[Report This]Date: April 18 2023 4:40 AM Title: Beyond the Sea
Congrats on writing this one in the second person. It is the most difficult one to master and you did a fantastic job of having the reader experience from their POV.
I have an upcoming very hardcore 18+ short story that I am planning to get out sometime this year that will also be written in the second person
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yes, the second person style is very difficult to write indeed. I'm writing another one like this at the moment, but it's really time-consuming, which is why I don't do it often.
Very much looking forward to your story!
[Report This]Date: January 08 2022 1:51 AM Title: Beyond the Sea
Amazing. I really like your stories in general, but this one really does it for me because of the POV. Are you planning to write more stories like this? I'd love it if you did.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I always appreciate a review with a good rating! ;)
As for the second person perspective narration for the prey: The story was specifically commissioned this way, and I have another one in this style called "Live-Feeding" (which unfortunately is only available in German, though I've been told Google Translate/DeepL make fairly decent translations of it). Personally, I prefer writing in the third person, but I wouldn't exclude the possibility that there will be more stories like this as well!