Reviewer: tjcullinan326 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2021 10:20 PM Title: A Second Chance

While I do love a good gentle muscular amazon, and growth stories, I didn't really enjoy the 'storytelling via texting' part of this story. The ending stuff was pretty good, but I thought the texts just dragged on without any action. It's a good way to explore characters, but I don't feel there was enough payoff to justify that much texting.

But like I said, the ending stuff was still enjoyable. I've also really like the other short stories you've put in this collection. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback! I felt it worked better with the images that were meant to go with it but I see where you're comming from. It was also a pain to format so I prolly won't be doing many more like that.