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Reviewer: Petite Soeur Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2022 7:16 AM Title: A New Start, A New Family

The seven month wait was worth it; I enjoyed this chapter very much. I don't know anything about the implications of Alice Succubus in this universe, but since Alice in Wonderland is the progenitor of size fetish shenanigans, I'm really looking forward to what is in store in a 3rd chapter. Will their be 'drink me' Alice titty milk that shrinks its victims? Will 'eat me' confectionery make Alice Succubus grow?


If only there's a way to increase Rodderick's chances of winning another raffle. Regardless, thank you for your hard work.



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear you enjoyed this.  Since Rodderick seems to give me some creative license with these, I could probably get away with Alisha developing breast milk that shrinks people, maybe after her transformation into a 'True Alice'.  As for what an Alice Succubus is, essentially they represent 'purity' and 'innocence' without realizing that they crave sex and mens' 'life essence'.  After sex, they forget the act but not what was said during it and revert back to being a 'virgin'.  Gotta say, the MGE author is creative.

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Date: October 09 2021 3:25 PM Title: Big Things Come on Small Packages

It's going to be sad if all of the effort to world build and set up the character's background and personalities ends with this single chapter; it felt like 20% or less of the story was spent on size smut. Well, crossing my fingers Rodderick manages to win another commission raffle and asks for a continuation, or whatever else it would take for a second chapter somehow happens.



Author's Response:

I will admit that I got a bit carried away witht he world building on this one lol, I was just having so much fun combing through the lore of the setting.  Rodderick has said that I set everything up perfectly for a sequel, so if he wins again, maybe he'll be more inclinded to request one :D

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