Reviews For Small Crimes
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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2021 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Well done!

I really enjoyed this story, especially the ways by how Cynitha played with her "food".

I also liked how you included her thoughts throughout the story. She truly felt sadistic and I kinda like that. 

I love that conversation with Paul and Cynthia. She seduced him to his own demise. Perfect!

Great story and I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I really loved the opportunity to include a predator who quickly becomes so unreservedly sadistic and ravenous, even with her own husband. I'm glad you liked the dialogue and internal monologue. Those are always my favorite parts to write. 

I hope to have another story out before too long!

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