Penname: eaterjolly [Contact] Real name: Jean
Member Since: June 11 2017
Membership status: Member
Bio:

A hopeless asexual romantic.
My advice, don't try to understand my brand of romance, unless you really wish to challenge yourself. Going a step further, might run true for just about every bit about me.


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Reviews by eaterjolly
Summary:

A boy shrinks, and his sisters document the experience on YouTube.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Humiliation, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 93512 Read Count: 240854
[Report This] Published: October 03 2016 Updated: July 07 2017
Reviewer: eaterjolly Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wanna start before my review, any good music recommendz? More experimental the better.

Go take a moment to think, then read the rest after linking 'em xP Greatly Appreciated!

Now onward into the expanse.. This is the first g/t related tale I've been able to live with a chapter, much less the entirety. I'm talking many winters ago. I'm gonna be very forward. I see you deconstructing and subverting the colloquial canon of g/t relationships. Key elements pushing towards the dynamic of the original lilliputia, however to the apprehension of almost every human character. The story offers sympathetic treatment of the topic of gynophobia, masking it as gigantophobia. And, in addition to all that, does an expose on the dangers of psychological malpractice which enables emotionally abusive behaviors and the gradual destruction of one's sense of self (a.k.a. free will).
This is a marvelous work of influence on society in general, and makes me proud to have considered myself a part of the g/t community. I'm done flattering a swear xD I did dry heave a bit at them eating 'hotdogs' (offends my vegetarian sensibilities to imagine that kinda stuff). Not a matter of preference I make my praise, but merely recognizing the good.

I'll say though you've set yourself a tall order to really bring home the lesson of abusing hypnosis, but I think you can maybe bring out the water works by falling back on that seen of almost-rape at just the right moment when emotions are already very piqued. Perhaps also pokes from Parker's remorse of abusing it, or others. Bring these semi-sad moments back to the reader in quick succession after the melancholy's already there, and pop EXPLODE! I believe in ya, just please don't ignore it and let devoted readers write it off as nothing, when it's clearly not.

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You really should go to Sizecon. This community really could use your influence. Anywayz, look forward to checking ur recommendz. Pota-toe Chip-Chip Fruity Cheerioes~!



Author's Response:

Experimental? I'm not sure what that is, but I'd be interested in knowing your favorite(s). Feel free to email.

My favorite music can be depressing so I shy from recommending it. Songs like Damien Rice's 9 crimes https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cgqOSCgc8xc and Concrete Blonde's Tomorrow Wendy https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NCwIHwSt8RU. They make me *feel* and I never grow tired of them. Perhaps it's similar to what you mentioned in your review...a desire to experience an explosion of emotion. Well, those two songs do it for me. Again, I don't recommend them and I certainly listen to less sorrowful stuff, but they're a couple of my true favs.

I like reading your analysis. Since I suffer from depression myself, I feel perhaps some of that bleeds into the story. It's odd when I hear dark words like 'melancholy' and 'destruction' from reviewers since this story doesn't strike me as particularily dark/sad. Yet. It certainly has the potential of progressing in that direction. I'm kinda hoping it doesn't, but since I discovery write, it's hard to know what will happen.

Sizecon...wow, such a thing exists. Interesting. I tend to avoid social situations, but thanks for recommending and ty for the review!