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Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2024 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 49

I would like some more. To see how the new dynamics work. 

Author's Response:

There will be more here soon ;D

Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed star [Report This]
Date: February 24 2024 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 48

Gaslighting. Really?


Author's Response:

I know it´s not the sweetest, but they had to do what they had to... but it won´t be for too long ;D

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 24 2024 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 48

I wonder who will give in first.



Author's Response:

It´ll be a nice competition ;D

Reviewer: theharper Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2024 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 47

Well this story has come a long way. I like the fact that the girls are not being abusive. He is a little shorter than I like. But it's been a great story. Keep it up. And thanks

Author's Response:

Thank you! Hope you like the new chapter ;D

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2023 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Rachel is a wonderful mother.

Let her grows bigger and thicker, I wish she become at least 10ft tall.

Every home need a hot sexy minj giantess mom.

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2023 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing!

I wish Maddy's mother grows bigger and hotter too, in this world Milfs slowly get bigger and hotter and thicker, a perfect world for all.

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 18 2023 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 38

They need to put some romance back in there life. l hope he doesn't get any smaller.

Reviewer: theharper Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2023 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think he needs to get some time alone. Need to get the women in his life to actually listen to him. 



Author's Response:

That´s true. But with the way both are... maybe listening to him is not quite their forte.

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2023 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 35

I don't know what to think. Im not happy or upset.

Reviewer: The-Macromancer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2023 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Additionally, I forgot to rate this story, I wish I coukd rate it higher. 

Reviewer: The-Macromancer Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2023 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 33

This story has been very thrilling and captivating so far. What I have enjoyed most is how realistic all the characters are and how believable they are in emotional scenes. Each character is likable and makes me want to see them successful and happy. Very few stories I have ever read have had such thoughful and caring characters with beautiful hearts.

What is big for me is that the conflicts in the story is not a central villain, but inside themselves:

Maddy is doing her best to balance being a lover and a maternal caregiver to Nick, but can be a unstable paranoid monster when turned up too high. 

Rachel is lonely and wants to be a mother without Nick being her lover, but her flaw is her methods of manipulation and secrecy.

Nick is caught in the middle and is doing his best to adapt and be faithful to Maddy, but her wish is breaking him down and he keeps too much to himself to get the right help.

You do a great job giving them internal monologues that give insights to thier true selves. 

I really, really hope this has a happy ending. It hard at the moment as it seems that battle lines are being drawn for Maddy and Rachell to clash. 

I can envision, but not fully expecting, that Rachel and Maddy after a lot of conflict and heartbreak over Nick settle thier differences: Nick clears his mind and convinces Maddy that she is his soul mate and no one else. Rachel realises the severity her tresspass and apologises for her a actions. Rachel works out an arrangement with Maddy they she will be his adoptive mother and wet-nurse for Maddy. Nick and Maddy move in with Rachel. Maddy and Nick settle into thier final size and roles to one another. Maddy realizes she can be as motherly as humanly possible to Nick, but also clears her mind that they are still equals as lovers. Nick and Maddy get married, perhaps after a difficult conflict with Maddy’s poisonous mother. Rachel, Nick, and Maddy live happily ever after.

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As a side note, I know there isn’t any giantess growth (like in Hello Neighbor) so far and it is not listed, but I think it would add great suspense. A plot reveal where Rachel also wished that night and in her conflict of will with Maddy, they begin getting larger back and forth to be the biggest alpha-mom. 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, very much, for your kind words. I´m really happy you liked the development of the characters, and that you found the plot lovely too. You know, it took me quite a while to figure out a lot on the story, but I´m glad it´s going in the right path.

By the way, I like your ideas there, they do sound possible, but... well, in a few chapters you´ll see how this goes. I assure you, I have added some suspense to the plot ;)

Thanks a lot for such a great comment, I´m really glad you liked my story, The-Macromancer. :D :D :D 

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2022 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 26

Ngl this chapter makes we want him to stay with Rachel. Their interactions together are so cute and for the most part wholesome.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Honestly, they are. Their relationship will just evolve thru the upcoming chapters, we´ll see who he stays with...

For now, I have just posted a new chapter, hope you like it :D

Reviewer: romaescipion Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

metro gran enhorabuena y la verdad que impresionante el relato, muy bien ejecutado , gran maestria de escritura, ... puedo preguntar si habra algo de dominacion entre Rachel hacia Nick '  ?   mi enhorabuena total



Author's Response:

Muchas gracias por dejar un comentario :D

Mi respuesta es... si, lo mas probable es que si. Aunque... aun sigo pensando en el como... pero ya tengo varias ideas.

Reviewer: DollSize Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2022 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 21

So so great !

Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: DollSize Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2022 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 20

This is a great great slow shrink story. Please update it often ! Poor little guy can’t help worshipping all these tall women !

Author's Response:

Thank you DollSize. I´d love to update it more often but there´s some other stories I need to give time to, still, the next chapter will be posted in just a moment. Hope you like it :D

Reviewer: DollSize Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2022 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

Just fantastic stuff love love love how slow his shrink is !

Author's Response:

Thank you! I like slow shrink too, somehow making things longer makes them more interesting, idk... at least that´s what I think

Reviewer: DollSize Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2022 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 16

Amazing so good hope he doesn’t shrink too much too fast….really wish Cynthia saw his erections n got a little more curious…like idea of her making him squirm…and so taboo he will have to keep it secret…just wish u updated it more often lol

Author's Response:

Yeah, the idea is to keep the shrinking really slow here. And I must admit that idea sounds quite good, but I already have something in mind for Cynthia and Nick... Just wait for it.

Thanks for the comment Dollsize.

Reviewer: DollSize Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2022 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

So good love the slow slow shrink….need to be reminded how Amy looks…my only complaint is it should be posted twice a week plz…too long between updates lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, sorry if it takes a little long to update, I´m currently working in some other stories as well, but you can check on them as I post the new chapter :D

Reviewer: eliwoodx Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2021 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

I'm really enjoying this story. I'd love to see Maddy continue her intimacy to break through Nick's depression. Great femdom tension so far though!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking it so far. I'll give Nick and Maddy some time alone soon ;')

Reviewer: DollSize Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2021 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 9

So so good but it’s been way too long….please post more chapters asap please please please

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Sorry if I take too long hehe, I'm working on some other stories as well. But don't worry, I'll post a new chapter by next week.

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