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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2023 10:45 PM Title: A Funeral With Hu Tao

Just read it all. The burial at the end was nice. Though my favorite chapter was Cooking with Xiangling. I love nonfatal full tour, not as much as unaware nonfatal full tour, but it was still a wonderful story so far.



Author's Response:

Not sure if we'll be getting any unaware content besides the brief stuff like with Qiqi, but there will definitely be more Full-Tour chapters on the way. I'm glad you like the story so far. ^-^ 

Reviewer: EtGBigRI Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 12 2023 2:01 PM Title: Playtime with Paimon

I tend to be pretty neutral towards mouthplay, but this was incredible. I've read many food tf and entrapment stories but this is by far the best for me. The small things you do, such as including the vibrations caused by simply walking adds so much and makes your writing immersive and leaves an impression.

I wrote this review without checking who the author is first, but wow. It's Franchise Writer, no wonder this story is so good. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much EtGBigRl :D

Those little interactions are what I live for. They're always fun to add in and I'm glad they leave a lasting impression. Stay tuned for more. I have a couple more chapters to drop soon enough.  

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Reviewer: Reiko-samaa Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2023 6:52 AM Title: Spa date with Mona

these are great so far *_* would love to read more of it.



Author's Response:

More are indeed on the way. Stay tuned. ^-^ 

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2022 1:35 AM Title: Playtime with Paimon

Well this is interesting and I hope u will plan to do more.

Reviewer: Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2021 10:48 PM Title: Playtime with Paimon

Thoguht this was an absolutely wonderful story! Shame it doesn't have more reviews; even not familiar with the game I definitely found it to be very alluring. Very much enjoyed the power differences and perceived turnabout.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm hoping more reviews come down the line too, but I'm ecstatic regardless that you liked it enough to be the first. Thank you for that. ^_^ 

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