Reviewer: himekono Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2021 10:22 PM Title: The Story of Harriet

I adore this concept! So they both have the complete opposite impression of each other--I can't wait to read more! 

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I actually have another project coming down the pipe that you may enjoy.  Keep an eye out!

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2021 3:14 AM Title: The Story of Dale

Ok... this was simply amazing. 

A true subversion of expectations in the BEST way possible! 

I read chapter one, expecting this to be a deliciously standard M/f foot domination, "tinies are less than human", story. The domination from Dale was hot, and so was Harriet's dejected submission and humiliation. 

Then... I read chapter two, and my mind was BLOWN. Like, are you kidding? I can't remember the last time that a story has so pleasantly surprised me! Dale's account is so awesome! Like this tiny little woman is somehow completely dominating his life by forcefully subjecting herself to him at his feet! 

 Such an amazing premise that I almost want more! Same for your other stories. Yet at the same time, I love that you just keep pumping out these new, bite-sized, teasingly suggestive little short stories like a well-oiled machine! 

 

Incredible! I absolutely cannot wait for more stories from you! You are a fantastic and creative writer! 

Keep up the great work! ^^ 

Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind response!  I was more that a bit worried about this one tbh.  I thought the idea was interesting, but had a feeling in the back of my mind that something was missing.  I'm glad you enjoyed.

 

I've mostly been sticking to short stories to build a habit of writing with my free time.  I actually do have a long term story coming down the pipe, so look out for that one!  I'm waiting until I have a few more chapters worked on so I can make sure my direction actually works long term, but if all goes well, that should be coming out soon.

 

Thanks again for the feedback!  If there's anything you want to see more of in the future in particular, let me know!