to get out!

Summary:

Hey everyone ! 

 

 

 

It's a new story but interactive, set in the Gigantopia Universe and with short chapters, which can be written in a day or two max. The rules of the interactive bits are in the story proper, I hope you'll enjoy it !

 

 

 

It'll be very mixed in size and gender of protagonists, so I hope it'll be good enough folks :)


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Couples, Gentle, Giant, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, M/f, M/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Gigantopia
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43121 Read Count: 93820
[Report This] Published: August 04 2020 Updated: January 07 2021
Reviewer: Trisar Signed
Date: September 24 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Watching TV - Lindsey and Andrew

Man, if Andrew is still alive... and I'm not really giving him great odds... he might start trying to get out of the deal with the showrunners. Unless breach of contract would mean Lindsey just owns him. Maybe that's why Alice is suddenly so nervous.



Author's Response:

Well, I'm not sure the deal didn't take it into account. But I've got a feeling he and Lindsey will meet again :) !

Summary:

A Lilliputian CEO finds his company the latest acquisition for a much bigger Brobdingnagian conglomerate.

This mixed-size story takes place in a Gulliverian universe. It heavily features business attire for the giants: in particular, pantyhose and flats. The story also features plenty of vore alongside some other usual macro content. Content warnings inside. Comments and constructive criticism are more than welcome!

DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27157 Read Count: 59344
[Report This] Published: March 22 2021 Updated: March 22 2021
Reviewer: Trisar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Offices

Absolutely phenomenal work. A spinoff or sequel set in this same setting would be amazing--whether in the Lilliputian village, or following Mrs. Yamamoto and Mrs. Yamamoto, or even just Ms. Oshie's continued acquisitions and progress.

Summary: Sam needed to rent his spare room for some extra cash, but when his new tenant and roommate turns out to be a size changing supervillain he gets more than he bargained for. A silly and romantic comic-book inspired story.

Categories: Insertion, Adventure, Breasts, Destruction, Gentle, Growing Woman, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34217 Read Count: 27617
[Report This] Published: March 15 2022 Updated: March 28 2022
Reviewer: Trisar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Homecoming Pt. 3

This was an absolutely brilliant piece from start to finish. I really enjoy the vibe going on between Maisie and Ultra Woman, and how protective Ultra Woman is of Maisie. The idea that the boisterous, showy, but low-stakes clashes between the two is a sort of "stress relief" for Ultra Woman dealing with more serious, grim threats is a great one to me.



Author's Response:

I like writing their relationship too, Maisie is one of Ultra Woman's points of human contact that anchors her a bit and keeps her sane.

Summary:

Reincarnated into an Otome game?

Boring. 

Reincarnated into a yuri game?

Better.

Reincarnated into a yuri game as a tiny fairy? 
YES!

Follow the link to see some references of what characters look like: https://twitter.com/MaryIsTasty/status/1634582360120492034?s=20


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Middle Age (50+), Butt, Couples, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, FM/f, FM/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15920 Read Count: 11379
[Report This] Published: March 10 2023 Updated: March 13 2023
Reviewer: Trisar Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 12 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Prima's Home

Good potential, nice take on the isekai setup compared to the usual "got hit by a truck and woke up in another world" style. I actually appreciate the lore dumping and magical info as world-building not just for us, but for Katie, since this gives her an idea of what she's truly capable of when not restricted by story railroading.

Oddly, it actually makes me want to create a setup like this using Fabula Ultima to create a game setting... Hmm...



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Making something like this after reading (honestly too much) isekai stuff is fun. And to me, establishing a world is very important. Setting rules and limitations prevents BS down the line. 

And I've never heard of Fabula Ultima before, but it definitely looks cool! Though every dnd type sizey game I've tried to participate in or host ends pretty quickly T-T 


Reviewer: Trisar Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 14 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: How It Begins

The plot thickens... Characters behaving in some ways counter to what Katie knows of them (like Cayna), and others in ways she expected from the start (Gremoria).

Something tells me Kaya's in more trouble than Katie by the time all's said and done, though.



Author's Response:

Indeed~ 

There seems to be unknown forces at work here. Hopefully Katie can sniff them out!

And as for Kaya...wait and see~