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Reviewer: Dadoubean Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2022 2:46 AM Title: Beginning; the first hunt

Cruel giantess story with a tinge of historical reality. That powerless feeling of not being able to fight back is magnified by the injustice of the situation. Great writing by the author to communicate this theme effectively, so good job! I do hope the person who commissioned this story isn't a person who'll try and replicate such actions in real life.

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2021 3:57 PM Title: Beginning; the first hunt

ya i definitely am raising eyebrows at the dude who commissioned this

Reviewer: 1CoolDude Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2021 1:15 AM Title: Beginning; the first hunt

I'm pretty conflicted about this one. This would be a really good story if it didn't have the racism. I know this is a commission so I'm not holding it against you but it makes me wonder what the person who would want this kind of story is thinking.

Reviewer: tinykev Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2021 5:26 PM Title: Beginning; the first hunt

for some reason when i click on the story it shows only a blank page.



Author's Response:

Someone else has had that problem too. I'm not sure what's causing it, but opening it up in another tab might work.

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2021 5:32 PM Title: Beginning; the first hunt

well now that i got over the shock i actually would love to see this as a full blown story lol. your an amazing writer.

Reviewer: Firestone Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2021 2:52 PM Title: Beginning; the first hunt

The entire story seems to have vanished, unfortunately



Author's Response:

It should be fixed now! Let me know if you can see it

 

Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2021 1:03 PM Title: Beginning; the first hunt

.....wow....

Reviewer: TinyDave Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2021 9:18 AM Title: Beginning; the first hunt

I have no idea why but as a black man racism in a size story like this is so hot. You really did a good job. I like your writing style. Can't wait to see what you do next, whether it's more of the same or something different.

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