What would you do if you were stranded in a boarding house with not one, but THREE giantesses?
Awesome update, as always. Give your writing a once over, minor spelling errors or miss placed words. Otherwise, great imagery and story. Interested what the next chapters title is suggesting. I've been hoping that Tloche and Pacho would explore possibilities together eventually. Hope that isn't crushed!
Jake and Martha spend a fun evening involving copious amounts of alcohol. The morning after is not so fun. Especially for Jake who inexplicably finds himself naked and half an inch tall.
Instant classic as far as I'm concerned. I appriceate your adherence to realism (as much as possible that is), and how you keep the characters within "their lane." By this I mean, I believe their actions and how they interact with one another. She is nervous at first, but becomes more comfortable (slightly with time) in her handling. He points out how its uncomfortable at times etc.
I'm with Little Romance, hoping that something more comes of their relationship as the story presses on, but would also understand how that wouldn't fit the characters.
Also, thanks for a gentle story, it's my favorite, in general, and seems to be an outlier within the community. I hope you explore the topic more in the future and share with us!
One further question, are you also "iBelore" on deviant art? Would be interested in picking your brain on the collaging you do (I like the style and want to get into it myself).
Thank you for the kind words, I'm happy to hear you liked my story.
Yes, keeping their personalities consistent throughout the chapters was my biggest concern, but I hope I managed to do just that. And realism too, as you pointed out. I enjoy stories that are, more or less, believable and I strived for mine to be such.
More gentle stories to come, it's the genre I feel the most comfortable at.
And finally, yes, that would be me. I'm not sure how I could help you, but I could offer some advice. Do note, my collaging skills aren't that spectacular, so if you wanted to learn something more than upper basics, you will probably have to refer to specialized guides. : ) Either way, if you need help with that, ask away.
The wealthy genius behind America's most unique, most innovative, and most controversial dating app has a dark secret, and a new shrunken friend who is about to learn what it is.
A story about a world changed by the revolutionary technology of Syze, and the lascivious behavior of its famous inventor.
Credit to a detached series by Thatgirlyouknow for the seed that created this story.
Would love to get a follow up to Erik and his... adventure. Such an amazing plot.
And the story as a whole is great, as always!
Lucky you, I just posted the second chapter! I will have a third planned, maybe a fourth as the story goes.
I hope you enjoy it!
Very intense update, wasn't expecting this dark a turn.... Not my cup of tea personally, but I'm glad you found your inspiration.
A story about humanity's horrific fate upon being discovered by an advanced alien civilization that stands miles tall.
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A story about a girl getting her first part time job, but the shop owner is breeding these tiny human things in the backroom and it's kinda grossing her out.
A great, yet brutal story. To your question on chapter 9, I would hope the tiniest have suffered enough and Elise realizes that. However, understand if that doesn't fit the theme.
Author's Response:
This response is @ all four of the previous responses, just figured it would be silly to reply to all, so picked the most recent.
I'm glad the consensus seems to be the happy end, to tell the truth, that was my preference as well. The option for an alternate chapter is still there, as vic suggested, but the "canon" ending has been set, and I'm gonna go write it now. Thanks for all the responses :)
Instant classic. Went through and read all your other works, great imagery, sense of scale, just everything.
You tend to lean into cruelty, is that the plan here overall? Any plans in other works to explore differing avenues? Regardless, keep up the great work!
Thank you! Technically I've only ever written one explicitly cruel story ;) This one will likely be similar in... some ways, but we shall see!
