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Escaping Balton Penitentiary by zaneofbane Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Brenda, a gang leader, is suddenly ousted by an up-and-coming rival gang through supernatural means. Not only that, but many of her underling flip on her, fingering her as the driving force behind their own crimes. Sentenced to three consecutive life sentences, follow Brenda as she ellicets some magical aide of her own, escaping through the aide of a smuggled in shrinking potion and a young drug dealer who's set to be released.

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Categories: Insertion, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5359 Read Count: 27236
[Report This] Published: June 27 2014 Updated: July 03 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loving the detail you're putting forth in these chapters. It's good stuff.

Homecoming by gtswburg Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

It's A Sorority Thing: Homecoming

Homecoming weekend is a joyous time for the Gammi Phi sorority.  However, it can be harrowing for their shrunken slaves.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Warning: This material is intended for mature audiences only.


Categories: Slave, Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33199 Read Count: 115787
[Report This] Published: July 01 2014 Updated: September 24 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I like Megan and how she treats her slave. She doesn't show the same sociopathic tendencies as some of the other girls. Torturing small and helpless creatures tends to be a sign of mental illness. She treats her slave more like a beloved pet. She probably thinks he enjoys her games, which it seems like he actually does enjoy some of them.

Not Ideal by Halo117 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

A fun night turns into a not so fun morning.


Categories: Feet, Entrapment, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20945 Read Count: 74021
[Report This] Published: July 02 2014 Updated: July 11 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Like the physical interactions so far, but the emotional is little odd. A good friend suddenly turning into a tormenter is a little weird.

That being said, I'm hoping for some kind of moment where she accidently causes him some serious harm and suddenly realizes how dangerous her fun is for him. Something like heat stroke when left in her shoe, or accidently putting too much pressure on him and seriously bruising or maybe even breaking something.

But then I enjoy those kind of epiphany moments in stories.



Author's Response:

yea it didnt feel perfect writing it, but I guess the idea is shes completely drunk with power.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed
Date: July 11 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

I feel like this is totally going to backfire on Molly somehow. Or rather, it should backfire on her because of how reckless an idea it is.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

The most recent chapter was great! The interaction between Megan and Matt was perfectly executed, and I love that she's not verbally abusing him. She's barely speaking to him at all, letting her actions speak for her.

I like that you're mixing it up with her too, having her do more than just feet stuff.

C.H.I.B.I.s - Prologue by Makaze Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

In the future, technology and bio-engineering have reached a point where it's common use in the medical world. However, one corporation wishes to use these disocveries in a different way...


Categories: Gentle, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1782 Read Count: 3930
[Report This] Published: July 03 2014 Updated: July 03 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute premise so far. While you do have a tendency for more violent stories, I hope that this ends up more gentle.



Author's Response:

Oh, I have a lot of gentle things. Just 80% of them are anthro and I know how some folks here can be about such things. SO I've been pretyt hesitant on posting them. Maybe I should.

C.H.I.B.I.s - A Treasure in the Sand by Makaze Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

~Warning: The following Story, while gentle, does contain an anthro/furry character: If this is not something you wish to see, do not proceed any further~


Another entry into my CHIBIs universe. A bookwormish woman on SPring break, finds a moment of peace on a secluded beach so as to enjoy one of her hobbies. However, fate has decreed that she cross paths with one who has been abandoned and forgotten.


Categories: Maternal, Young Adult 20-29, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4324 Read Count: 5442
[Report This] Published: July 05 2014 Updated: July 05 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute. Is this the end of the story for these two, or is there more planned for them?



Author's Response:

Yes, yes there is Jim.

Surprise! by lexy88 Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Rob comes home from college early to surprise his mom, Linda, only to shrink without her knowing.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Mature (40-49), Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Incest, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5995 Read Count: 44939
[Report This] Published: July 06 2014 Updated: July 06 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 06 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Well that was a depressing ending.



Author's Response:

Depressing in what sense? That you didn't like how it ended? Or the ending was just sad?

The Shrinking Show - Season Two by Benton Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary:

After the success of Season One, the mysterious studio that runs the Shrinking Show commissions a new season with eight new contestants! One again, eight contestants arrive at the set of this secretive reality show, only learning upon arrival that they will be shrunk down bit by bit, taking part in various competitions along the way. When a contestant shrinks to 1/16th of their normal size they are eliminated--usually. Things are a bit more complicated this time around.

Season Two is longer, raunchier, and all-around better than Season One. As it is a new cast of contestants, it is its own story and you do not need to read Season One to understand what is going on, but it wouldn't hurt.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 250434 Read Count: 358409
[Report This] Published: July 06 2014 Updated: April 25 2015
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I detect a crack in the solid structure that has been Marie and Carla's friendship so far.

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Date: August 22 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Paul managed to impress me this chapter. For all his arrogance and pride, he managed to push aside his fears and do what he was told. Not once did he complain, beg, or protest.

That being said, Betty was pretty spot on with her prediction of him being first out. Some of the contestants may not be able to see his true self, but from the perspective of the viewer (and reader) he's an arrogant jerk with an inflated ego. So much pride over his military career, and it ends up being Navy and never served in combat. It's okay to be proud of military service, but Paul was taking it to douchebag levels.



Author's Response:

Very astute charicterization of Paul!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Carla played with Betty's toys without permission. That's a no-no!



Author's Response:

Damn right!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed
Date: March 22 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I'm half expecting Carla to find Andy in her bedroom when she's done with her shower.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed
Date: April 09 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I gotta say, Jerry not winning is a definite upset here.

Oversight: Short Weekend by Ackbar Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

After some less than mature choices, Corey Lindon finds his weekend plans cut a bit...short


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Gentle, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: Oversight
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5099 Read Count: 7752
[Report This] Published: July 09 2014 Updated: July 09 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Cut Short

Something tells me that sleepovers and sharing her brother with her friends wasn't on the approved list of activities. That's pretty irresponsible, after all.



Author's Response:

Nah, Abby is pretty much giving her tacit permission to either have a sleepover or take part in one with her line about calling Kayla if she chooses to stay at home. Besides, those friends Melody and Jenna. The only thing Corey has coming to him is an excessive amount of doting :P

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed
Date: August 22 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Cut Short

Is this story DOA?



Author's Response:

It was just a little oneshot experiment in story setup I felt like doing :x. Though I will eventually be revisiting the family in this setting, albeit a few years later.

Omega: Inheritance by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

A young woman, prosecuted for a crime she didn’t commit, is placed in the hands of her titanic best friend to learn a few lessons she didn’t earn but most certainly will never forget.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44494 Read Count: 127719
[Report This] Published: July 12 2014 Updated: October 24 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 19 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Disorientation

This is going to be painful for everyone involved. I feel sorry for how hard it's going to hit Bridget once the truth comes out.



Author's Response:

It's probably not going to be pretty, however it goes down...

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Disorientation

I have a pretty solid working theory about happened, and I look forward to more chapters to see how right or wrong I am.



Author's Response:

The info will keep coming piecemeal in upcoming chapters, so keep your eyes open.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Disorientation

I gotta say that nothing gets me more worked up than someone being punished for a crime they didn't commit. Especially when nobody seems willing to believe them.

 



Author's Response:

Alexandra would probably sympathize with that position.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed
Date: August 09 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Irrefutable

Looks like Bridget is only interested in the truth that she wants to hear, and therein lies the problem with torture; The victim will more than gladly tell you what you want to hear, even if it isn't the truth.

 

"A Beta wouldn’t have been able to do that"

 

Or.. the walkway is elevated.



Author's Response:

I wouldn't necessarily say it's the truth she wants to hear; it's worth noting that Beta walkways are higher up than knee height for an Alpha, which is where the girl fell from. Thanks for reviewing.

All And Nothing by Binary_Prophet Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Oldie from '07. A relationship ends.

Not very violent, I'm sorry to say. :(


Categories: Crush, Feet, Footwear
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1554 Read Count: 11340
[Report This] Published: July 12 2014 Updated: July 12 2014
Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2014 Title: Chapter 1: All And Nothing

That ended harshly.



Author's Response:

'Tis my preference! Thanks for reading.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.