I am 17 years old, still at high school, planning to get a masters in video game design. I do enjoy writting and even have several really good ideas for sci-fi themed game plots. I guess you can talk via forum or e-mail me...im alright with that.
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How bog is she because if she isn't miles high and in china there's no way she could kill a billion people (1/7 earth's population) in one fell swoop. Just wanted to bring that to your attention but even with that inconsisitency it's still great!
A young lady, loving girlfriend, a kind protector and a genocidal monster. All these words could be used to define Kate. Part of a government experiment in genetic manipulation Kate surprised everyone when she responded far better to the treatment then anyone could have expected.
The story of this young lady finding love, leaving her home and how the world responds to her.
Great story, however it would have been nicer if you would have cut it into smaller chapters.
[COMPLETE] All Thomas wanted was a date with a cute girl. What he gets is more than he bargained for as he enters a fight for his life. Can he make it out alive?
Melissa should have died or been put in jail...but that is just my preferance, otherwise nice :)
A story of a womans inability to take control.
O_O
Author's Response:
Thanks for this...i think? .
Amanda.
Well Amanda to clarify my simple review earlier I will start by assuming you are female, based on your name; although I have met men who use a female name as a screename. Now that that's over with, let me hust say I am simply stunned by your story as it shows events from a female perpective. The problem is that while I enjoy the perspective I dont really like this type of story but it was brilliantly wriiten and for that I give you a...
Thank you Gadgetman i can appreciate your viewpoint regarding the stories content,i myself have similar views on some of the subject matter contained in stories posted on this forum.In an answer to your question regarding my sex,i am indeed female with all the usuall charectaristics which defines a woman.I am not able to write from another view point(male perspective)because i wouldn't now how,i write with my emotions which tend to set the stories direction.I once again wish to thank you for responding take care.
Amanda.
Maybe things should be clearer...There is terminology in this story that should be explained. If this is a sequel to a story perhaps you should include a note of the prequel or this and many others should be one complete multi-chaptered story.
Ouch...
Author's Response: Good ouch, bad ouch? Hehe, either way, I hope you enjoyed something of it!
The answers to some of the questons in A dream come true,
Another O_O from me....however this was pretty sexy I just wish it was, well more emotional...
Author's Response:
Thank you once again,i deliberately left emotions out of it because the sexual aspect was the dominant factor in this tale. and sexy fun was the main goal.
Amanda.
Man you have a weird mythology that you dont explain in your stories...Terms that I have no knoledge of appear left and right in this, perhaps you should take time to explain them what they mean.
Author's Response:
i admit some of terms used in my stories are strange and confusing. Can you give some examples of terms in this story you don't understand?
Sentences such as " GT-GOD AND BESS IS A GTS-GODDESS" and talk about other simensions and such in some of your other stories...try explaining them IN your story or include a word key at the beginning
Meet Lucy. Horribly burned in a house fire while she was a child Lucy was forced to undergo a radical treatment in order to safe her life. However, this treatment would have far greater consequences then just saving her life as it would change her in ways that none had foreseen. Now she must learn to deal with her ever shrinking world as she grows from a child to an adult while trying to retain her humanity even as her power continues to expand.
In order to help her with these task is her friends and family including her childhood friend and romantic interesting Albert.
Though if you want to jump strait to the giantess content I'd suggest going to chapter three. Lucy's a young woman by then and well into the giantess category though I wouldn't say quite a mega.
Man I havent read the story yet but I must say you have a serious gift for writing if you can write a story of over 300,000 words.
Im sorry but at the moment the story is kind of daunting to read, mostly because of he word length and that the story is too cluttered for my eyes.
As a fellow writter I suggest that you split the stoty into paragraphs but also into small chapters because at the moment if I stop in the story and want to go back later it will be VERY hard to find where I was before.
Well I imagine the story would be daunting for some even if I did split it given how long it is. Especially given that you have no ideal if you'll like it or not. It could easily be something you end up disliking after all and I doubt anyone wants to read a few hundred pages only to learn they hate what they've just read.
I'll probably make future stories into future chapters as I will admit these days that seven chapters amongst a story several hundred pages long is kind of silly. That will have to wait until I'm done with my current stories though and I doubt I'll go back and edit my old ones it'd just take too long. Though if you want to see it in smaller chunks it can also be found at http://happiest-in-shadows.deviantart.com/gallery/#The-Inescapable-Guardian in chunks of 12 pages per post.
I'm afraid you confused me a bit when it comes to the paragraphs comments. Whenever I look at the chapters on my computer each chapter is split into paragraphs or they are now. One of your fellow reveiwers had to point it out to me but I got the problem fixed. That was more do to a copy paste error rather then intentional though believe me in my word documents they're split up.
One thing you may want to try though is what I do whenever reading a long story. I tend to copy past it into a notepad file and then I just delete the story as I'm reading it. Another option is whenever you're finished reading you could just save a few lines and use the find feature to relocate your place some time later.
Five shrunken strangers become playthings in the twisted fantasies of a psychotic teenage girl and must work together if they ever hope to get out of her clutches alive.
Man I've wondered where this story has been, its definitely one of my favorites. Hope it gets finished...
It will eventually be finished, it's just progressing slowly.
Nice this story is back, i cant wait for it to finish.
Danielle and Matt are back! This time, Danielle, out of the goodness of her heart, has decided to take in the homeless to shelter them from the harsh outdoors. The only problem is...she's shrinking them all to do it. Matthew Collins does not approve...
I like this, its sweet, well written, and in the holiday spirit...nice job dood.
Felix is a ten year old slave to an evil lord obsessed with obtaining more power. Because of this obsesstion, Lord William sends his private army to even seek out powerful creatures to control. His army has finally come across a powerful creature and captured it. Now it's Felix's task to feed the creature. The worse part about it, is that the creature is not only a giant dridder, but from Felarya.
Very nice man I love this story, its gentle and cute. I kinda wish a comic was made of this, because as much as I love the world of felarya, pretty much every comic that takes place in it is not gentle.
Thanks, but this story is also not even set in Felarya. It just has a character from Felarya who is now trapped in another world.
Bibi, a girl with an alchohol problem, injects herself with a growing agent from a strange plant. When she is drunk, she grows and rampages through Pittsburgh.
Nice, I loved the ending, I really thought that she would be even worse when she was sober, and realized all the power she had.
This is a story/novelization of a GTS-theme RPG Maker game made by someone on Giantess City called LiquidTension.
Strange disappearances are happening at the campus of Suzaku Academy and only Hitoshi Hayama and his buddies can stop this evil plot and save the world!
Dude, you need to get to the point as soon as possible with this story...I actually tried playing the game, but dont like that type of gameplay too much...The story seemed like it was going to be good...Id rather read it, but your still in the "setting up the world" part of it.
Patience. There is a lot of good story material in the game before the size-change section happens. I want this to be a novelization of the game, not just a novelization of the Size-related portion of it. I will get to that point, in time.
This is getting pretty good, im glad i decided to give this another try.
An aspiring salesman, eager to make a good impression at the company retreat, takes a wrong turn.
Man, she's frisky...I love this story though, amazingsause.
Your girlfriend is a sweet girl who wouldn't harm a soul, but what about her sister...
Man Brad must be the calmest guy in the whole world...After every horrible thing that happened because of Ashley, I certainly would never even be in the same country as her.