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Enjoyed it, indeed! Maybe one day Bowsette's ambition will reach the stars

As a fan of League, I've always been disappointed by the dearth of quality content for it so thank you for this most welcome addition! Your Lux is one deliciously powerful dom and she doesn't seem too keen on mercy, poor Shyvana D: 

Would love to see this continue or spun out at greater length, I'm especially intrigued by the notion of Akali and Vayne's potential participation, but I understand that this is unlikely and I appreciate this piece nonetheless for it. In any case, I have very much enjoyed this.

I can't wait to see more. I'm not even a fan of some stuff that the story may delve into, but this story is so fucking good that I don't care. Kudos to you and I am so curious to see how Heather and Ben end up. 

Only just got around to commenting after I finished this a while ago, I enjoyed the nice change of pace in tone after a couple of darker stories that I had been reading. Meredith's belittiling attitude perfectly leverages our expectations, we're obviously well aware of what your giantesses are capable of :p MC's willing embrace of her is something we often see in slow shrinks where they can't help themselves but not as often in shorts like this so there isn't really time and space to develop him as an individual really. Only reason I bring it up is because i read you intend to have these two resurface, which prompted both the question of what you might do with him and it also invited the idea that Meredith might eventually learn to grow as some of your other characters do :D

A worthy story, my thanks for it!

Been eagerly awaiting this chapter and it lived up to the hype for me! Reese has embraced his changing relationship with Olivia and I'm immensely curious to see how private they choose to keep it or if her new role as mentor eventually results in the whole family acknowledging their new happy dynamic. As I also a sucker for a happy ending, hopefully Olivia's benevolent guidance ultimately betters Reese as much as it lowers him :p

The chapter note mentioned that, as so many popular writers and stories can attest to, there truly is no pleasing everyone at once. But, even more content is a more than acceptable substitute! 

well done and happily awaiting your future work, including this story and its continuations!

I've seen this series in the Most Recent section a few times lately, but I hadn't realized that it wasn't a reupload of the the first two versions of it that I've read and enjoyed. I'm really glad that I clicked this one open because in those previous two iterations, I was curious about the prospect of focusing more on Timmy's relationship with the girls as opposed to Beatrice and Maia. Specifically, expanding from their patented humilation to something more sensuous between the girls and him and this delivers wonderfully in that regard. Their touch is just gentle enough here even when they're pushing. Their words land with just the right amount of ownership to leaven the humilation. Timmy isn't going anywhere; he's going to be trailing behing Clare's widening wake, living well off of her crumbs and feeling smaller with each passing second. The girls each feel more distinguishable, particularly Clare and Katie, than in their previous appearances even with the relative brevity of this fic. Should you decide to return to this one again, I'm curious if we'll see more of Ashley because her quiet nature makes me wonder how she might go about occupying more of Timmy's and the reader's attention. This one ends for me with the feeling that the girls, Clare in particular, have taken precedence over Beatrice, justifiably having done so by virtue of their deeper connection with our meek protagonist. 

I like to have something nice to say for every piece I read, often to complement a writer on their improving skills, but this was a rare and happy surprise to read something from a writer that I already considered to be uncommonly skilled and to see that they've become even more so. I've read most of your publically available work and they do lean harsher than this, a little less to my tastes, so I will cop to that bias, but I sincerely believe that I liked this one so much because you did it so well! I don't like seeing readers of erotica reviewing works strictly in light of their own taste and encouraging writers to abandon their own, so please accept that regardless of wherever else your writing leads you, I hope to see that it keeps getting better and I intend to read as much of it as I can get a hold of! Once again, I am satisfied with my decision to click for what I thought was a re read. 

Thank you, I thoroughly enjoyed!

holy shit what did he do? 

You finished the story so fast, I wasn't anticipating that I would get to read the one whole thing in one go!

Absolutely love the overly stern, domineering mother/guardian/teacher all in one vibe from Evangeline. This scene in particular is just so evocative:

“I… but she… she can´t take my car…” He asserted.

“Well, now she can. I believe she said you should be taller than 4´8”, now… I don’t think your 4´7” height is above that range.” 4´7”? He was down to 4´7”?

He felt overwhelmed. He nearly stumbled. This couldn´t be happening. Just yesterday he was above 5´, and now, now he´s half way down to 4´.

“Larry, I know this is hard. You were doing so good. Why can´t you accept the fact that people are only trying to help you. Even I came to advice you that you should listen to her. But you refused to. Now, there´s no way you can´t. Next time you see her, you´ll have to give her your keys.”


The entire menagerie of women are awesome, each one brings a different flavor. Hope that we see more of all of them and they just keep casting larger and larger shadows.

I was expecting something like a wedding, but what a fascinating twist on that expectation. I'm so curious what the women gain from this ritual. Did Priya grow? Obviously, Jaime's perspective made it hard for him to tell. I'm also hopeful that we'll one day see more of the setting and the displays of respect.  I'm not familiar with your work, I think this is the first story of yours I've read, but I will soon rectify that so apologies if I'm just missing context from a previous story of yours. 

And of course, this story was really hot XD