This is a truly excellent story.  I'm generally not a fan of crushing- it always seems so final, but it is handled very well, and I am glad that the author included that though the son feels pain and discomfort from his mother's knowing and unknowing actions, his body has changed and regenerates slowly and painfully, ready for more abuse.  The word play and dialogue between mother and son is smooth and believable and the descriptive style of the writing is very good.  Even on a technical end, the story is a pleasure to read with seperated paragraphs and rarely even a mispelled word.

And aside from all that, it's damn hot too!  Keep writing Ace!

Still loving this story and had to come back for another review after the last few chapters had been added (and since I messed up my rating the first time).

The tale is moving along at a good pace; good enough that I find myself coming back daily to see if another chapter has been added. I'm glad too that there is an apparent ending looming, though the author still leaves us guessing as to the outcome.

I actually forwarded the Link to a friend of mine that I introduced to GTS/sm about a year ago.  She's a writer in her own right and does reviews on Amazon. She quickly became a fan of the genre and readily agreed with my assesment of the writing style and quality. Her two additional comments were: she is not a fan of 'smelly feet', which is personal taste and not a criticism, but she found the tortures in the last few chapters had been better covered earlier in the story and would have liked to have seen something different.

For myself, I like it.  To the point that as someone mentioned Black Jack in another Review I went searching and remembered the earlier stories when I read them. Your work has improved immensely, Ace; more detail, less errors and still a pleasure to read.  Keep writing!