Giantess World :: kamperkonkel

Summary:

A continuation of my story Nova Force:http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=2043 which is also hosted my my Deviant art account: http://ginbug.deviantart.com/ you can also check out some artwork based on the story as well. (I strongly suggest reading the first to get an idea of who the characters are).

Essentially the story is as follows: Richard and his giant sized girlfriend Kikata, an alien, are back at it. The disappearance of a friend leads them into an investigation that will, once again, change their lives forever.

As for teh giantess stuff, you can expect: sex, gentle, playful, not so gentle, vore, mouth play, MALE giants (no sexual interaction on the page.), and lots of sci fi fun.

Categories: Growing Woman, Adventure, Body Exploration, Breast Enlargement, Couples , Crush, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Insertion, Vore, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69325 Read Count: 127458

[Report This] Published: November 12 2012 Updated: April 29 2013

Reviewer: kamperkonkel Signed

Date: January 27 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, this is my second review. I usually say how I review first, just so I don't seem like a raving idiot. My way of reviewing is to say at least one thing, no matter how small, of things I both like and things that bothered me. I've yet to post on THIS site, yet. But I've done so elsewhere. Not that I'm promoting myself. Just rebutling the whole "How do you know? You haven't written Jack!". So, here it goes.

The thing I like, about the whole series, both of them, heck all your stuff, is that you are really good at stimulating imagination. I mean sure you have things you bring up to the front in each one, for whatever strategic reason you have. But you tend to always nail everything so that no matter who is reading, they are entertained. There isn't just on targetted audience, you have a very broad and effective writing style. One that stimulates, at least for me, my imagination no matter what the individual emphasis.

Ok, the thing that bothers me about this series the most... that is a hard one, since it is so good. I had to look for a while to come up with something. Sure I could point out a single spelling or gramar error, but that lacks... usefullness. So... I think it is going to be predatory awarness. Basically, you cover EVERYTHING else. Emotion, physic, mental state, sometimes mental conditions, and each character's relation to each difference. But what is sorely lacking is the base instincts of each race. Hurdles in those instincts that are just ever present that they have to either push down or go over. You do some of this, I know it is a small critic, but then again, you aced pretty much everything else. I had a hard time trying to find something to pick on. Even this is barely registering.

Hope that helped and didn't step on any toes. If it hasn't been said enough, your stuff is awesome.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the critique, and I think you're right I haven't touched too much on the differences between races. I'll have to work that in :)

Toy for the holiday by Yougts Rated: X

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Summary:

When shrinking is finally possible, you volunteer to be your sisters toy for the holiday

Categories: Butt, Body Exploration, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32573 Read Count: 409928

[Report This] Published: December 09 2012 Updated: December 27 2016

Reviewer: kamperkonkel Signed
Date: January 04 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Little game

This is my first review on this site. I don't to a lot of writing on this site but I do have a few series going elsewhere. I wouldn't say that if not for the people that say the whole "How should you know, you haven't written anything." Anyway, I do reviews on Writing.com and I usually pick something I like and something that bothers me, no matter how small so that the person gets some advise and compliments. I just wanted to express that I'm not ripping on you at all. I wouldn't be doing this if it wasn't worth the effort.

Ok, the thing that I liked most about the series so far is the simplistic detail. We all like certain things but each preference has its own style. It is hard to write for all of them and still be viable to each, not tredding on toes and such. I feel you do an amazing job with this. You have his attention go to multiple areas and keep our appetite wet for things to come, even if what is being described now isn't our cup of tea. But you also don't go too far as to only be entertaining to only one crowd, and hard core fans of that style to boot.

The thing that bothered me the most is the dialog seperation. Their options and dialog itself was great, but I got lost in the large paragraphs and had to retrace to catch myself. I use to have the same problem and I fixed it by making each dialog source a seperate paragraph. That also forced me to add detail to how they are interacting with the other characters. I'm not saying that this is what you should do, it is just an example of what can be done.

Hope this wasn't stepping on your toes too much. I did enjoy reading and hope to see more soon.

Author's Response:
Hi Kamperkonkel,

Thanks for your constructive feedback and taking the time to ellaborate. So no worries of stepping on toes.

Apart from a few additions at writing.com, this is my first story. I had written the first chapter in past tense, but didn't like it. I rewrote the story in present time, because I felt that the readers can identify more with the situations described. What I'm implying is that it's taking some time to devolop writer skills.

That's why I like the feedback. Could you be more specific though, like an example of a story which contains paragraphs you described.

Also curious of your work, where can I find it?

Cheers