my name? is unimportant. whaere do i live?in a town. What do i write? thats the real question. my stories involve a morale lesson, love, action, and comedy. i perfer to write gentle stories but im up for any suggestions. got another question about me just send me an email
A guy gets high and shrinks. Or maybe he doesn't.
finaly some one else who uses weed in their stories lol
Mike sister Hailey is having a sleep over with a few friends who all happen to be cheerleaders as well as she. Mike's crush Beth is also coming over. But on that same night Mike some how shrinks and now he has to stay alive and keep away from his little sister and her cheerleading friends before they capture him. It's going to be a long night for Mike.
realy i see no problem, now you just got to figure out the concluusion and after that figure out how yoour going to get to the conclusion. every good writer knows therebegining and end before it ever goes down on paper s
p.s. sorry about the spelling iwas typing and on the exercis bike at the same time
maybe i should remove this one don't think this forum is suitable for this tale....its ..to tame i feel....need time to decide so may not post any more chapters until i have decided...xx Amanda. MMMM maybe not lol think my wicked minds going to turn this a bit nasty yummy yummy in my tummy xx
the story is a little hard for me to follow but it was good for one of the many revenge stories on this site. not my cup of tea but it was good.. so i didn't quite get why she was killing all these people or even how she got to be so big or them so small.
Hello Pabtree i have already written her reasons,she was raped by them and they killed her childhood friend?...as for her changing size well it is a fantasy!!.... does there need to be a reason for everything? after all she has done some unusual things whilst digesting her intended victims??
...some of the tales on here are far more exorbitant than my simple tale...Samantha is many things but still a woman with a burning desire to be loved and love with out the need to desecrate anothers body to achieve her satisfaction a human heart beats within her you only ned find the key to unlock her love for you.
Thank you for taking time to read my tale,its not yet complete...not every story written will appeal to us but an open mind such has yours is a good place to start..thank you once again.
Amanda xx
wow I should have waited, now this story makes perfect sense to me. good job on that last chapter
Thank you Pabtree i want to involve the reader in the tale i am not a story teller but i do try and lead the reader into my inner self...i am mm mixed up on times lol. girls perogetive i think lol...
Amanda xxx
PS thank you xx
this is more for blackguyj, but if you read carefully its about a woman with godlike powers to manipulate the world to her likeness. the men she is killing raped her and killed her boyfriend. they got a light sentence in their trial and now the woman is out to avenge her love. the twist is that she has a vore fetish, pretty noble in a grusome way i guess.
any way Amanda xx, even though the voilent sadistic stuff aint a turn on for me, I hope the little basterds get what they deserve in the end. I f some one did that to meI would be out for blood too.
Thank you for trying to clarify whats been written ...mm i drift a little lol girly thing i think i can be a little complicated at times and besides i did write some of the chapters when i was having my monthly lol.. altho i am not a wreck like some of my friends..as for the story ooh yes i do feel really mean at the moment not sure why really just...do xx
Amanda xx
and so the pot thickens lol :)
A few more ingrediants are needed to make the food taste better PABTREE thank you one again xx
Amanda xx
this jonathan character aint too smart by threatening her,especialy if he cant back it up. but here is an idea for his death... again... have you ever heard of a blood eagle? its were the vikings would take a prisoner and break open his ribs then pull the lungs outside of the rib cage
mm interesting idea i shall do some research,i already have plans for the ring leader tho,i want him to suffer for his descration of her body and destroying her chances at a loving future.I feel the need to be very descriptive when the "meat" meets his maker lol...
thank you for your comments and suggestion i am sure "man" has killed in many cruel ways through time,maybe i should research how woman have acted through the centuries maybe we are equally as versatile as you.
Amanda xx
Jeremy is mysteriously shrunken and Aelita has to help him return to normal size. And maybe have some fun along the way. Based off the chraracters of Code:Lyoko
Note: I do not own these characters.
updated as of 5/16/11
i used tolove watchin that show when i was a kid :)
i get shrunk down and used as the gum of my girlfriend first in a series
not bad for your first story, im with the other guy, names MUST be capitalize, dont worry ive made this mistake my self but as you write it will become more ( for a lack of better words) natural. Personaly i like character developement and a loong plot but this was enjoyable
Joseph awakens to find himself shrunk to an inch in size. Unable to remember the drunken escapades of the previous night which led him to his current fate, Joseph must bravely venture out into this new pint-sized world in search of answers. Will he be able to discover a means to restore himself to normality? Or will fate conspire against him in a world where gruesome deaths lay around every corner?
Disclaimer: All characters are my own original works. Rated for violence, gore, adult themed content and language.
your off to a good start with good discripive elements. but i connot give you an acurate rating yet simply because of the amount of text.
thank you for taking the time to read and review. There will be plenty more chapters to come (hopefully)!
Inspired by the Hansel and Gretle story. Jakob and Marta are siblings who decided to run away as a way of helping their poor parents out. Find out what happens when they stray from the path and into The Black Forest...
this is a wonderfull story. Im so glad it didnt end up an incest lover story, those literaly make me. i love a nice gentle G rated story from time to time, infact im trying to wane my self off of the explicit writing do to the fact that they draw unwanted reviewers.
Thank you pabree!!! I don't like the incest stories at all. I think I've pretty much said that before so you won't see it here. I'm not afraid of smut but I think you should only use it if the story allows. I don't see it happening yet for our protangist in this one but there is an adventure presenting itself.
A mouthplay/vore story told from Hannah's brother, Jackson's perspective.
omg you are my hero. finally some one has the balls to mess with hannah montana. i hate that little girl.
ps dont get sued
Mark was in love with his best friend Rachel a freshman in his high school. Little did he know that her little sister who was eight also had a crush on him. And she will use her mind powers to get him. No matter if he likes it or lot.
great story i cant wait for more. a little genaric in parts but i like it.