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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2021 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 3

A true goddess

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2021 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I went to read your story; but the large paragraphs make it hard to read.  No doubt you have a good story.  Could you please break it into more readable paragraphs, it's hard to follow along as is.



Author's Response:

Sorry for the inconvenience. I tried to make the paragraphs more separated, I hope it's now easier to read. In case you still find it difficult to enjoy, you can also read the story here: https://www.deviantart.com/refrt333/art/A-popular-girl-s-rivalry-Part-1-884688500 

Reviewer: SophieLenna Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2021 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely amazing so far, please keep up the good work!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait for more

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