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MAJOR/Minor : New Lives by Kurogane335 Rated: X

[Reviews - 65]

Summary:

A continuation from Dance with Fire, set in NotSirk MAJOR/Minor universe. I highly recommend reading his story to better understand this New World Order and all. Dance With Fire may be interesting, but I'll try to develop it without too much call back, for new reader's convenience. I'll try to put out a chapter every Saturday.

Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, BBW, Butt, Couples, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, New World Order, Violent, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223239 Read Count: 235112

[Report This] Published: February 03 2018 Updated: August 26 2019

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: February 15 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Frustration and acquisition

New chapter!!!

Is it possible to show character growth in a smut chapter? Apparently yes. I'm impressed with Shannon. She's made significant steps to not be that abusive person she was and she's even showing restraint! She's almost worth Alejandro's time.

As for Ms. Park...........Jeez.

I really hope Shannon tipped generously whoever had to clean up that room!

Author's Response:
Tipped ? Ah ! That's not how you become a billionaire. Shannon secret teacher, Uncle Scrooge taught her well on that front. More seriously, she paid for all the services when she loaned the floor, and the hotel expect that kind of things, so don't worry, the service are well paid !

I'm also happy that you noted her character growth. In the first draft, she was a lot more torn between doing a "soft" dominance show, and her past behavior, but then I decided that after almost a year of therapy, she had done enough progression on this front to be able to feel better without resorting to violence... But her character growth is not over folks !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: February 23 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Settling in New Orleans

Hmmmmm. I find that "structural weakness" excuse rather suspicious. If I were Alejandro I'd check into that.

A decent chapter overall. Kind of feels like a setup chapter. Alejandro's just settling in but I feel like seeds for story threads are being planted. Like Jim's daughter or the gators! That's carzy by the way. MAJORS are insane!

Can't wait for Lindsey amd Al to start school.

Author's Response:
Yeah, it was kind of hard to write because of its nature as a transition chapter, but I think it's the kind of things needed to build up my writing skills and this story. I can definitively tell you that you got the main hooks for future chapters in this one, but there is also one which will be used sooner or later and which is a lot less evident, I think ;) !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: February 25 2018 Title: Chapter 6: First Interlude

Samantha's a tier 3?...That's troubling. Al does have a pretty tough wall built around him though. Maybe he can endure it. There are a lot of variables to that interaction that can really cause tension. That's a powder keg!

And I misread Jim. I thought he was an okay guy, but he's already made plans for Alejandro. Maybe he won't be into your daughter! Maybe he won't be into anyone! Shannon's a billionaire who helped him recover significant mental trauma and she just barely qualifies a second glance from Rando! You presume too much sir! You presume tooooooo much!

I will say I actually like the school setting. It's one of my favorite tropes BUT.....New Lives doesn't necessarily need it. It would make good background detail and world building, but Alejandro has tons to work with already with just Lindsey, moving to a new place, not getting eaten by an alligator, Shannon, his own mental health, missing his family. Hell you could do a whole chapter on him just trying to get out the door by himself! No minor entrance! That's bullshit I haven't forgotten!! That being said I do want to see Alejandro succeed in school...if that's what he wants. Education is an important step to independence for a minor. Ah! There's too much to talk about! What will Al do?!!?

Author's Response:
He'll do whatever he wants. Sometimes, he like to be treated like a precious jewel, after all (he told so to Joseph at the end of my first story in your universe, if you remember XD). But I can tell you that Samantha will probably surprise you in a good way (and Jim too, I think he is probably one of the most tragic character I'll write in this story). The school won't be too big a part of the story (unlike your main story) but I want to build some solid foundations at first and then make use of them when needed. I may or may not do a whole chapter of Alejandro roaming in his house and trying to get out, I'm not sure yet. So far, I've roughly sixty chapters that I want to write, with a lot of room to add more or add details !

Anyway, thanks for the review !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: March 03 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Therapist session

Very proud of Shannon actually. Her character has grown the most in my opinion. You can see the tangible change. Al has developed, but in a more subtle way. Would've liked to see Shannon in her wild teen yea. When exactly did she have her first massive growth spurt? That must have been frightening to deal with!

I don't know how commited their relationship is yet, it still seems to be pretty casual despite their mutual feelings so I'm not sure how guilty Shannon should feel about "cheating" even though I hesitate to call it that just yet. It is a pretty big red flag though. MAJORS are pretty competitive and promiscuous so I imagine monogamy's probably hard especially since Shannon's still very young for a MAJOR. She's still in her twenties right? That's nothing for a MAJOR. By the fime a minor thinks of really settling down a MAJOR could still be going strong. I expect they'll talk more about all that when they meet up again

I'm curious how Alejandro would feel about all of it. It's already natural to feel inadequate around MAJORS as it is. Wouldn't be fun to have to compete with one in satisfying Shannon's (let's say generous) libido.

Great stuff so far. I wish more people read this story. You tackle very mature and complex subject matter, and I'm not just talking about sex. Keep it up. I'll keep reading!

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !

Concerning Shannon's needs, it isn't something that Alejandro truly had contemplated yet, but he will have to think about it as he'll interact with her a lot more. The sruggle will be real, but he should be able to overcome it. Concerning our titular giantess, she is slightly older than ALejandro, being already twenty when he still isn't. So far, their relationship was more of a long-distance kind of thing, with the added difficulty that Alejandro comes from a double position of inferiority in the social ladder compared to Shannon, by virtue of being a Minor and not a billionaire, even if his parents are quite wealthy themselves.

I'm happy to see that you're liking the tone of the story so far. Truth been told, I considered putting something game-changing in this chapter, but I didn't want to. I think that, down the lane, when it'll happen (not before a long time now) it'll be easily recognizable. The next chapters will focus more on Alejandro and Lindsey, but the next one with Shannon will be the one which pushed me to write this whole new story, so I hope I'll be able to do it justice !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: March 09 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Strong encounter

Embarrassing moment ffor Lind. First being completely cowed and dismissed by Sam, then kissing your brother. Smooth, real smooth. I'm actually right with Alejandro on this. Not really a big deal, kind of a natural extension of her character. She was really close to Rando in DwF she was the only one to convince him to go down to dinner with the Matthewsons and kick the whole story in motion. She's even more possesive now. It will be an interesting little arc to watch her handle her hormones and infatuation.

Oh! And I don't like Sam. I kind of hope Shannon kicks her smug tier 3 ass.

Author's Response:
Damn, I tried to depict Sammy as someone really blasé because everything is easy and she doesn't like it anymore. I'll have to work more on that angle then, I find that it makes her interesting and loveable.

I'm glad that you liked Lindsey's characterization here, I kind of wrote the kiss without thinking about it and was unsure of how natural it felt. Expect more teenage MAJOR strange reactions in the future !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: March 16 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Course correction

Alejandro can be sneaky when he wants to be. Although in this case I think I would have preferred him to be more upfront just because that's what I'm used to him doing. He's a guy who speaks his mind and I think he would've participated in the ritual regardless. Unless a MAJOR forcefully held him back. Also need a little clarity on the event. Is he expected to strip down in front of the whole school?! I wouldn't have the guts.

Also looking forward to the meeting with Shannon. Finally!!!! Will she reveal her extracurricular activities?! How would Alejandro feel about all that. Perfect time to set things in stone. What are they to each other? I'm actually really worried. Shannon's made a lot of progress but it would be foolish not to be cautious of her. Hurry up and write the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response:
I'm writing this very chapter right now, hopefully it'll come out tomorrow's or Sunday's morning. As for the event, you'll see how it'll go when we'll be there, I don't want to spoil the fun ! And as always, thanks for the review and your wonderful work !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: March 17 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Baila con fuego

.....For once I actually think Shannon might be worth Alejandro's time. What a master class in seduction and romance. Holy shit. She knows how to plan a reunion. She really does care about him.

Now...As absolutely great this all was, even somehow showing character development in a sexual interaction, I feel cheated! I want more, but it's over! They barely got to talk at all! You left it on a HUGE cliffhanger!!! Why?!?!

I'm not going to demand you write another chapter so soon. That would be incredibly hypocritical and unfair, but I will say I'm waiting.

Good job.

Great chapter.

P.S.: What's this bullshit about hiding the minor exits!? You think I didn't notice that?! Screw this architecturaly manipulative house design. Put in some fucking doors!

Author's Response:
Why? But for the GLORY OF SATAN !

Kidding aside, at first, I had in mind a full chapter, without talking, between Shannon and Alejandro, which would have been the dance and only the dance. Then the next chapter would have been sex and the talk would have been in it. But then, I decided against it because I felt their sexual reconnection should happen here, so their discussion would be more meaningful. I'm glad that you liked it, it wasn't so hard to write in itself, but the difficulty was to convey what I had in mind on the page, which wasn't exactly possible, but I'm still happy with the result.

Concerning the doors, it'll be touched upon next chapter, but I can tell you that for Shannon, it's a way to protect Alejandro : if thieves or something break in and can't find his entrances, he'll be able to slip away or hide well enough.

Anyway, thanks for the review !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: March 27 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Farewells

There getting married?! Holy shit!! I think you just broke Izzy's heart! She's still crushing pretty hard on her "friend" Jandro aka the only truly interesting minor male she's ever met. Why are all the good ones taken?!

It does make me a little sad to see Alejandro's self worth issues. Dismissing Shannon's sexual infidelities because of the doubt in his own ability to measure up. You're worth it Al. And remember you're more than enough for a certain minor girl.

5 grand on seduction. Makes you wonder how much she dropped on the ring. I applaud Shannon on her honesty even if she is moving things faster than the Flash!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:
Oh, don't count Izzy out yet ! Without spoiling too much, you'll see that Shannon is rather open to certain kind of sharing, and that she is also quite aware of how Alejandro and her don't really know each other that much. And you'll see sooner or later than he isn't the only Minor Izzy could be interested in, but I won't say more ! Thanks for the review, by the way :) !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: April 10 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Alone time

I feel really bad for Lindsey. She seems to be going through a lot. It's a surprising revelation that she feels like the family black sheep, especially with Alejandro being the minor. I can see why she's so attached to him.

Author's Response:
Well, she is a soon-to-br thirteen years old girl, and a MAJOR. Leaving almost everyone she knows away and moving to a town where she knows no one can't be easy. Plus she feels kind of inferior to her family because her parents are successful, Alaric is basically doing great and Alejandro being a Minor, she finds him rather well-off for his kind, all things considered. Moving away can be traumatic so I want to play on it. And her feelings, which were/are mostly repressed will have to be adressed and made publics, at least with Alejandro or some new friend, if she want to grow as a people.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: April 22 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Bondage time (part 2)

Just want to say once again you have a real talent for adding character development in your more sexual content. Something I have yet to master. Even though bondage isn't my thing these last few chapters have been very readable and I just can't miss the continued development of these two. They're getting so much closer, trusting each other enough to test their boundaries. Shannon struggling to contain her dominating urges. Good stuff. Sorry if I haven't reviewed much. I've been busy. Still reading every chapter and feeling bad for Lindsey.

Author's Response:
Thanks ! Quite frankly, I wanted those chapters to be mostly sexual content, and a lot more steamy, and somehow ended adding plot and character development... Who would have thought that writing sex-scenes as just sxe-scenes would be so hard ? Nobody told me ! I've been dupped ! And don't worry for not reviewing much, life can be kind of good at making oneself busy. And i'm glad you're still liking it. And don't worry about Lisa, it's just some set up built from what you implied she knew about the Mac Ferlan incident, back in the day (even if I still need to find the chapter where it was hinted !)

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: May 06 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Third Interlude

I like it. I think you understand the characters very well. Especially the dynamic between Linda and Lisa. Linda does believe her daughter is a precious little angel and would never manipulate her. She might be purposefully ignorant to her daughter's manipulative nature. What really resonated with me is the idea that Linda sees Lisa's status a a halfsie as more of a detriment than a plus.That's good stuff.

My one criticism is that Lisa seems a little too knowledgable of Al and Shannon's relationship. Stuff like Shannon paying for Alejandro's schooling or that he has a sister I don't think Izzy would give her those details or even mention Shannon much at all. But that's just me. Shannon's pretty famous so it's not implausible for Lisa to know who she is. Izzy's definetly at least mentioned Alejandro to Lisa though so she is aware of the crush.

Very good work overall.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the praise, of Creator of MAJOR/minor !

I'm happy that I didn't pushed the characters too far, I wasn't sure about Linda being as oblivious of her daughter's mischievous and manipulative side, but I thought that you would correct me if I was wrong anyway, so no harm trying it :p . The halfsy's problem was a spur of the moment, something I thought MAJORS would feel bad for minors because it embolded them, being "half-MAJOR" and all, and for someone like Lindsey desperately trying to get more freedom in anyway she can, I felt it would be a can of worms for her parents.

Concerning Lisa's knowledge about Shannon and Alejandro, I can't help but imagine her pestering Izzy or taking advantage of our titular heroine's training to resist mental probed to actually learn more about it ! At least, it's my headcanon so far.

And many thanks for the review !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: May 19 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Derek and Joshua and advices

Alejandro, Alejandro, Alejandro. Tsk tsk tsk. You should no better. You're just candy to them now! What have you done.

While I applaud ihis courage I question his intelligence. He's made himself even more vulnerable now. I wonder if he can handle it?

Also feeling for Lindsey. I didn't expect her to face that much animosity for her career choice. It seems veyr sensible to me.

As for Naoru. Go ahead!

Author's Response:
Haha, sometimes even bright peoples may do some really stupid shit and, well, he is in a situation he has never known ! He is bound to make a lot of mistakes !

More importantly, I hope you're fine and that your surgery went well. Get back to full health and great days to you :)

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: June 10 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Farewells

I'm back! I must say it's quite the nice surprise to see not 1 but 2 chapters of M/m:NL up as I lay bedridden from the hospital! It keeps me going! Also giving me 3 votes is too much power. I found the chapter on minors refreshing. A minor that actually likes the status quo. I never focused on it but that's a very common perspective. That Kris guy being called an SJW was pretty funny too. Being pro minor to the point of radicalism is an idea. I want to know more about his backgroungd. I don't think even Izzy is necessarily super pro minor rights.

Samantha surprised me. She has a very casual indifference to her. Doesn't care about minors or MAJORS. Is it because she's tier 3? Kinda seems to have a superiority complex going on.

As far as what you write next I'm very indecisive myself. I have a real itch to see what you do with Izzy bht I'd prefer you make that choice yourself so that it's organic. I also have more chapters I want to write but unfortunately won't be able to for quite some time. I'm excited for the next chapter either way!

Author's Response:
Glad that my writng helped you in the hospital! Get well, man (or woman, I don't know !:p)

Don't worry about Kris, we'll learn more about his background. He isn't that radical however, but they are kind of harsh and explain that despite having a rather small goal, he just want to have Minor teams for soccer, even mixed teams, really. But he's sensitive and tends to overreact.

Sammy is kind of an arrogant ass in her way, right? It's definitively partly because of her Tier level, but also because of what happened to her father, and we'll learn more about her past and how it shaped her. And how her fist will shape some cretins bthering her new bestfriend :p

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: August 18 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Kris and Vanessa

Lindsey, Lindsey, Litlle Lindy Lindsey. "tsk, tsk" *shakes head*

How are you even surprised. Most MAJORS think like Vanessa. I dare say she's not really even doing anything wrong here at least from a MAJOR'S perspective. Getting upset won't change it. I mean you had to see this coming. MAJORS see minors as property, or at best children to be coddled or ignored. Vanessa's scheme if you can even call it that is more like starter level MAJOR/minor dating. Of course Kris is a means to an end. Of course she'd want to use him to springboard her career! What he wants really doesn't matter much! And hey if Kris comes to like her that's a nice bonus. You know how rare it is to find a minor partner?! Like 1 in 6700! Don't be stepping on a girls courting plans. Snitching to Shannon! Just deck ker once and move on! Vanessa's done nothing wrong. She's just strategically placed herself in an advantageous position to capture a minor mate. Don't be jealous.

Kris has a much sadder backstory than I thought. It makes me wish it wasn't glossed over so fast. I wanna know what his original family was like. Since he was their coping mechanism how are they fairing without him? Back into drugs? Are more of them dead?! Do they get to see him, like monitored visitation? For some reason I imagine someone withdrawing and the first thing they do is search for Kris to hold him and calm the symptoms. That's kind of sweet and dark. Was he a lottery minor? Like Jackpot Johnson? If you don't remember what that is it's when poor families have lots of kids in hopes of having a minor for the sustantial monentary assistance provided by the government. I just think that'd be a nice element. Either way he's more deep than I originally thought. He went from a 5/10 to at least a 7/10 in this chapter.

Also it's rough to see Alejandro still feel so isolated at school. He needs real friends. Not just a bunch of thirsty MAJORS either. Sorry Lindsey but that doesn't mean you. You're doing great work but you're still his little sister!

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: August 22 2018 Title: Chapter 32: The Bond Plane

I'd say you got it right. I find it hard to critique anything so far. A very accurate interpretation. I like Hua-Ju's perspective on it too! The bond being something to be reclaimed from MAJORS who have in a way taken control of it. I doubt many MAJORS would say that though (not out loud anyway). Izzy probably wouldn't agree either. She's to grounded in reality and lacks the imagination to truly value bonding. I think this makes Hua-Ju pretty unique so far. Nice to see Alejandro making a real friend. I can't imagine how Shannon would possibly be threatened by a tiny, portly asian girl, but I'm sure she'll find a way.

Also it's kind sad to see Alejandro us still so damaged. Sad.

Author's Response:
Concerning Lindsey in the previous chapter : you can't really blame her, it's her parents fault ! How did they dare educate their MAJORS children to be kind and considerate toward their minor sibling !? Truly the works of terrible parents ! Now the poor girl is all twisted with morality and care for Minors and other nonsense, ;p

More seriously, Lindsey's kind of a tool when it comes to the usual MAJOR/minor relationship. But it makes her great to point the obvious problems or highlights the good things. In the same time, she is a MAJOR entering puberty, so she likes to fight, she's boisterous and, deep down, really unsure of herself.

Concerning Kris and his family : we will see more of them, well, Kris will talk more about them. But I felt that it wouldn't make sense for him to reveal everything just yet. Just like Shawna'll be more open about her past and her life at some point.

Now the actualchapter... I'm glad I didn't fucked up the bond here ! I'm also happy that you like Hua-Ju. I wanted to introduce a Minor with great ideas for her people but too shy/not engaged enough to become an ambassador. Of course, Alejandro is kind of alredy that but since he's fiancé to Shannon, he's almost forced to become an ambassador. Plus I thought Hua-Ju would make for a great foil of Izzy : where one is all about the bond and what it allows minors to do, the other is all about the real world and see the bond as something not so great. And I felt that 'Rando needed a Minor to truly learn the intricacies of the bond, so it's a bonus point but he got one of his kind as a friend in N.O. already, possibly Kris, and Samantha (who's like, the Super Alpha of the School, to be honest). He'll be pretty safe now !

As for how he still sees himself as damaged ? At the start of Dance with Fire or even in the 3-chapter Mac Ferlan Incident, he would have been far worse, believe me. In truth, he's already healed a lot, but he needs to make a final choice : either embrace his brokenness and make it something more beautiful than ever before (à la kintsugi) or forge ahead by fundamentaly rejecting this idea. And he's not ready yet to choose either.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: September 02 2018 Title: Chapter 34: About empathy... and sex

Shannon might need more therapy. Sex isn't gonna solve everything Shannon. And go easy on poor Alejandro he's had it rough without you relentlessly pounding him in more ways than one! Take a cold shower! That said they have a remarkably strong bond (heh, get it? have I made that joke before?) Although I'd kinda like to see Shannon get trounced by Al in a bond! I mean Shannon does seem a lot stronger than a tier 2 even though she's not tier 3 so who knows if Al's up to that. Maybe she's like a tier 2.5 even though that's not a thing. There are subtleties to bonding who knows? *shrug* I still wanna see it though. Especially with her getting all whiny about it! Izzy's shaking her head at you Shannon! Geez I wanna see that too. Izzy bonding with Shannon? Would Shannon get into the house?!....What am I even talking about now? Fun chapter good work!

Author's Response:
Well you know... Shannon is a twenty-something billionaire, a five plus meters and ton and kind of super-strong because of it, even compared to her size. I'm pretty sure that if she says that sex is the solution to all problems, sex will comply. And if it doesn't work, more sex is obviously prescribed !

Concerning Shannon's Tier level, for me, she is firmly a Tier 2, but her massive ego and confidence is displayed in the way she uses the bond, as a very blunt and overpowering tool. Hence why she freaks out at the idea of Alejandro being better than her at wielding it (and, spoiler, he is! ANd so are Lisa, Izzy, Shawna... well, every minor, really).

And thanks for the praise ! :)

While I'm thinking about it, if you've some rough ideas about a following to Alex After... i've got a kind of itch to scratch there, and I wouldn't want to derail anything :)

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: September 29 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Sixth Interlude

Oof! Rejected! Congratulations. You actually made me feel bad for Mei...just a little. Hard to do considering I created the character and know exactly how coldly manipulative she's willing to get. Completely denied, in the shower no less, a minor shower! She's trying so hard! Even taking a babysitter job she doesn't need. How exactly did she manage to snag a babysitting position anyway? Scratch that. The real question is how did Ignacio convince Izzellah to accept a babysitter at all?! That is not a conversation that went well for him, especially if it was Gloria's idea! That poor man! Probably played the baby card somehow. That's the only way Izzy woukd accept that bullshit.

Another great chapter and you write Izzellah well. Really captured her awkward lust and embarrassment! She's just a hopeless virgin afterall. One small mistake though. Iggy and Gloria aren't married yet. They're engaged. Barely a difference I know. That's it. Really just a detail. Reading your story always feels my head with ideas.

Author's Response:
Dam, I'll correct the marriage soon then !

Glad you're liking this Interlude, I was kind of nervous, really. I didn't want to mess things up for your Special (of which I can't wait to read more!).

Mei totally made use of her starlker abilities to learn about the Team having an event and of her Perusasion skills to convince Ignacio. But thanksfully, Izzy was able to take her down a peg !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: October 30 2018 Title: Chapter 39: The Beaulac Family

What's happened to Shawna is really tragic. Does she even know what a normal life is? It feels like she's been programmed to except what happened to her as normal from practically birth. I wonder what kind of person her aunt really is to do that to an underage minor and I refuse to see Helena as any better. Heavy stuff man!

Well at least Lindsey gets to see Izzy soon!...And Sabrina. Actually that hasn't really worked out great for little Lind has it? Also I didn't realize Lindsey was only twelve. That actually makes her a few months younger than Sabrina huh? I was writing her assuming she was at least thirteen. I kinda feel bad now. Like Sabrina's been bullying her! Oops!

Author's Response:
Yep, Shawna's been quite screwed by Life. I hope she'll find someone nice someday.

And don't worry for Lindsey, she'll be 13 in a few days, story times 😉

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: December 02 2018 Title: Chapter 43: Nervousness

Nice chapter I really like how you nailed Izzy's- wait......Izzy's in this chapter?! Oh, shit! You've caught up!! *hits panic button* I guess I better get in gear! Seriously though message me so we can collabe and I'll do the same! Get our literal stories straight.

Anywho I think you have a frim grasp on my characters! Izzy especially, her contempt for Shannon feels almost like I wrote it. Wonder if she'll ever get over that roadblock?.....No, probably not. Great chapter! Very hyped for this!

Author's Response:
I sent you a note on DA, but overall, don't worry about pushing chapters out. I can push less chapters out of New Lives so you'll have more time. Plus so far, I intent to mostly fill the blanks of your current chapters ;)

Thanks for the review by the way !

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed

Date: February 05 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Farewells

Yo! Nice chapter! I'm still reading. Try not to feel to bad about not having much interaction. Believe me people are still reading. I go through the same thing everytime I post a chapter. You gotta do it for yourself first!

Feel free to skip ahead if you want. I think I've said this before but if I haven't, The special is open ended. If I ever do a sequel to MAJOR/minor it will be after Izzellah finishes highschool and after this crossover at least as far as her first trip to New Orleans. I'd love to see what you imagine for these characters!

Author's Response:
Don't worry ! I won't stop now. I mean, I've written the end of Alejandro and Shannon's story on patreon (and thanks to Afroking kind acceptance, I'll post this very short and very kinky story here once I've finished New Lives).

As for the timeskip in New Lives proper... well, it'll be to move just after the Special time-frame, so nothing too big, but some great game changes are in the plan.

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