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Date: May 10 2021 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 5

"Perhaps it was because having so many peoples over two meters tall in the same town was exceptional,[...] Peoples?

"[...]that she was super aroused by such a turn of events."

"He wanted to have a taller girlfriend because he loved being dominated slightly – or perhaps a little more than slightly." - Isn't his power a problem in this case? It's kinda hard to feel truly dominated if you know you can change the very fabric of reality itself with just a few words.

*a little bit later in the story* Knew it!

"[...], he could see that the creepy vibe she had always given off had reduced greatly."

“I mean, I’m not a whore,[...]"

"She laughed and it seemed that the breasts he had kept enhancing almost spilled out of bra and her shirt, which was jaw-dropping for me, since I could tell that her bra was more reinforced steel than frisky laces. Her presence didn’t seem to bother the other couples much, none even looked at her and I suddenly wondered if it was a common sighting for them, to see her walk around when they fucked in her house. Perhaps it was just accepted by everyone, an open secret which I didn’t know until now." - Why is this paragraph suddenly written in First-person perpective?

 

And I am back to choosing the least popular option in the Strawpoll...

I didn't expected a new character to be introduced - and already screw Jake - within a single chapter but no complaints. Serene is very different, so a different behaviour is maybe just consequential. I'm actually interested in her parents as she got her tremendous size by "normal means".

Author's Response:

Concerning the 1st person POV it's because I'm writing another story with that writing style, sometimes I slip back to it without wanting it ^^'

And yeah, I hope that Serene will return someday !