I am so damn happy this story is finally back. There's not much to review so far, it's "just" an introduction into the plot. But I'll give high points because I know it will be great, and I yet like the way it seems to go. Really like the half aware/half unaware idea, mostly everything will go wrong what can go wrong. I also loved the caterpiller idea, mostly also didnt "go like planed" by the girls (; Actually there were a few ideas I always wished to read, but I know you once said you want to write out your own ideas, so it's hard for people to review on this one I think. Just when I read the plot idea of "farm girl", for example one thing came into my mind, seeing a tf into a tiny oat meal flake and ending in a bucket of food for a horse, I always liked the idea of becoming a tiny unaware snack for a horse, or a bird.

Ahh, so chapter 2 wasnt all finished when you uploaded it, makes sense now :3 I really liked the whole frog idea, really really clever. I guess Jason is doomed :x I would had liked it even more if he would have picked up by his best friend, boys mostly are even more "cruel" in this kind of topic and make fun out of it all, telling jokes and such, would be an even more humiliating way to go. As I mentioned before, I would love to see a tf at some point ending as a tiny single corn or oat meal flake, and getting swallowed by one of Cassie's own horses. Reading the word "bird food" also got me back to that this would be an awesome ending for a character, getting tfed into a tiny insect and eaten by a bird, or a tiny food like a single berry of some kind, or a peace of candy, like a single M&M. I thought actually the girl would become the shampoo content itself but I wanted it to be open for my mind haha :x I really love the whole idea of the penny reducing random people around the girls, and they have no idea about it, where in the end, I guess Cassie and Susan would become trapped of their own "fun" medicine. I would like the plot idea of Cassie unknownigly "tfing" Susan, maybe in her stables at home, and feeding her to one of her stallions. But also theres room for others now of all the classmates and even the teachers around. I really like the whole plot developement :)

No really :p I hope I got myself clear how fantastic this chapter was, and what I loved about it. I am feeling really captured right now in my inner self, not sure if I can make you understand what I liked about this chapter so mach. Did you get what I wanted to say? It's all about leaving out the pov of Jason. How Cassie prepared her own frog and the read wasnt sure yet if it's Jason, just giving him a tiny little segment in between, like slowly waking up, where am I, what happened, and so on, and then light, seeing the face of one of the girls, cut. And then the preparation of the "other frog" began, and the reader be all like oh my god, now this is Jason, will he get through the same procedure Casie just did on her frog, and than, bam, how Susan just grabbed "her frog", went, or lets say, tried to go through the same steps, and out of pure bad luck again went too fast, because of Cassie indirectly. And how his brain was all functional and he was just paralysed because of the broken/half broken neck, and how he must feel everything and go through everything. The horror is just fantastic. Mostly the best unaware tf you ever did. The whole point of everything going together is just so great what I love about this chapter. Also how the girls talked about it then, and Cassie made fun about Susan and "her frog", how she would even found it more funnier if it had been the girl, and how all are so damn unaware about it was one of the poor boys from the class. Damn... I know youve mostly planed everything already, but if youll be able to put in between maybe a bird vore, landing in birds stomach, how it would make quick work of his "insect" and reduce it into bird poo, mostly reeaving itself on a car or house window the girls would be in, would be really ironic and awesome. And the whole farm idea of someone going the hell of a horses digestive tract, and later ending somewhere from the horse lifting its tail in a pile of manure would also be so great. I also liked how this friend of them, Joel came into action and  tried to let it all sound not so bad at all, getting them just to forget about it, where she wouldnt even know all the details. It all adds so much to the idea of the boy never to be seen again, ended as a "something", mostly something horrible, in this case a opened frog, still alive, partially organs removed, and it's all fun to the girls, and Joel even tried to change subject, so that the idea of the human Jason once was is completely trashed and made litterally nothing worth about. The same aspect would fit so well into someone being reduced to a bird poo and also on the farm of a horses. Maybe even Cassie would ride out her stallion horse to school a day later or with her friend Susan together and the horse woul releive himself on the schools car lot, making Susan be all like "eww" and Cassie just laugh it off like "relax Susan, it's all just natural", in this kind of thing. Maybe one of their teachers was the one ended in that pile, and ironically they would stand in front of his car which was parked there since yesterday. Again thanks so much for this story :) I am looking into so much now for the next parts and hope thell arrive really soon :))

So glad seeing another chapter!!! And noo :x please dont say there wouldnt be a next for some time, that breaks my heart :'/ And yes, totally liked how it went, and what happend to Joe and a random guy. Loved the trick prank Cassie played out and Susan has no idea at all about everything. Maybe a great way of using irony would be if one of the last M&Ms left, which would be Joe, would be given by Susan to a boy in her class asking if he could have some, which would be ironically the boyfriend of Joel or just a best friend of her. Or the M&Ms would be half empty being stored for later by Susan, Joel still under them, and later at some point the one unlucky M&M would be feed by Susan to one of Cassies horses. Totally loved the conversation at the end, that was the best of it all :') "So where is Joel?" "She said she had some stuff to do. But she left you this Susan." Cassie held out a bag of M&M's. "That was nice of her, hopefully she gets to class on time." Susan said as she ripped open the M&M's bag. "I'm sure she'll make it in time." Cassie hid her smile. Really great. Also how Cassie thought she was so clever is a great idea, of maybe in the end it backfires at her in some way. I just hope for the best that youll be able to maybe write the next chapter in between next to what you wanted to do. I am mostly looking everyday for this story aha :'p The best thing about the whole chapter was how Cassie used Joel, letting her tf herself without knowing, thinking she would do something totally different, or be part of a magic trick, that was so great. You should use this concept another time, manipulating someone in doing something with the penny and saying the word at some point, without the person has a clue what he is doing to him/herself.

So damn glad youre writing at this story here again :') It's my favorite and I wish so much it will get continued. I missed reading on it over the last couple of weeks so much :( I wished you had wrote out on this part a little bit more "The few remaining contents of the bag spread onto the floor where some young boys were sitting....When she sat back down she watched as the boys grabbed up the chocolates. "What a waste."", I really liked that idea that Joel maybe got a one way ticker through one of these younger boys digestive tract. Even though you mentioned earlier in the story that Joel was one of the first M&Ms she ate that day. Hope so much youll have time really soon again now to continue :)

I really hope youre still out there and continue this story (and finish it too sooner or later). I miss your Penny stories so much :'( Hope youre ok.

Aehem, this story? chapter 7.

Looks really really great and promising, with the tags Vore, Toilet, Unaware, Insertion, Butt, Humiliation and the right size of 1/8", all my favorites :x I really hope youll finish this story to the end.

This looks promising. I like your writing style. Keep it up.

This is the best and most promising story on here since months. And It's mostly your best story so far. The plot is fantastic, the setup intense, everything is just great, the irony, the "bad luck", the sarcasm parts, how the girl is a stupid character, not smart, loved that part of where she said "yeah will keep my shit for you weirdo", how she was just bored of everything, so great. I also like the size used. If I could wish for something it would be of course all would die, thats for sure, just ending as nothing but bones and hair in her crap. The deaths could be made differently like one falling into some digestive enzyms and being dissolved instantly, some making it "in one peace" still inside the small intestine and there would meat an even more horrible digestive fate, where they at first thought they maybe had a chance to survive this and come out the other end in one piece, until they would meet the true digestive nature of her small intestine, how the air would be thousand times worse of smell, the air even more humid, and the digestive fluids in there even stronger than the stomach acids, because of it being alkaline solutin and digestive enzymes. some deaths could also be ironic/sarcstic, for example one could get caught in a small air bubble and get even inside the large intestine, or maybe "half", like one part of the body gests digested and one is still "in one piece". one of the kids could become nothing just like a gas bubble as the result of the digestion, and end as part of a larger fart the girl would release the next day. and the ending could also have lots of great ironic twists. looking so much forward for this story now!! really great job. insta fav :]